Rishabala OS: Pirates Of The Caribbean

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Zoya2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Beautiful Story 👏 👏

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TRPS

@TRPS

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

very beautiful and different os and adorable too.i was thinking it as a adventurous one from the title and it appeared as a very lovely and cute one.very nice.
And didn't find madhu annoying.she was really adorable. perfect match for balancing rk's expanses. Afterall this the reason for accepting his prayer by god. Don't mind last line.haha...

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.PassionateLuv.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

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k.atrina75

@k.atrina75

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

NOOO.. why is this story over!!!!
it was sooo beautiful.. plzzz lazy I want more... I can almost cry like a baby for a continuation...

I loved the play on the word 'came'.. even I didnt understand it for a few seconds...

and RK's prayer in the end... an innocent child's prayer has such an effect.. well not that much of innocent.. "Dirty People!"

and the way their bond grew was great...
but i want to see how Madhu reacts when reminded of this childhood incident...