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Shriya kadge

@shriyakadge

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Sorry wrong comment 😕

Edited by shriyakadge - 10 years ago

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Shriya kadge

@shriyakadge

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: noiseygirl
where shri?

Sorry actually i posted my new os here by mistake 😆 so i edited my above comment

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.PassionateLuv.

@.PassionateLuv.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

superb for first time shriya(Sncc) 👏
Both of u did awesome job..claps for both of u 👏
Thanx for pm 😃
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Swati

@PRATHA1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

This combo story is awesome Shri & Shriya!
Started with cute childhood friendship, then apart from each other! Rishab's pain which made him arrogent! Madhu's humiliation by RK, which was result of his pain & anger! RK's jealousy! Poor Karan unnecessary got punch by RK! Finally beautiful love confession!
Thanks for pm me!

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

8th std shriya & 9th std shirya - u guys did an amazing job!!

u both have written a beautiful story together!!

i'm so glad shriya helped u in writing a story on ur own shriya!! now i hope u got the confidence to write more stories!! do write more bcos u r good in writing!!

well, now few the story,

u guys have nicely shown the period gapes but one thing was shocking fr me was madhu started loving her rishu at age 10 itself huh?? okay! puppy love LOL!!

i loved their childhood the most!! their hide & seek play & their promise everything!! when they grow up madhu became spineless & Rk became senseless!! yes, why i'm saying this is bcos madhu was humiliate by Rk beyond limits!! mainly when he insulted while she proposes it brought tears in my eyes!! in that moment i wished madhu to slap Rk & but not accept karan's proposal!! if the ones we loved didn't love us doesn't mean that we should choose someone that makes our love fake so madhu's stand & refusal to karan's proposal was justifiable!! poor karan, i liked that guy!! he's such a sweet guy who doesn't hurt her friend & respected her feelings & in fact he was the one who encouraged madhu to confess her love!!

okay, now coming to Rk, yes he is senseless. he know madhu told her situation clearly before leaving him!! she didn't escape from him but her situation forced her, right? i know after missing her friend & father he became introvert & arrogant person but that's not the way to treat anyone especially if the person was once ur friend!! in ur anger he deeply hurt madhu but glad her love is so strong for her that's y she didn't get angry on him & understood his situation!! lucky Rk, he got an chance to apologies!!

u guys have beautifully portrayed their characters & nicely shown the difference in them from past to present!!

good job dearies!!

sorry babies, if i criticized the leads a lot but its just that no one should treat anyone like rk did like calling benji & all & no one shld be like mahaan madhu too!! LOL

u said it's a OS but it turned out to be four shot LOL!! it was going on & on but i love reading long stories!!

thanks for the 2 pm's from my two lovely sisters!!