Rima Os - I have always loved you.

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Samudrika

@SharonMD

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Agn a sixer by Shriya Dis... The begining and end stole my hrt. Actually the whole os stole my heart. Please do write more.

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bhavnajaiswal

@bhavnajaiswal

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Really Nice n Wonderful story 👏🥳👍🏼

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bhavnajaiswal

@bhavnajaiswal

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Good Going Guys for your Combo OS n wonderful writing understanding between both of u dear 👏👏👏

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bhavnajaiswal

@bhavnajaiswal

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Thanks for sharing n pm me 😳😛😊

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shruthi murali

@shruthi14

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Awsome os both the shriya !! It was just cute one !! U cud have shown madhu lil bit angry with him as he called her behenjii !!Ahaan rks dialogue she is mine only mine was too good !! Poor soul karan did not get madhu and got beatings fron rk also !!lol keep on writing shriya and thanks for the pm !!

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Beautiful os.

First felt bad for Madhu and then I was angry at her for confessing knowing it well that RK will humiliate her. But all was well at the end.

Very well written parts.

THanks for the pm.

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

both of u did a brilliant job

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silent.desire

@silent.desire

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

I loved Karan a lot in this story and felt bad that he got bitten up with no reason. RK deserve a solid punch. Just a small thing - Till end I felt RK didn't deserve Madhu so easily and he was needed to retaliate a bit before getting her back. All rest was nice. Keep it up and thanks for sharing. 🤗 I wish I could know what happened to Karan after that? 🤔

Edited by beautiful_heart - 10 years ago

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noiseygirl

@noiseygirl

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Both of u m angry...😡 How could u do this???
Congratulation both of u specially Shri (SNCC) as her 1st work
I love it
Poor Karan got beaten by RK
Such a cute story
Hope U will come again 2gether
Superbbb work
well done