RishBala MiniFF: Running Away, Or Running Into? #2

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mayuri103

@mayuri103

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#711

awesome dear...loved it...finally rk got some sense and he made a move...u have described both their thoughts beautifully...waiting for next...continue soon..

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Sid

@ColdEnchantress

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#712

Originally posted by: Temptations.

HAHAHA, but hey he already lost his virginity to that bitch first wife of his! He just hadn't taken the initiative before🤣

Haa that time his ijjat was lootofied na 😳 🤣

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#713

Superb update as usual.

Finally RK opens up.

loved both pov's.

Hope from here on RK remains positive. Liked his dream too.

Thanks for updating in between your exams. All the best!

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Shivangi.

@caffeineaddict

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#714

Originally posted by: Directioner1D

Haa that his ijjat was lootofied na 😳 🤣

Yeah...poor my RK🥺

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Sid

@ColdEnchantress

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#715

Originally posted by: Temptations.

Yeah...poor my RK🥺

How dare she 😡 Only we have the right to lutofy RK's ijjat 🤣🤣

And tonight we'll do what we are best at *wink* 🤣

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ARMB

@ARMB

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#716

Awesome update :-) Finallyyy Rk realized what he was going to loose... And he trust madhu now thank God... :)

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Ni33

@Ni33

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#717

Wonderful update Shivu.

You portrayed their feelings and insecurities perfectly.

Actually I didn't thought that RK would give in so fast, trusting Madhu and admitting it to her. But then again 6 months leap so it kind of make sense that Madhu had a chance to penetrate his tough layer of selfpity and protection.

But there is one thing I absolutely didn't see coming they sleeping together.😆

Okay maybe not that. But RK didn't to that Before, meaning he didn't have that kind of relationship with Anjali. Making Madhu even more happy that they experiencing this together. And that he didn't have any other woman than her.

Besides I'm so happy that Radhaji's friends came over.😆 Otherwise RK wouldn't admit what kind of meaning Madhu has in his life nor them spending the night together.

I wonder what kind of a twist will this bring to Madhu moving to Sydney. Will RK show his possessevness once again, hindering her to move. Or would he move with her to Sydney?

Thanks for the update and for the PM.

Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago

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tvcv

@tvcv

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#718

Lovely update dear !!!

You depicted Rishab and Madhu's inner feelings ,turmoil ,pain wonderfully.👏👏

Biwi's blasting had an amazing effect on Rishab !!!

He finally came out of his I-am-so-bechara land...yippee 🥳🥳

The most amazing part was that he again started trusting...

Hope this positivity stays with him !!!

Hey couldn't understand why Rishab was claiming that he hasn't done it before . Was he a virgin ?😉😉😉

Now that the dimension of their relationship has changed what will Madhu do ?

Will she shift her base or will she stay back?

Or even better Rishab should go along with her !!! 😳😳

Eagerly waiting for the next update...

Keep up the good work 👍🏼 and pat yourself on the back for writing this beautiful story.

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mahimesha

@mahimesha

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#719

awesome update...😃
loved it...😉
finally Rk opened up to her... 😃and the update was really surprising..😉
finally they are together as husband and wife ...😉

can't wait for the next update. wanted to know their reaction on first day after their union 😃

want rk to hold her back in house and with authority tell madhu that my biwi is not going anywhere 😃