RiMa SS: Crave For Love.. part 21:page 57.(29/5)

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi
Wonderful part yaar... Never thought rk hv a very sad past.. His father betraye his parents was killed n his sis don't know what happened... Madhu realize his pain support him n boost him to find justice fr his parents... Kushi such a sweetie pie... Finally madhu n her family off to their home town fr her bro wedding n rk stay back.. Wondering what work... He still can't fully realize his feeling fr madhu... Like Natasha says... The distance will make him realise his feeling...

Thank you dear for this veiw...!!!!😳😳 let's see what happen when they will be effevt of distance...!!😉😉

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: as-Sweet
Rk has little sis bt he doesnt knw where she is alive or dead..& i wonder by readng this updt can anyhow miss.Radio is his lost sis..Rk now will feel the void when madhu would went to village...Well written dear..Thanks fr double update..!! Cont. Soon :))

Well everyone is wondering this about his sis...let's see what will happen...!!😉😛

Your welcome dear...and once again thanks... I will try my best to update soon!!!!

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@bevi-najim

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Posted: 9 years ago

#273

Finally our wait is worth able dear

Two updates in one day love it for that darling

Coming to the updates

Very emotional update

In the age of 9 rk saw his father is hanging to death omg

I really felt his pain

I have a doubt whether little ratio is rk's little sister?

Even have doubt on Malik is behind Rk's parent death or main villain is some one who is yet to come

ok waiting for u coming updates to get my answer

And wow rk start to realizing his love for madhu

Waiting for more

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#274

Superb update

Rk's past was too painful

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parimaniya

@parimaniya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#275

hey welcome back dear n glad that u updated n that to 3 updates in 1 go o my my...simply superb n love u for that...thank u sooo much...4 updates its awesome as usual...really feel bad 4 rishabh...he suffered so much in young age...bt finally he open his heart 2 his love of life...love madhu so much...she understand him without word...so madhu was going n rishabh going 2 realize his true feelings 4 madhu, finally...bt when vl she realize d same...waiting eagerly 4 that...cant wait 2 know how rishabh n madhu feel when they was not 2gether,,,,pls dear update soon...

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: manna43
Love the updates. First one is emotional . Rk suffered a lot.where is his baby sister.
Rk get family in his crystal n ms.radio. He gonna miss them.what work is rk have.is this related to red file or some other thing.
Want to know plz update soon.

I am glad you love it!!!!😳😳 you will get answers soon hopefully...!!!😛😛 thank you for comment...

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: bevi-najim
Finally our wait is worth able dear
Two updates in one day love it for that darling

Thanks di...I m glad...😳😳

Coming to the updates
Very emotional update
In the age of 9 rk saw his father is hanging to death omg
I really felt his pain
I have a doubt whether little ratio is rk's little sister?
Even have doubt on Malik is behind Rk's parent death or main villain is some one who is yet to come
ok waiting for u coming updates to get my answer
And wow rk start to realizing his love for madhu
Waiting for more

Keep waiting for little more time you will get your answers slowly...😛😛

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#278

Hello people... Me here again to disturb you...😎 kindly bear me...😆

A big big thanks for your support... Love you guys... The only reason I am continuing this story is you...

Here is the next part...

Part 14...

Madhu...

Looking back at those days feelings like my life has totally changed... My love... From whom I want to ran away he stand with me by each passing minutes having a beautiful relation of friendship... Having all the fun with him... And sharing happiness and pains together... Make our bonding more strong...The game of life... To whom I want to forget after realizing my love for him... Now he becomes more important in my life... The friendship has changed so many things...!!!!! Now I cannot even think of losing him...

My love for him increase by each passing day... I am at a place where I have fallen badly in love with him but there is no chance to get him as a love... Of course I can't snatched once love being selfish... Only I know how I have controlled myself... When I was tooo near of him and cannot even express my feel for him... Why... Why this happens too me...????

There is nothing that I am not happy with him as a friend but the love for him making me weak...!!! And I ended up ...!! Worst thing I hadn't share this feel with anyone...!!!! Don't know what will happen!!??? Just leaving with hope that our friendship will not broke and there will no time comes like I have to leave him... Just wishing to god please don't separate us... Not as love but for friendship sake please don't make us apart... I am happy with this friendship only tooo!!!!!!!

Praying to god closing the eyes I put on blanket... As soon as I closed my eyes his face came into view of the last met... Where he said bye... Sadness was reflecting... He was sad... Even me too not liking that in this days when he is missing his family very much I am leaving him alone... But having no other option I am here just praying for his best...!!!!

Anyways the journey of train was really long and its gonna end soon...!!!! Best thing is that I m gonna meet Viv... Yupppsss!!!!! He is best of my friend and of course the boy... Misha...!!!!! The excitement is very much after all its my brother's wedding... Hope all goes welll...

"Madhu!!!!!" I heard mom shout... I peeped down side as I was on upper birth... Mom looked at me... "Ye koi sone ka time hai... Come down... We are reaching the station just in five ten minutes...!!!" Ohhh...shoottt... I sat back in excitement that finally reached to place...

I climbed down and set my clothes and went to wash my face... Kush came there with a little hand bag in her hands... I looked at her but then continue splashing water on my face as I am feeling too much sleepyyy!!!!!! She patted on my back and I turned around wiping my face... "Kya hua Khush...??"

"Midhi tum Bhai ko miss kar rahi ho na!!!???" She asked looking straight at me... I gave her look... Why is she asking this question...??? I replied in hmmm... Looking other side... So she too looked away and said "Me bhi miss kar rahi hu... WO hote to aur bhi maza aata na!!!??" She was bit sad... I bent a little and said " Miss little radio aap na sad si achchi nahi lagti apne Bhai ko... so aap humesha muskurate rahiye..." I tried to copy him having some idea to get her back in form...

"Midhi tum na mere Bhai ki copy nahi kar sakti aur nahi mujhe ye naam se bula sakti... Samjhi tum... WO special right hai mere Bhai ke liye... Samjhi jao.!!!" Khush warn in little angry mood... Yuppss.. Her mind got divert... "Aur me to khush hi hu to mere Bhai bhi khush hi rahenge...!!! Tum sad raho.. me chali...!!" Saying that she walked away trying to carry her little heavy bag... I laugh on her anger...

I looked out of door as there was not much crowd in that compartment and also near the gate... Finally we reached... The train start getting slow as it comes on platform... Sara di come from behind and after a while she point towards uncle who was standing on platform waiting for us... Soon the train stopped and we got down...

I looked here and there finding him... That idiot... He is coming to pick up us... But he was no where to be seen... I went near uncle and touched his feet.. Soon the other also touched his feet and He blessed us... Amar Bhai to came from behind and hug uncle...and touched his feet too... I was going to ask uncle about Viv when suddenly someone shout from behind "Madhu... Chipkali tere kapde pe!!!!!!" I jumped watching that insect and shout too much loudly pushing that away from me...

But next moment I saw everyone laughing at me... As it was artificial one... From which I got scared... And there standing Mr. Vivan... The prankster... Laughing on me...!!!!!!! I made an O shape face and ran to catch him... He ran to fast... I tried to catch him but the finally he stopped hiding behind mom... "Viv ke bachche... Tu sudhrega nahi na!!!??? Abhi me aayi hi hu aur tu shuru ho gaya tujhe na aaj maar padegi hi dekh Lena tu...!!!!" I shout trying to catch him... While he just show me tounge...

Finally mom shout to stopped us and I complaint as mom always took his side... So mom left saying don't dragged me in this drama I m going...!!!! And mom left... By the time khush came near me and offer me water... I drink a little and try to catch my breath... After that I looked at him he was still giving me his devil smile... I hit him on his hand with that bottle and guess what I don't know how but the cap was open and water fall on him... And he get drenched... Now I laughed on him... Saying now points are qual...

But I knew what is coming next so I ran away this time... But soon he catches me but didn't do anything... Giving me a side hug he quickly left me and stand at a little distance... He knows me perfectly... The he finally asked "kaisi hai tu pagal...???" I made a bad face hearing the word but let it go after all meeting after too long and not having strength to argue... " Me to thik hu... Tum batao Mr. Prankster...??" I asked cheerfully...

He replied and then Suhani comes there... And stand besides me... "Kya ho raha hai?? And ye hai tumhara best friend..??" She doesn't knew about Viv... So I dicided to introduce them... I nodded to Suhani and looked at Viv... Who was staring at Suhani... Without even a blink... I shake him little and he came back in reality don't know where was he lost...

And then he his own offered his hand and introduce himself saying "Hi... I m Vivan and you???" Suhani looked at me then turning to him... She hold his hand shaking it while replying " I am Suhani... Nice to meet you!!!" "Tum logo ka intro section pura ho gaya ho to ghar chale ya yahi station par hi rehna hai...!!" Sara di came there shouting... We nodded and made our way to home...

We sattled in a car... Where I ,Suhani and Amar bhai sit on back seat and Vivan sat on front seat so can guide the way... It was dark outside... So we sat getting bored... Bhai was busy with his phone as there was some problem and Suhani was sitting with closed eyes... I looked at Viv who was busy in arranging the mirror continuously... Finally he left the mirror being satisfied with it... But I noted something...!!!! ;)

"Waise Suhani... Tum is pagal ki friend kaise ban gayi??? Use jhelna itna aasan nahi hai... Well must say you are very brave.. I am sure waha bhi iske tumhare alawa aur koi friend hoga nahi... So you are managing her alone...wow!!!" Said Vivan... I made a face but didn't said anything... Suhani replied back "thanks Vivaan... And yes you are right... Ise jhelna mushkil hai...!! By the way same to you... Aap bhi to jhelte hai ise...!!" I hit Suhani on her hand hearing her reply and said "hahaha... Very funny..!!!" ... And watched both of them laughing on me... Then heard Viv saying " Call me Viv... And please no aap...!!!!!!" I looked at him... Who looked away then turned to other side.. Sitting normally...

They continue their chat having fun of me... But I choose to stay silent... As I am feeling sleepy and it will take time to reach home... So I closed my eyes... But after a little time hear bhai's argue tooo... He said " tum dono se jyada use koi aur jhelta hai...!!!" My eyes get opened hearing him... I knew about whom he is talking... I looked at Suhani who got about whom Bhai is talking just then Viv asked who...?? And Suhani replied "Her Star... Mr.Rishab...!!!!"

Scroll down for more...!!😳😳

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#279

Rishab..

Now a time I am feeling irritation by myself... I mean this kind of feel experiencing first time... Whenever I went to do something or try something... My mind just recall one thing... Wait not thing... Person... Ms.Crystal... I haven't feel like this before... I mean this much missing to someone... Feeling like I have gone mad...!!!!

Means its a whole day left and not a single moment passed when her thought didn't came in my mind... Last night after dropping her at station when I came back to home... From dinner to sleep and even at morning time I woke up missing her... That if she was here... She would have called me to woke up...!!! An unknown and little hurt being far from her... But why...???? Is that really what love is!!??

God..!!! Please help me... Still there will be fourteen days which I have to spent without her... And I m just missing her from day one!!!!!! Huhhh... I should more focus on my aim other then this thought... Its the only way...!! I can divert my mind...!!!

But first I have to do one thing!!!! I have to talk to uncle... Mr.Malik..!!! He has to reply me now... From the day the file came in my hand I want to talk to him but just waiting for the moment...!!! Now I am going to talk to uncle... Hoping that what I am thinking that must be true...!!!!

I knock on door and uncle asked me to come in saying " Tumhe permission ki kya jarurat hai Rishab??? You can come whenever you want!!!!" I smiled at uncle and sit in opposite side of him... He was reading a file...!! I waited for him to complete his reading!!!! Then after a while uncle stopped and put the file away... And asked me...

"Tell me beta... What is the problem??? Me tumhe itne dino se notice kar raha hu... Is there any problem you are having!???" For a moment I stayed silent thinking of should I doubt him...???? Then quickly my heart dinies it... No he can't do this... I trust him... And that file didnt mention his name anywhere or something related to him... But still have to ask... "Bolo Rishab!!" He insist me again...!!!

I take a deep breath and asked finally "Uncle... Me janta hu I don't have right to ask but still kya me jaan sakta hu ke last kuch years me koi aise person ne yaha work kiya tha Jo abhi yaha nahi hai...??? I mean this is little firm... And people looked like had been working since long.. So can you tell me if you remember anyone as such who left this firm???? I am sure there wont be more such people!!!! Please uncle!!??" I finished hoping that he tells me truth...

He quickly replied "Nahi Rishab... Yaha to aisa koi nahi aaya tha... In fact all the peoples working here are from the first... But still I will check once... But why are you asking this question??? What happen..???" He asked with a concern... I was surprised by his nature means I didn't have expected this straight answer from him... Obviously his answer without a first question show his trust on me... But why he is having trust!!!

"Rishab... Agar ye soch rahe ho ke mene itni easily answer kaise kar diya... To ek baat yaad diladu... Tum mere best friend ke bete ho... And I am having no kind of doubt on you and on him...!!! But please tell me what is bothering you... Why you are asking this things!!!" I was so much confused don't know what to say and do...!!!! Should I tell him about my family???? But what if there will be adverse reaction of this come??? Then finally I ended up on not telling him...

" Uncle...its about my family... I will tell you soon... As right now I am too much confused... And have to find out some thingss... So that is why I was asking questions... Please trust me... I am having no bad intentions but I need a little time... I will tell you the truth soon...!!!" I stayed quite... He stand up from his place and came near me... Putting a hand on my head he blessed me saying don't worry... I trust you...!!!!

Then uncle ask me about some other work related to our business... I know its for my mind diverting... I start reading a file which he was reading when I came in and started noting down some points... He too got busy in his phone...

An hour passed and I put a repot file having important points at one place and place it on table... Just then the phone buzzed... Uncle was not there... And I saw the caller ID its showing "home." I thought its from aunty... It rang again... So finally I picked up the call... And as soon as I put it on ear huge complain attacked on me which is actually for uncle...

"Kya papa... Pura din khatam ho gaya... Ek baar bhi call nahi kiya... Me aapse bohot naraz hu... Ek baar aap yaha aaiye phir me aur khush aapko punish karenge... Hum dur jate hai to aap to hume call hi nahi karte wait call to dur ki baat miss hi nahi karte honge!!!!!!" And finally she stopped... I was silent hearing HER voice after a whole day... And by god what an energy... I smiled like an idiot when she start again on phone "Sorry dad... But please kuch to boliye... Me to bus aapko miss kar rahi thi...!!"

I take a deep breath hearing her plead like voice.. And finally replied "Uncle bahar hai Crystal... Me Rishab bol raha hu...!!!!" With that just one word I heard from her which is just "Star...!!!!"

To be continue when I will get time... Till then... Please ek achcha aa view... Containing what ever you feel for this chapter please... Be honest...

Love you...

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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

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Posted: 9 years ago

#280

Nice update. Both rishbala are missing each other crazy. I guess shamsher is some how connected to rk's parents death. I do hope rk visits wedding soon so he could meet madhu. Will be eagerly waiting for rishbala moments.

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