RiMa SS: Crave For Love.. part 21:page 57.(29/5)

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BEEVI

@bevi-najim

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Posted: 10 years ago

#251

Lovely update

Wow how sweet madhu understand rk very well

Really she is the angel but I am having this feeling that rk going to hurt her

Very badly I don't know why ?

What happen to rk's family ?

Did any one from madhu's family hurt them?

In one update padmini said that in madhu's past life something had happen because of that she is afraid to go out alone what happen to her?

Whether madhu's past incident has something with rk's family death ?

Ok I become question queen

I'm very much eager for further updates

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Posted: 9 years ago

#252

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nice story...
loved this rishbala so much and also kush...
plsss dnt stop this story in middle... dnt hang all this story readers in air :-p
waiting for ur new update..

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Aaniya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#253

Plzzz update dear... Waiting :))

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Anitta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#254

pls update soon...
loved ur concept

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#255

So sorrry peoplesss... m not able to writing anything in this busy schedulllss even though i want it;!!!!!!!!!! so sorry dear!!!!

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chitraP

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Posted: 9 years ago

#256

Very emotional episode. Madhu easily identify the feelings of rishabh whether it is sad, hurt happy. You explain their routine life neatly. The names angle, crystal, radio simple and sweet. Nice episode. Thank u.

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Jyoraj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58
So sorrry peoplesss... m not able to writing anything in this busy schedulllss even though i want it;!!!!!!!!!! so sorry dear!!!!

it's o.k.

do continue when you get time.

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#258

Hello people... Me once again here...

I know too much late... but what to do!!!??? This schedule...🥱🥱

Here is the double chappy update...

A big big wala thanks to my Billu... (My_VivJaan)

Hope you like it...

Note... For the first time I am writing something like this so please don't make your expectations high... Means mujhe ye part likhne me bohot mehnat lagi... Still koi confusion then you can ask.. I will try my best...

Here it goes...😛

PART 12 & 13...

Rishab...

Knock on door made me came out from my thoughts and found her again!!! "Bahar chale!!" She asked... And we get on place where we stayed every evening!!!!

We step ahead... But I don't feel comfort there... I stayed there and then we decided to sat on ladder not on the upper terrase!!!

Once we settled I looked around not getting what to do!!! She looked at me continuously and feeling her gaze I turned to looked at her... One look at her and it clarify her concern for me... I felt good finally having someone in life who cares for me!!! I smiled at her and what returns her smiling face as I marked shining crystal of my life!!!!!

" Pata hai Star!!! Hume humesha lagta hai... Hamari problems koi samajh nahi sakega aur Jo samjhega wo sympathy dikhayega and with this thought we stop ourselves to share our feel... And after a time come when we will feel so much exhausted having no one in life to share and think that if we had shared at the time... We might not be feeling the same... The person will understand us if we trust them!!!" She said all this looking around... I got her meaning she wants me to open up... The reason she states is same but still I am having battle inside by sharing this period of my life...

"Ek baat puchu aapse???" She asked me when I was lost in thought to decide what to say... I looked at her and gave permission by small nod!!! "Do you trust me???" Her question confused me... Why is she asking like this... Of course I trust her... Although she is one whom I trust this much in my life dont know why!!!!!!

"Of course Crystal!!!!" I said firmly putting my palm on her... Feeling my touch she looked at me but didn't take my hand back... " so phir kya aap apne friend se aapki dil ki baat share nahi kar sakte... Trust me you will feel better... I promise aap ko me koi question nahi puchungi... Aap ko Jo batana hai bataiye... But don't stay like this... Please for our friendship sake...please!!!!!" She request putting her other palm on mine... I stared at her and wonder what is the reason behind this pleading...???

Her straight look in my eyes and hand on hand gave me strength and I finally decided to share it!!! I closed my eyes taking a deep breath and finally starts,"That day was end of my happiness my smile my life... Everything got snatched away from me... I can't forget it... the worst memories of my life which I always rememorize in my nightmares..."

"That day I was playing with my little Angel sis and Mom was cooking our favorite lunch just than papa rushed inside house in bad condition... He was tensed, very scared and sweating profusely... He shouted mom's name hearing out him mom ran outside in hall where we both were playing with toys..."

" Papa start spokeing ''they all are rascals gaytri... They ditched me... Intentionally confined me in this illegal drug dealing... What I will do now?? My pharmaceutical firm... My hardwork everything will be destroy... They are planning to kill me gaytri.. Becoz I had refused to work with them...'' I heard my pleading papa with teary eyes I didn't got everything what he said but I knew his life is in danger he was crying and mom was crying too..."

" They sat on sofa like forever just praying to God... After that papa opened his briefcase taking out a red color file and handed to Mom saying ''hide it at some safe place they might come at home... I will try to talk them or distract them and getting a chance will expose them this file have all the proofs to save our deteriorating life...'' Mom took that file and went inside bedroom... "

"At night everything was okay we were having dinner in light atmosphere and a bang on door panicked us... The loud sounds got more louder papa slowly went to open door... Just in a moment so many goons rushed inside our house pointing gun at papa's head... Mom started to shout and cry... My little sister cried too but they didn't showed any mercy..."

" They dragged papa inside bedroom I tried to stop them fought with them but I was weak a 9 year old weak boy nothing happened... They tied papa's neck and hanged him with fan... I cried shrieking seeing papa losing his life so painfully like a fish without water... A man who had caught me I bit on his hand in response he pushed me so hard I thud with wall injuring my head and loss my conscious for last time saw my papa dyeing... Mom and little sister crying in pain..."

"Next day when I woke up police was hovering before me I called out mom but her reply didn't came... Sitting back fully conscious saw two bodies before my eyes those were of my parents they killed my mom and papa... Snatched my whole life and my little sister she got vanished in that night no news came about her..."

" I tried so hard to make the investigators understand that it was murder but they didn't hear me... Don't know some kind of proof they state there was chit in which there is writing of my dad about committing suicide and admitting his fault of involvement in drugs dealing..!!! I shouted denying all their talks... I rushed to check that file... To find it... May be I get something .. But tooo my bad I could not find it!!!!!"

" Later on I realized that its their dirty game... Some of the officers are included in it tooo... No one comes to my help when I cried... All the relatives became senseless.. Even my uncle... Who always treat me as his own son didn't bother to come once to check upon me... Our house get sealed our factory get sealed and I was transferred to orphanage...!!!"

"I get destroyed... They snatched my parents and my little angel my sis too... I left here all alone in this big world... Just those dreadful memories are still here which always haunt me... Why crystal why... What was the fault of us..?? Why they do this to our life???? Why God do this to me... Don't I deserve anyone... Don't my family deserve that life... Why they left me here??? Why there is no one remain for me????" Asking this question once again I broke down in front of her...

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Midhi...

His break down scared me...and all of sudden he hugged me cryingly... After a momente too hugged him loosely... Tears were flowing from my eyes hearing his words and watching his situation... How much he suffered is I can't even thought... His each word is reflecting his crave... His crave for his perfect life as a son and brother... How much he is craving for love in this whole time period...

"You are here cause you have to punish them Star!!!!" Finally I said this words not having other words in mind...he broke the hug realizing our state... Me too was having awkwardness by this moment but that was not important... I looked straight in his eyes... Then hold his both of the palm... He stared at me... And I start again "Yes..you have to delivered justice to them.. Those people deserves death... And one more thing You are not alone here... Me... Dad and whole family is with you... You are having family star...you are not alone... Samjhey aap...We are with you..." He gave a small nod...

The sun start setting now the time... The whole sky was coloured orange.. We sat there for some good minutes... Then thinking something I release his hands.. stand up and started to go inside his room... And asked him to stand up tooo!!!!

He do as I say... We came in he straight go towards washroom to get fresh once again...

Me too came out and wash my face with the help of tap.. Which is there for plants... I splash water two and three times and finally felt bit better... And moves forward when Khush came there on terrace door...

She looked me carefully... Don't know what is going through her mind... Then she asked "Midhi.. Bhai tumhe apne kamre se nikal diya kya...?? Yaha mooh kyu dho rahi ho??? Wo bhi is time??" The little radio bombard her questions... I think a little then replied " Aisa kuch nahi hai... Meri marzi.. Mujhe yaha mooh dhona tha!!!"

She chuckled hearing my reply then dragg me towards the inside the room... As we step in Star settled on bed cleaning his face... Its good that khush didn't see our crying otherwise it will be difficult for Star...

Then once agin brother sister start their chit chats... Watching them talking I remember his talk about his sister... I wish he will get her tooo soon... Pray for his little sis... I decided to left them alone and went down... And make a turn... When miss radio shout...

"Midhi stop!!!!!!" I turned around and asked what... While she replied to me putting her hands on hips bit angrily!!! " Tum humesha bhaag kyu jati ho hame chod ke..?? Ruko yahi abhi hum saath chalenge.. Okkk...!!" She said as all ordering me...

I flared up... I decided to tease her making her angry... And went towards her she was sitting on bed near her brother... I stand there having good distance... "Khush tu meri mumma hai kya jab dekho tab mujhe datti rehti hai!!! Kyu sunu Teri baat... Aise bolte hai rukne ko!!! Choti ho abhi.. Age me and even size me...!!"I said all this and then realize he was there tooo... I looked at him he was having a cute little smile watching khush cutiee expression... I feel lighted after see him like this...

Then my attention goes towards Khush who was now standing on bed having same angry pose and start again... She looks so cute that I just want to pull her pluffy cheeks... "Me choti... Me choti hu... Dekho me badi ho gayi!!!" She clarify the reason of standing there!!! She was once again scolding me but her gestures and cute poses made me laugh from inside still I tried my best to be stand as angry as I am enjoying her angry mood and Star's lighten state...

"Tum badi ho tumhe samjhna chahiye na ke me choti hu to mere liye ruko... Jab dekho tab bhaag jati ho... Kante(throne) hai kya mijhme ha.??? Batao batao kaha hai!!???" She start showing her hand and back asking me same question and I start laughing watching her antics... And after a moment star too joined me... We both laughed hearing her silly question and she didn't even get that I was just pulling her leg by making her angry...

By the time we finished our laughing section we watched her jumping of from bed and moving towards door... I get she is more angry on serious mode and decided to stop but before me Star reach to her and sat equal to her hight holding her hands..

. Khush looked here and there stating her anger and Start said " I am sorry miss radio... You are right... We should not laugh on you...!!!! Sorry ... Don't be angry...please.. Please!!!" Star says all this holding his ears now... Khush hugged him tightly saying loudly "its okkk Bhai!!!!"

Then they broke the hugg... I stand their admiring their relation... How this both brother sisters are... Then I went towards khush and hold my ears and said sorry... She smiled but then turned towards Rishab and announce loudly "Bhai you know... you are the best Bhai!!!!!!" I made awful face... What does she mean by that... Star was so happy to hear those words from Khush that his face reflects... But the pinch of hurt was still there... Which is oblivious after losing own sister... Before he will be again went down in past I start" Matlab hum kuch nahi hai??"

"Mene aisa kab kaha ...mene kaha mere Bhai best hai!!!" Saying that she winked and dragged Star downstairs... I thanked Khush mentally... Unknowingly but she brought Star back in his usual state!!!...

At night...!!!!

We sat on table all together even Amar Bhai was there too... I called him specially... Tomorrow is the day when we are leave for village... There is lots of excitement but still I will miss him... He and dad not coming there... Dad will come after some days but he is not coming after that tooo... Khush had asked so many times him to come with us after all its his best friend's wedding...

But no use... He stays firm on decision don't know what kind of work he is having here??!!!! I want him to come with us... Its my brother's wedding he should come.."Angel!!!!" I looked up hearing bhai's voice... I hmm in response asking what happened... He replied " kabse bula raha hu... Kaha dhyan hai tumhara??? Pass the bowl... He wants it!!!" He said pointing at star who was sitting beside him...

I gave it to him... Sara di and Piya di left ordering me to come after finishing dinner as we have to do some packing... Me too stand up not having mood to eat more!!!! Khush ran behind me shouting "me bhi aati hu...!!!" I chucked at her antics...

Till two o' clock... We do our masti... Trio of us packed our bags and necessary things... Finally we get free... I made a bad face remembering that tomorrow I have to go school too as there is last day function before mid term vacation... And Natasha had specially asked me to come... I stood up lazily and set my bed... And switch of the lights... .

Tossing from long time... Don't know why there is no trace of sleep today in my eyes... Then I hear the knock on door... Its made me more irritated... I knew its Bhai... I was just crushing him when the knock become louder and I shout "Aa rahi hu mere Bhoot (ghost)!!!!" I ran towards door and peep outside from the hole.. And finally open the door... But Star was standing there... I looked at time once again... Then he enters inside having Amar Bhai with him...

Bhai slap on my head slightly saying " Tune mujhe phir Bhoot bulaya!!!" I show him tounge "Aadhi raat ko aise aaoge to koi bhi yahi bolega ke bhoot aaya... Kyu ki aise time wohi ghoomte hai..." Hearing my words Star looked at me... And grinned... I looked at me questioningly why is he looking like this at me... "Aisa hai to phir apne aap ko kya bulaogi Crystal...Tum bhi to aadhi raat me ghoom hi rahi ho...!!" I made O shape face... Amar Bhai laughed and gave pat on shoulder appericiating him... I ran towards bed angrily and switching of the light jump on it...

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Rishab...

Till yesterday I was just thinking of my bad life.. Where I was finding each of the thing in life useless and cruel towards me... But the incident of our talk about my life and her words has changed something inside me... I get a new view to see life...

I am feeling lighted as I am felt it for the first time... And her words of being with me gave me more strength... Don't know what is happening to me but everything about her making me more and more happy... Her actions... Her talks... Her nature... Her beauty... I feel like to be always there with her... What kind of feel is this?? And is she feeling the same about me!!!??

Lost in my thoughts I get down where khush was ready for her last day of school before vacation... I wished her " Morning miss.radio...!!" "Good morning bhai... Aaj aap bohot smart lag rahe ho!!!"She compliment me as I was not in my usual school dress... Its free dress day... I bowed down my head smiling accepted her appraisal... And said thanks...

Just then piya di came out I wished her tooo... She replied me sitting on bed in hall tieing her hair... "Good morning Rishab.." .. Today all are awake...

"Riahab... Why are you not coming with us...!! Trust me it will be great fun to be there with all...!!!" She request me... Khush joined her "dekha Bhai ab to Appi bhi bol rahi hai maan jao na... Please please chalo na bohot maza aayega!!!"I looked at her cute pleading and smiled at her... "Sorry my radio... But mujhe yaha kuch kaam hai...!!!" I complete and then watch here and there trying to find crystal... As it's time to go...

"Madhu ready ho rahi hai...!!!" I turned towards Piya di who said this... Khush put her hands under chin and said in trance.."Pata nahi kitni khushi mana rahi hai WO... Abhi tak taiyaar hi nahi ho payi...!!" I get confused by this... Why she said like this... "Kis baat ki khushi??" I asked sitting beside her...

Piya di replied instead of her... "Wo bohot excited as after three years they will meet... She and her boy...!!!" They both laugh on this... Don't know why!??? And who is this boy!?? "Who boy???" I asked instantly... Di looked at me... Then said.."Madhu ka boy... Uske kuch hi friends hai... But jitne hai sab usi ke tarah pagal hai... And about boy... Let me tell you she is Misha...!!! Madhu's another best friend there... Just cause of her antics we called her "boy"!!!" I sighed in releife hearing its a girl... Why I felt so?????

Finally Crystal came out... I get mezermize to see her... Wearing chudidaar of orange and green color... Her hair was was having just few little clips... She make it loose.. Having little earning and what caught my attention... My bracelet... Perfectly shining on my crystal's hand... I samcked myself... Really My crystal!!!!!

We reach to school and as usual we get separated... I came in class after meeting my friends... All were roaming here and there... As its no class and fun day... Natasha wave her hand... And I move forward... Crystal was there with her too... As I reach there she stands up... And went out from there excusing herself... Why????

"So what to do you think about!???"Natasha asked as soon as crystal left... I get confused "about what???" "About telling her your feel... Stupid...!!!" I looked here and there... I got what she meant... According to her I m in love with crystal but I am still not having a firm decision... Is this love seriously???? She snapped her finger in front of me asking the same question... I looked around... There were few girls and boys who are in their world.. I sighed no one heard this...

"Its nothing like that... Natasha...!!" I replied... "Then what is like that... Have you ever think on how much you cared for her... What's your thoughts about her... What is your condition without her and what will be your condition in this time when she will be not with you...!! Idiot its more then friendship ..." She gave a sigh... Then chucked grinning "you know what now I won't say anything... You your own will understand in this time when she will be not there!!!"

I sat there dumbfull still thinking on it... Natasha gave me a look that "tumhara kuch nahi ho sakta..."

Madhu...

I came back to class where all were playing games having team including two teacher tooo... Natasha signed me to came there and went to sit next to her... For half and hour we enjoyed our game just then my phone vibrates... I checked it... Massage from Sara di...

Come home soon...there is lots of work...

I decided to go back... Then inform Natasha about my leaving... I looked at Star who was just looking towards us at that time sitting just next to our means in next row... Natasha said slowly... " she is leaving for home...!!" I looked at Star who nodded at me... So I left from the class... As I reach towards main road... Someone came there runningly... Ohhh.. Wait not someone.. Its him...

I knew it he won't leave me alone... I smile at him... Then we sat in auto... Thank god there is no one else... Otherwise once again will have to sit this much close... "Very excited for wedding na!!!!" "Yaaa... Much awaited day for me..!!!! And after so many years I will be with them... My boy and mera pagal friend...!!!" I looked at him who get confused may be..!!!. "Viv is my friend there... Its so much fun to be there with him... He is just crazy...!!" I said all this lost in my moments...

I looked at him... He looks sad a little... May be!!! He looked other side don't know what happens... Then I remember I have to asked something to him.. So I started..."Aap bhi aao na please star!!!!" I looked at him...

Rishab...

I smiled at her Who was having cute pleading face... Nodded nagatively refusing just by action... She made a sad face... I didn't like it but what to do... I need to stay here... Otherwise I will miss a chance... Finally we reached home and we stay apart...

Evening...

Everyone was rushing here and there to prepare everything... Soon its will be the time of their train... They will left this place for fifteen days... This thought making me feel so bad .. Just the thought is enough to made me sad ... I don't know but this is for the first time may be because I get attachment with some people... And specially with my miss radio and crystal... Will miss them all...

I looked at khush who came towards me... And action me to sit... I came equal to her hight... "Aap mujhe miss karoge na???"I was feeling too much sad looking at her sadden face... Looked around all are having gaze on us... They are sad a bit too... Even crystal was standing lowering her head... "Of course miss radio... But aap mujhe miss mat karna... Just fifteen days ki to baat hai... Then we will be together again...!!!"

Khush was looking teary... She hugged me tight and me too hugged her back... Then we parted and I asked her to give me smile and she smiled brightly... Then I stand up... Aunty hugged me tooo... And Sara di and piya di too bid bye...

I looked here and there!!!! Crystal wasn't there... I go towards room I think she might be there... And came in... She was there sitting with Suhaani... She too is going along... "You won't say bye to me.. And won't you miss me..???.!!!" I asked folding my hand across the chest...

"Of course... Will miss you.. Bye Mr.A...!!" Said Suhani... She. Called me Mr. A.. New name once again...!!! Still she was sitting silently... Shuhani went out as Sara di dragged her... We were alone there and aunty shout her name " Madhu..!!"She stand up... Passing through my side she stop and without looking at me she said " I will miss you Star... Take care...bye...!!" I got why she didn't look at me.. Her voice was reflecting her sadness... Don't know whats happening with me..

Then finally all left the place... Me and uncle decided to go to station tooo... So I went with Amar... We reach the station...

Khush was all the time playing with me.. There is time to departure so we sat on platform between the loud crowd of station... Time to time my eyes were turning towards Crystal... By now I Natasha's word start lingering in my mind again... Is it true??? The question come to my mind again and again...

She then enter inside the train with suhani... Me and Amae help all them to make sattelment of luggage and finally the announcement came... Its time to departure... I went towards door for getting down... Amar hugged me and I wished him in advance... And said sorry again as I m not able to come there in his wedding...

Crystal was standing there near door with uncle... When I reached there someone came there runninly and bumped into Crystal... I hold her tight making sure that she won't fell... She too hold me... We looked at each other... We were standing holding each other lost in others... When a wishtle sound came...

I left her making her stand properly... And finally said "Take care Crystal... Will miss you...!!!" "Will miss you tooo...!!!"Saying that she left from there... And me too get down finally...

To be continued...

Enough for today...next chappy only after getting comments as per my expectations...

Please... Give a proper veiw .. What is this "update soon!!!" At least write something about your thoughts towards this...

Thank you... (No thanks for some people..😉)