#T2- SS:'Love Starts After Marriage' pt-23 /pg.139 (15/12) - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
ni n kavya di i almost died reading ur comments so count me in if u guys r planning to avenge the talli bala n this love sick puppy
even i want that idiot love sick puppy to leave her for once
i ll be more than happy to help u both
may all our souls rest in peace
sudha dii see wat ur story did
three insane ppl died lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: NehaVdian

ni n kavya di i almost died reading ur comments so count me in if u guys r planning to avenge the talli bala n this love sick puppy
even i want that idiot love sick puppy to leave her for once
i ll be more than happy to help u both
may all our souls rest in peace
sudha dii see wat ur story did
three insane ppl died lol

Oh! That means I and Ni killed you before flying up above the sky... 🀣 We aren't just planning... WE WANT REVENGE FROM THAT TALLI BALA AND THAT FAALTU GYNAE SAHAB!!! 🀣
Our souls won't be at peace until that Talli dies... 🀣 Make RK the villain and khatam karo kahaani with my most awaited MoDha Romance resutling in one Chota Rishu in Radha's lap... 🀣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Ni33

Yeah, but the revenge must be planned Di. Or Sudha will spoil our plans.πŸ˜†

No rest until she dies.🀣 Yes, that would be a twist. Chota Rishu... 🀣
But if Madhu dies and it's a girl, they ould call the baby Madhu...🀣

Revenge is already planned Ni... We have discussed it in CC... 🀣 We can introduce our souls also as the supporters of our Villain Gynae... 🀣
That Chota Rishu is not Gynae Sahab's production re... It's the kamaal of MoDha Romance... 🀣 Gynae will get one Chota Bhai... 🀣 Talli's baby won't come in this world as per our plan... She will take her last rocking breath in Mukku wedding... 🀣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
🀣 That means we will post our part after hers so that people should also read... Our revengeful part from that Talli... 🀣
Sudha... We are coming back to avenge... 🀣
Talli... You are gone... 🀣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Ni- I will turn up the curtains at the right time... 🀣
Neha- Sudha will get one mini attack seeing the conspiracy being planned against her Rocking Talli... 🀣
Talli... Tu to gayi... 🀣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Someone got chafed... 🀣 Kahin se jalne Ki smell aa rahi hai... Gusse Mein... 🀣
Don't worry Sudhu darling, we will... Definitely spam! 🀣
And your Talli is gone now... 🀣
Main bas nahi karoongi... Jab tak MoDha aur uska result nahi mil jaata... 🀣
Tera 19 updates se humein torture karna...
Tera har update Mein bed rock karwana...
Teri Talli bala ka humein jaan se maarna...
Nahi bhuloongi main... Jab tak hai Jaan... 🀣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: madhurish


i'm not angry!!πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜†
okay spam!! but not here, come to CC!!
u will never get modha's outcome...
u will never get ur revenge...
i ll never stop showing their bed rocking...
i ll never let nothing to happen to my talli bala...

haha...jab tak hai jaan!! hab tak hai jaan!! jab tak hai jaan LOL!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Wat the eff was that🀣🀣🀣
mallik uncle y do u ask such nonsensical questions 😑
have a luk at ur damaadji 😳
does he luk sane enough to leave ur daughter alone πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
i think u shd see wat type of sticky doctor he is who cant let his wife cum patient out of his sight
causing distress to us poor readers πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ’”

arey waaah padmini mumma u r very intelligent mumma πŸ˜†
kya theek pehchaana that ur shaitaan naa not only shaitaan πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
but zarurat se zyada demanding beti🀣 have jeena haraam karo of my doctor πŸ˜†
u certainly need to take her away n teach some soberness mummyji 🀣🀣🀣
talli baby ne mumma ko baat ko seriously le liya πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ye to news ho gayi 🀣🀣
aley aley talli baby y taking samosa frm plate go sit on ur mummas lapπŸ˜†πŸ˜†n eat
n show her how happy u make ur doctor with ur biwi cum kiddo avtarπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ€£

sudha dii this is heights yaar 😭
u dnt even let our ghosts rests in peace πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
poor me nina n kavya dii 🀣🀣🀣
how r we handling so much of sweetness 🀒
ohh god this kundra😲 is to just at peaks of madness πŸ˜†
he was in love with her since she was in kindergarten 🀣🀣
had hai yaar n i wonder how come he is left outside
ispar to case hona chahiye tha for
child love πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ€£
janaab ne talli ki braid banane ke liye
mummy se especially braid banana seekha 😳😳
uppar se trish par practice bhi kiya
someone tell that poor sister that her bro was not doing it for her
but for his talli cum child lover 🀣🀣🀣

arey waah talli tu to badi chaalu nikli πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
teen saal mein hi i love u bol di thi
wo bhi superboy ki installment saath 🀣🀣🀣
tab bol di thi to ab itna bhao kyun khaa rahi
abhi bolne mein tax pad rahe kya πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

samajh gayi abhi zyada bhao de raha aur pata hai saari zindgi
sar par chada kar rakhega isliye
tarsa rahi bechare ko πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† dsudhar jao doctor ji warna pachtaoge🀣🀣
chal koi nahi doctor ji
leave her for once then see kaise daudi daudi aati hai
i love u sexy kundra bolne ko πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

tallibala cum shikayat ka pitara 🀣🀣🀣
bhai ki biwi se shikayat kar rahi
brahsht buddhiπŸ˜ƒ wont his wife tell him
that u were bitching abt him at his back
buddhu kahin ki πŸ˜†
kabhi to brain use kar πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

ohh my doctor ji y only forehead kiss πŸ˜†πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£
poora hi kar lo waise bhi i m tired of counting how many kissess πŸ˜•
u gave her in this overall update 🀣🀣
jab tak story khatam hoga
tab tak aap million to paar kar hi lenge πŸ˜‰
yaa phir kar chuke ho πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£

My ghost is also tired now of talli n her doctor πŸ˜†πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£
had hai doctor ji u r one lost case definately 🀣🀣

i want to sing a song πŸ˜†πŸ˜†ofcourse for myself

dil jud ke tootte kyun nahi
hasi aati to aansu kyun nahi
y this talli is so lucky lucky
n i m so unlucky unlucky

p.s i dnt know whether the song made sense or not
but it definately describves the situation of my heart 🀣🀣🀣
u can add more according to ur choice
nina go on add more babes u will rock it
my ghost is tired of thinking n commenting on this
sar chada sweety couple πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

take care sudha dii get well soon 😊
lagta hai talli ko theek rakhte rakhte uska asar aap par ho gaya πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
just kidding by the way dr. kundra is available definately go for treatment πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by NehaVdian - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally, I am here to comment on the bulk updates together!! πŸ˜† It's too too late but it's OK! πŸ˜† Ho jaata hai kabhi kabhi! πŸ˜†
So, I have already read the last four parts- 20, 21, 22, 23 and to begin with... here is my reaction to you Sudhu!

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My flying soul was wandering freely in the sky when it clicked to at last read these updates and to give the above reactions, it has to sit under the Neem Ka Tree to get lot pot... 🀣 But thanks to my Ni baby!! Now that Talli will accompany me to the trip up above the world so high...🀣 And then I will drop her to the Hell...!!! 🀣

Part 20-

"Radha cries on seeing Madhu at the door." Royegi nahi to aur kya karegi wo... Itni Shaanti se reh rahi thi apne Mohan Babu ke saath... Aa gayi Talli Delhi se sab kharaab karne... 🀣 Khushi ke nahi... Shock ke aansoon hai re... 🀣

"Where are Daddyji and all?" Oye Talli bala... Tujhe dekh kar uss Radha Rani ka haal bura ho gaya hai, do you want the rest to have the same? 😑 No one wants to see your Talli face! Just go and get Talli.. 🀣 Nobody needs you here...! 🀣 Especially Mohan babu... It's time for your Chota Devar to come... Rishi baba! 🀣 And you've dropped in like Bin maangi Barsaat... 🀣 It's time for you to set your Talli soul free in the sky...! 🀣

"My princess has come to glow the house in bright colors!" Exactly... this is what a light man does at the wedding places... 🀣 Le Talli... Kaam karna chahti thi na... Chal re... Lagja kaam pe... khoob saari lighting karni hai Mansion mein...🀣 Bas Radha Rani princess bolke thoda Maska maar rahi hai tujhe... Warna Pwincesss or light woman ka Matlab to ek hi hai re... 🀣 Isi layak hai ye Talli...🀣

"Call Me Maa not Auntyji!" Oye Hoye... Abhi se practice shuru kardi... Ek Beta aur bana liya... 🀣 Matlab that Gynae Sahab will have now three brothers... Sullu Pullu, Mukku Bhiyaa and Chota Rishu Baba...🀣 Waah!! 🀣

"Can't you sit with us except Trish?" Arre samajh nahi aata kya tujhe... Mukku Bhiyaa bhi bhaag raha hai tere se...🀣 Marne waali hai tu... Ye Moh Maaya Chod de Pagli Talli.. 🀣

Haww!!! No Pizza for Talli Balli... 🀣 Sab ne mana kar diya Bala ko!! No problem! I'll get you Pizza... Not one but a dozen... Jee bhar ke thoons le Talli... 🀣 (My way to take you with me!🀣)

"Hello Stranger!" Ye baat! 🀣 So finally, you have started realizing that three unrest souls are hovering around you... To Take you for the Hell trip permanently!🀣 Abhi se Gynae Man ko paraaya kar diya!! 🀣 Achcha hai... Waise bhi kaunsa wo tere bina rone waala hai Talli! 🀣

"I'll call you back." "No I will stay online!" Kyo bhaai... STD call ke paise kaun dega... Mohan babu?? Khud to kamaata hai nahi... Faaltu Gynae kahin ka... 🀣 Papa ko loot raha hai STD kar kar ke... Chal phone rakh! 😑🀣

🀣One by one, everybody is meeting to Talli...🀣 Good! Jaane se pehle sab se mil lena achcha hai... Pehle Mukku Bhiyaa... fir Trish (She also shooed her off!🀣) and then Dipu Bhabhi with Adi... 🀣 Adi se achche se mil le Talli... Tera Chota Devar Rishu Baba will also be like him only... Chotu sa! 🀣 Signature of MoDha Louuueee... 🀣

I got the trick for why this Gynae is getting too caring towards Talli...🀣 Bechaara Doctor Sahab bhi pareshaan ho gaya hai roz roz Rock karke- pehle bed, fir kitchen counter... 🀣 he need permanent riddance from that Pagal Talli...🀣 His plan is- pehle pataao-> kapde gehne deke khush karo-> and then finally... Kaam tamaam...🀣

See, I told na!! 🀣 FInally, Gynae has come to take his revenge... one for all! 🀣 Bathroom mein Talli ki leela khatam... 🀣 "Open the Damn Door!" Talli opens the door... Gynae hastens inside it, pushing her evilly in the bath tub...🀣 Takes out one iron chain from his pocket... Swirls it around his palm... Evilly smirking at the crying Talli...🀣 She is pleading- Mujhe Chod do Gynae...🀣 Gynae Man slowly approaches to her... And suddenly, wraps that chain around her neck...🀣 And tightens the grip giving her enough jerk to struggle her feet in tub water... 🀣 Choking throat.. Gynae laughing evilly... Grip tightened... And then... at last...🀣

NO NO!! What did you think Sudhu... I will kill her!! NO! 😈 She will have to pay for my demise slowly and... steadily!! 😈 🀣

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Part 21-

So finally, Talli Balaji has realized, her THE END is near! 🀣 Aaj Papaji se milne pahunch gayi!! 🀣

"Khush raho Beta!" 🀣 Kush to wo rahega hi Papaji... Talli Biwi ka Chapter close jo hone wala hai... Soon! 🀣 His hidden happiness is beyond the boundaries! 🀣 Last nght plan of his deadly bathroom torture has already worked so efficiently! 🀣 Aap to jaake apni Talli Bitiya ke haal chaal poocho...🀣 Asli haal to wo bataayegi! 🀣

Talli bani Chor! 🀣 Stealing Samosas! 🀣 Dekh le Faltu Gynae Sahab! Tere everyday Bed Rocking dosage se uss Talli ka pet nahi bharta re... 🀣 Khaana bhi chahiye usse...🀣 Apne ghar jaake teri Ijjat ka Faluda kar rahi hai teri Talli Biwi... 🀣 Now Papaji and Paddyji will think... Unki Talli ko ye Gynae kuch nahi khilata...🀣 Aur chadha usse apne sar pe...🀣

Paddy Devi in full bajaoing mood...🀣 Here Talli Bitiya rani is trying to woo with her words, Deviji is not paying any heed to her Bitiya! 🀣 "Mumma, I missed you!" "Jhoot Mat bol, Madhu!" 🀣 Le Bala... Ab to your so called Mata Pitaji also gave you the abandoning kick...🀣 Now, you just start packing for the Hell's trip!🀣

"Give me this Samosa!" "No! It's not for you. It's for my son RK!" 🀣 One more stroke by Devi Maa! 🀣 Ab to wo tujhe Beti bhi nahi maanti, Talli! 🀣 Waah Gynae Bhaai Sahab! Playing so well hunn... πŸ˜† Dheere Dheere sab kuch cheen lega apni Talli se...🀣
Now you have following members in your newly made family-

2 Mummys (Radha and Paddy Devi)🀣
2 Ullu Papaji (Mohan and Malik)🀣
1 Good for nothing Sister 🀒 (She is of no use to me!🀣)
and the drastic part...🀣
3 brothers... Sullu Ullu, Mukku Pukku and... Rishu Baba...!! 🀣

BADA PARIWAAR... SUKHI PARIWAAR... Without Balaji!🀣

"Why suddenly you quit the job?" Arre Deviji... She is going to fly up... up... up... So, moh maaya ka jaal to todna padega na...🀣 Samjha karo yaar! 🀣 Aur waise bhi, kaunsa Talli ki monthly salary ase aapko Parle G ke biscuits mil rahe the khaane ko...🀣

"Shaitaan Beti!" Arre she is more than that, Devi Maa! 🀣 Why are you insulting the innocent Shaitaans of this globe...😑🀣 Go and ask that question of happiness to your newly found Beta... Faaltu Gynae! 🀣 He will explain his happiness in detail! 🀣

"Rishabh you are happy with me right?" Kal ki Bathroom leela se pata nahi chala kya Ullu! 🀣 Itna pyaar karta hai ye Gynae ki jaan hi lelega teri ek din... Very Soon my dear Talli that you won't even realize! 🀣

Just a forehead kiss! 😲 Aye Gynae... Teri tabiyat to theek na re..? πŸ˜† Kya ho gaya hai tujhe?🀣 Itne se kaam kaise chalega tum dono ka evening tak...🀣 I thought, it's going to be the turn of the parking lot to get rocked by you both...🀣 Waise bhi sharam hai kaha tum dono mein...🀣

Arre koi Mukku Pukku ko bulaao Trish ke room mein... Tab pata chalega apni Pyaari Behna ke asli colors ka...🀣 Jab dekho shuru ho jaati hai... Itni problem hai to just kill him...🀣 Saari problem khatam! 🀣

Arre Gynae, zara apni bhookhi Biwi ko bhi kuch khila de warna Raat ko kitchen mein chori karna shuru kar degi...🀣 Chor Bala! 🀣

To So called Doctor ko braid banani bhi aati hai...πŸ˜† Saare lakshan ladkiyon ke hain iss aadmi mein...🀣 I doubt him! 🀣 Apna kaam chodke sab karna aata hai isse... Doctor bana hi kyo bhaai... Kyo intne pasie kharch kiye apne Ghonchu Papaji ke...🀣 Beauty salon hi khol leta re...🀣
Again a kiss on head top! Arre Gynae... Itna tadap raha hai to ek kiss kar he le na properly... I have already died of it...🀣

Waah waah! Talli bani bachpan ka pyaar! 🀣 Pyaar hai Bhaai Pyaar...🀣 Hmmm... Ab pata chala iss Talli ka itna kharaab dimag kaise hai... Bachpan ka asar hai!🀣 Bachpan ki bully ka badla ab tak nikaal rahi hai nalayaak! 🀣 Aur ye doctor... Bachpan se hi Tharki hai ye Aadmi! 🀣 Itne saalon ka badla ab nikaalega ye doctor!! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Sudhu, iss braid waale pyaar mein, I think you missed the rocking part...🀣 Or was it hidden behind those words...🀣 Or you left me to imagine it by myself...🀣 Guess what, I have imagined it already!! 🀣 But I won't tell you here... I am Seedha Saadha Bachcha! πŸ˜‰


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Part 22-


Finally the update marked the entry of the REAL Doctor Sahab!! πŸ˜‰ I will explain it later...🀣

"Madhu, what are you doing here?" Gynae Man started doubting on his Talli... Ye Baat! 🀣
Now this Faltu man don't trust you Balaji...🀣 What were you exactly doing with that Adi kiddo?! 🀣 Garden mein akele le aayi bachche ko... Dayaa... Pata lagaao! 🀣

Gynae wanted to wear a DRESS!! 😲🀣 So my doubt on him was correct! Doctor Sahab is not interested in wearing any Gent's stuff... His interest is in dresses...🀣 Talli... fulfill his wish and give him two three wedding gowns or lehengas...🀣 Already he has the expertise in choosing best Sarees and jewelry! 🀣 Talli... You have one Footi Kismat! 🀣

Here enters the another Ullu from this Ullu Kundra Khaandaan... Deepu Bhabhiji! 🀣 "RK I am sorry for everything!" Kisliye bhaai... Sorry kisliye!? Achcha khaasa chance mila tha tujhe Ghonchu...🀣 Gynae Akela room mein... selecting his dresses...🀣 And Talli busy in getting more Talli with your Beta...🀣 Jump on him Deepuji! 🀣 .Aisa Mauka Fir Kahan Milega... Aji Aisa Gynae Fir Kahan Milega!🀣 He won't let you get confused regarding the latest feminine fashion ever in your life Deepu!! 🀣

MoDha Romance!!?? Where the hell was it, Sudhu?!! 🀣 Do chaar gaane suna ke Romance ka lollipop de diya yaar...🀣 And you stole my Rohan's signature Song!!! It will always be ROHAN ON THE DANCE FLOOR...🀣 Sudhu... Ek wish maangi thi maine... And you again gave me Babaji Ka Thullu... Big wala! 😑🀣 You didn't even fulfill a dead soul's last wish! 🀣 Agar Antaakshari hi khelni thi dono ko to fir sabke saath he khel lete...🀣 I won't let it go so easily Sudha!! 😈 Aakhir Rishu Baba ki Zindagi ka Sawaal hai... He has to come in this Zaalim duniya...🀣 Aise he ye dono Romance karte the... to ye Gynae Sahab iss duniya mein aaya kaise re...🀣 Janta Jawaab Chahti hai!!🀣

"Mohan, aap bhi na bachon ki tarah behave karte hain!"
"Achcha! Then let's behave like adults... Radha Darling!" And Mohan pulls her closer. 🀣"Leave me Mohan! Somebody will come!!" 🀣 "Then let them come sweetheart!" And he carried her up in his arms, walking towards bed. (Though he got a severe jerk in his back in scooping 70 kg Radha!🀣 )

Saanson ko Saanson mein Dhalne DO zara... Song playing in the background!!🀣

He lovingly lays her down on the bed... Radha Rani tries to run away but Mohan ji stops her...🀣 Both closes in... And then... screen fades...🀣 Finally, they did it in the dark, Sudha!🀣 Ayega... Mera Rishu Baba Zaroor ayega! 🀣

"Band karo ye khushi ke aansoon Madhu!" Ab rok ke kya fayada Gynae Babu!! 🀣 Teri Ijjat ka faluda to wo pehle hi kar chuki hai...🀣 Ab to bas thodi si formality he kar rahi hai- to show you as the worst husband! 🀣 Par tu dukhi kyo hota hai re...🀣 Let her get satisfied... Baad mein to usse mere saath hi jaana hai na... Up... Up... Up...🀣 Tu hi to bhejega usse...🀣

"Oh Wow! Wedding photos have come!" Kahan se aayi ye photos?🀣 Did they telecast them on the TV...?🀣 Abhi thodi der pehle to TV dekh rahi thi Talli...🀣 Dayaa... TV tod ke pata lagaaoo...🀣

"... You are stuck with this damn laptop!" "I am busy with presentation!" 🀣 Jhoot bol raha hai ye Gynae...🀣 Sab pata hai mujhe... Tujhe tapkaane ki planning kar raha hai, Talli...🀣 PPT se idea le raha hai... HOW TO KILL YOUR WIFE SMARTLY?! 🀣 Talli to Gayi...🀣

Talli wants Puppy! Kyo bhaai...Bed Rock se man bhar gaya kya tera?!🀣 Now, your Gynae don't entertain you at all...🀣 Sudha... This is the change I was talking about! 🀣 This is the REAL Gynae Man...🀣 Ek aur proof aayega abhi...🀣

But Faaltu Doctor ne mana kar diya!! Hawww!! πŸ˜²πŸ˜† Na khud entertain karunga... Na kisi aur ko entertain karne doonga...🀣 He is trapping you with a full fledged plan, Talli baby!! 🀣 You just wait and watch! 🀣

Pabho is eavsdropping! Kyo re Gynae Sahab! Ab tera eavsdropping ka gyaan kahan gaya re...? 😑🀣 Bina bole he ye lady apna kaam kar rahi hai... Kya Baat!🀣 Her silence will sink this Talli Bala for sure...🀣 You have no escape door left opened, Balaji! 🀣

Waah ji Waah... Talli knows Dog's language and bite too... And Gynae knows all girly traits...🀣 Sudha... In dono ko kaha se laayi hai yaar..?🀣

And here comes the ass kicking stage of his Master plan!! Chennai trip via Chennai Express!! 🀣 Khoob dimaag chala raha hai ye Doctor!! 🀣 Go on Doctor!! 🀣 Akele jaa raha hai... Biwi ko akela chod kar...🀣 Uski request bhi nahi maan raha...🀣 D- Day is gonna come now!🀣

kkk Kill Kill...
Ddd Dill Dill...
Kkk Kill Dill...🀣

Another trait of this Faaltu Gynae came out..🀣 Laws and rules gaye tel lene...🀣 Sex revelation karne ko bhi taiyaaar ho gaya...😑 Quack kahin ka...Chal Hat! 🀣

Talli helping him in packing... O Talli Beta! Jitne pyaar se help kar rahi hai na... Utne hi pyaar se tera Gynae tapkaane wala hai tujhe...🀣 Pack your bags too...🀣 Hell mein pata nahi kya kya zarurat padegi...🀣 There aren't much shops there in the hell...🀣 I won't buy anything for you!🀣 Not even Bottles...🀣

And the second last nail in the coffin came at the door...🀣 "YOU!!!??!"
Build Up... Build Up... Build Up...🀣 Par mujhe sab pata hai...🀣 Finally... Talli ki kahaani is coming to it's last stage!! 🀣 Jai Ho Gynae Ki!🀣

Sudhu, you might be thinking about the REAL Gynae.. Right? Let me explain...πŸ˜†

In the entire update... The kissing rate was just 2...🀣 Forehead and one last so called passionate! 🀣 In whole update, Gynae didn't let her close in to him... neither did he try to do so... 🀣 He tried his best to keep himself away from Talli...🀣 He was too serious here...🀣 I won't count those smiles at all... They were lame completely!🀣 He denied every request of her... No Puppy, No Chennai, No airport! 🀣

Aap Devil Ke Peeche... Aur Devil Aapke Peeche... Too much Fun!🀣


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Part 23-


Surprise! Surprise! Surprise! 🀣

Tune Maari Entriyaan Aur Door pe Baji Ghantiyaan re... Ting Tong Ting Tong!!🀣

Jab Gaaon mein Raat ko koi bachcha rota hai, to uski Maa kehti hai- Soja Beta Soja... Nahi to Sikky Aaa Jayega!! 🀣

Oh My Sikky Pikky! Where were you? 😳 Itne din se kaha tha tu?😑 Puppy purchase karne mein itne din lag gaye re...🀣 Anyways, aap aaaye bahaar aayi...🀣

"Nice Place, very neat and clean!" Arre to place ka karna kya hai tujhe nalaayak... Paani Puri bechni hai kya? 😑 🀣 Jaldi se apna asli kaam shuru kar... My restless soul is waiting Silly Sikky!🀣 Teri ek jhalak ne hi Talli ki jhalak bigaad di hai...🀣

"Anything made out of your hand will taste heavenly, Mady!" Oye Hoye Talli Mady... Mera villain teri itni tareef kar raha hai... Aisa kya heavenly taste daalti hai tu khaane mein?🀣 Kabhi Gynae Man ne bhi tere khaane ki tareef nahi ki...🀣 Bandar Kya jaane Adrak ka swaad!🀣

Water to boil on one stove and milk to heat on other... Kyo bhaai? Cold milk can also be used to make tea...πŸ˜•πŸ˜† It won't become a "Torn Tea"🀣 I mean "Soured Tea"🀣 Anyways... Talli aur uske logics...🀣 Tabhi Gynae Sahab wants riddance from her...πŸ˜†

Uff Puppy ka Pyaar!!🀣 Ye le Talli... Jis Gynae Man ke itna chipak rahi thi usne to Puppy laane se mana kar diya but my Hawwtty Villain bought you one... Chalo Chalo... Thank You bolo Smarty ko...🀣

"My work is done here so i am leaving!" OMG! Silent Lady boli...😲🀣 Itne chapters se chup chaap kaam kar rahi thi... But I knew it! This Silent Lady will throw bomb at the right minute...🀣 Tera kaam sach mein khatam Pabby...🀣 Now my Pikky will handle her... with care!!🀣

"Crap! Why didn't I listen to my Doctor?!" 🀣 Ab pachtaaye hot kya Jab Pabby Chug gayi khet... 🀣 I won't translate it in English Sudhu... Wo baat nahi rahegi! πŸ˜†

SLAP!!!!! How dare you Talli...?? 😑 How dare you slap my Silent lady?? Thanks to my Pikky Sikky... He stopped her else Pabby would have thrown you straight into the fridge and locked it..🀣 Just give these burning touches to yourself, Bala! 😑 Feel them before you fly up above the world so high... with me! 🀣

"What do you want Sikky?" He wants one cup milk and sugar...🀣 Ullu Talli... As if you don't know! 🀣 "Get the hell out of my house!" 🀣 This was an epic dialogue!!🀣 This is what we call intuition!! πŸ˜† Talli knows her time is gonna over within minutes... Still trying to shoo the hell away...🀣 Poor Talli!🀣

"I love you Mady... I wanted to propose you during college... went to London for MBA... opted for Dad's business for you... Bla Bla Bla..." O Pagal Pikky!! Itni Ramayan suna ne ki zarurat kya hai re...🀣 MBA London bata ke zyada impression padega kya uss Talli pe...🀣 Jab wo ek Faaltu good for nothing Gynae se shaadi kar sakti hai to tera MBA kya kamaal dikha dega... Point pe aa Ullu! 🀣

"I will cut your tongue and feed it to Puppy!" 🀣 Kya tha ye...🀣 Jisne Puppy diyaa uski to beizzati kar di aur Puppy ko accept kar liya...🀣 Nautanki Talli...🀣

Puppy ko maar dala!! 😈 Now this is called Heights of Terrorism!! πŸ‘ Jiyo Sikky Jiyo...🀣 One step more to snatch Talli's breaths...😈 🀣 EK do aur stunts dikha Sikky Beta... Talli will automatically start begging for her death... DRAG ME TO THE HELL!!🀣 🀣

"Forget your love for him and come with me!" Oye Sikky! Isliye thodi bheja tha tujhe wahan...😑 Ask her to forget her love and come with ME...🀣 Hell to mere saath hi jaana hai usse...🀣

Again a SLAP!!!! Talli...😑😑 I tolerted your Faaltu tantrums with that Pabby but how bloody dare you to slap my... MY VILLAIN!!??? 😑 Dance as much as you can Talli Bala... You don't even have the idea how brutally your Kahaani will reach its end!! 😑

Arre Ghonchu Sikky! Itni Ramayan suna ne ki zarurat kya hai? 🀒 Just start your damn task, idiot!! πŸ˜‰πŸ€£ She is already not interested in your Bla Bla... her ear drums are aching in pain! 🀣 She wants to die!!🀣 "Ur husband will be flying to Chennai and you... withme to London!!" Idiot... London leja kar maarne ki kya zarurat hai re... Saara kaam yahin kar de na Pagal...🀣 Tujhse kuch nahi hone wala Pikky... Gynae aakar hi kaam poora karega! 😳🀣

First the milk splash and then hot water... Waah! 🀣 You gave my villain a hot bath, Talli!!🀣 His skin will glow like sun... Tough competition to you now...🀣 Galti kar di tune pagal..🀣

WOWW!! Pyaar ki nishaani is in danger...🀣 Finally, route is all clear for my Rishu baba's entry!!🀣 Finally... the D- moment has come Talli... 😈 Just say Tata Good Bye to all...🀣

"Rishabh... Please Save me!!!"🀣

Suddenly the door thrusts down on the floor... and there stands the Gynae Man on the door...🀣 He sees the messed up rooms and screams, "Madhu!"... Talli gives the reply..."Rishabh!!" Gynae runs towards the kitchen... Sikky notices him standing there... He stands up immediately! Gynae stomps towards Pikky man and then... Both hug tightly... And smirking!! 😈 🀣 Talli watches them shocked... "Only final punch is left...R...K..!" utters Sikky in simper!🀣 Both turn and smirk evilly at the baffled, shocked wincing Talli on the floor...🀣 "Good Byee... Bala..." Sikky whispers evilly and lefts from there... (His Exit!! 😳)
"You too were involved Rishabh!!?" Talli cries... He slowly walks towards her, bends down a little, caresses her head in smile and suddenly... pulls her up through her hair... Talli shouts in deep pain... 🀣 "Of course I was... Bi...Wi... Because I love you baby!" And he pushes her away to the kitchen counter... The chipped glass pieces on the floor prick inside her feet and she cries... 😈 Gynae holds her from behind tightly which hurts her and mutters in her ear, "Remember this counter Bala... How much desperate you were to rock this counter!!" 🀣 "Your 24x7 desperate Rockings ruined my job... my life!!!"🀣 "I talked to Sikky on phone one day after you had left his job!! And then... my master plan started!!!" He grins devilishly!! 🀣 Talli quickly turns back to him horrified... Starts stepping back from him. Gynae picks up one knife and walks towards her...🀣 "Sikky terrorized you a lot Biwi!! Just see your face baby!!" She sees the knife twiddling in his hand and suddenly... runs inside the bedroom...🀣 (I won't let her go outside the flat at all... 😈)He darns behind her and at last latches the bedroom...🀣 "Please leave me Rishabh!!" cries Talli bala, begging him...🀣 "I love you a lot!!" 🀣 (Finally the confession!!🀣) "This is what I don't want from you Talli!!" He scratches her arm with the knife in rage...🀣 He keeps on walking to wards her while she steps back... "Just because of you and your 24x7 rockings... They fired me from the hospital!!" 🀣 "You made me a Coolie, dragging your shopping bags... eating your half burnt food... you harassed me everyday!!!" 🀣 He scratches another arm... And she falls on the bed crying...🀣 "Now it's time to say Alvida... Today my revenge will complete... Madhu... Bala...!" Gynae throws the knife aside, picks up one pillow while she shouts for help... Bends down a little and at last... crushes her face beneath it harshly...🀣 "This bedroom... where it all started!! Finally, I will end it here only!!" 🀣 She struggles a lot to get free... kicking her feet... And at last... after few minutes... Talli Rests In Peace!!! 🀣🀣

TODAY I AVENGED FOR MY BRUTAL DEATH FROM THIS TALLI... Sudha!!!🀣

Kkk Killl Killl...
Ddd Dilll Dilll...
Kkk Kill Dilll...🀣

MAY MY SOUL RESTS IN PEACE FOREVER...🀣 And so do my Sisters'...🀣



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Finally! The half revenge is done!! Enjoy!!🀣
Edited by kg15 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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first of all congratz for ur new thread...
this is one of my favourite story & i loved this update...
continue soon & thanks for pm
Edited by shasha1989 - 11 years ago

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