#T2- SS:'Love Starts After Marriage' pt-23 /pg.139 (15/12) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Ni33

You know my answer on that one.πŸ˜†

Both yes and no.🀣
I want to see him in the hospital, but he has already been there so many times.πŸ˜†
But since I pestered you Before, even Neha about Madhu waking up RK with some bedrocking from his coma.πŸ˜†
It's a definite YES from me.πŸ˜†
Lets have him show his handsome body in a hospital gown. And our Biwi drool on him.🀣
I am bad afterall.😈

HI NINA DEAR
I 'M WITH U BUT I THINK WE R LOSING πŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
i guess i should end the poll (not exactly) here itself bcos i got my answer now itself!! many are against the plan!! okay fine!! now i'm a chameleon LOL!! i will jumb to other side!! if no accident then no confession any sooner!! i took pity on Rk & thought to make madhu confess but not now LOL!! so i ll almost go with my plan A which i have planned originally but still u guys have time for 5 days so can suggest!! keep suggesting!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Part 16- Vallah! So my prediction got right here... She was upset with her broken dream... πŸ˜† Superb imagination... I have got! 🀣 But the best thing that cracked me up badly was... Her question for not getting preggy even after the Rocking deeds continuously for months... 🀣 Madhubala Beta, ye to main kabse suggest kar rahi Thi... Jaake Kisi achche Doctor ko dikha,.. Itna Rock karne ke baad bhi ka nahi ban raha... Daya... Zaroor Kuch to Gadbad hai... 🀣 Sudhu, I had even started doubting on RK... You know for what! 🀣 I was just imagining, if THAT actually happens then what would be the story like... 🀣 Saari story Ki band Baj jaati... 🀣 Fir to kahaan ka Love, kahan Ki marriage... 🀣
"Good Gynaecologist!" Even I would go with Madhu... She needs one now... 🀣 Mr HeroJi... Itne months se Rock Shock karne ke baad bhi you didn't bother ke iska effect ho kyo nahi raha Tha... Have you become Ullu like your Sullu Pullu? 🀣 OK! I won't scold you much else the TM will start crying... 🀣
When that sonography was going on, I was like- Kahin ye dono yahi pe shuru na hojayein??? Inn dono ka koi bharosa nahi hai, boss! 🀣 Especially the Heroine madam... πŸ˜† I won't comment on the process you explained... πŸ˜† You know na, I am damn innocent and Seedha bachcha for that... 🀣
Oho... Madhu ji crying for family! Kya zarurat hai yaar... Tumne bulaya bhi nahi aur Wo chale ayenge... 🀣 The moment Radha Paddy duo got to know, I was sure- Ab to poora Khaandaan pahunchne wala hoga wahan... PDA is on the way, folks! 🀣 So she wants to work... Hmmm... Lets see how that Sikky Picky plays amidst of it if in any case I could suppose him as a Villain... 🀣
But for me, the major concern is how are they gonna do it now??? 🀣 How will they resist? You have to answer it, Sudhu baby! πŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Sudha!! You are calling me Di today!!! What happened baby??? Did someone give any Dhamki to do so??? πŸ˜†
I know darling that till the end of this SS, I am going to get uncountable kisses, smooches and bed rocks!! 🀣 So I have already kept my saline bottle ready... 🀣
Hmmm... So this was the lollipop you were giving me since the start in the name of villain... Mangesh and that too went to jail in single shot... Bas...!!! Arre yaar... Thoda to maza lene deti mujhe Villain ke naam pe... AK47 bhi chala Gaya... Kya yaar??!!! Dil ke armaan aansoon Mein beh Gaye... 🀣 Aur Wo Sikki Pikki... He hasn't that guts to act like a villain... Sirf blinds ke through ghoorne se koi Villain Banta hai kya... 🀣
Now I have single hope left that you can show my Patip baby in some action! 🀣 And not to forget, why should youngsters have all the fun??! Oldy goody bhi romance kar sakte hain... And launsa kiss karne se RK ka koi Chota Bhai aa jayega... 🀣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Call me whatever you feel like dear... I am OK with everything!! Your words 'Wait and Watch' have aroused my lost desires of seeing my darlings again Sudha! God bless you for that... 🀣
I was just kidding with that Chota Bhai part but if you feel, you can add that too at the end... Just imagine Sudha!
Last scene of your story-
All are in hospital, celebrating with the new Talli baby of Talli Biwi and Doctor Sahab! Radha is missing.
Suddenly she enters the labour room shyly. Mohan got concerned seeing her like that. He asks, "Radha, kya Hua tujhe?" She didn't reply. Madhu, Padmini too asked but no reply. Now RK Sahab asked, "Maa, kya Hua aapko? Aapki health theek hai?" Then Radha suddenly hugs him and shyly utters, 'Tera Chota Bhai Aane Wala Hai Pagle...!!!" 🀣
It will be a sixer, Sudha! 🀣
I know, you three enjoy reading my comments... Now even I think I should make one thread like Ni... For my comments.
🀣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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remaining comments i have replied individually if u wish u can check it guys!! thanks to all for ur ovely comments!! it means a lot to me & thanks everyone who helped with my question & gave ur honest opinion!!


Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Neha... I have posted my first comment on your SS... Have a nice time reading it... 🀣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update Sudha!
I liked Neha's comment! First she gave lecture to Sikky on value of relations & marriage! But when RK gave his decision about not to going on trip, she suddenly opposing his decision & started arguing with him! she didn't try to understand the reason behind his decision! she is taking him for granted! Rishab is caring & protective hubby, He kept his patience during their arguments! He get hurt due to her words! Madhu should apologize to him for her mistake!
waiting for the next update!

Edited by PRATHA1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Awww this rk he is lovelyy yaar !! I love this doctor very much !! How carefully he takes care of his baby !! Now madhu is irritating there was no need to say such things to him !! Sudha make madhu lil bit suffer because of talking to her doctor like this
Sikky ne apna asli chehra dikha hi diya !! Vo kaun hota hai jo rk ke bare me keh raha hai hun ?
i just luv ur writing and this ss so much !!! Cont soon next part !! Thanks for the pm!! How was ur exams ??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Ni33

Who would know an update could end two persons.🀣 its really shocking for me Ni & very sad tooπŸ˜­πŸ˜† RIP two souls after this update.🀣 No dont Rest...still some more Lovey dovey is left so read that u both can rest in peace LOL!!πŸ˜†
Kavya di went because of diabetes. And thanks to high blood pressure there is no more Ni.🀣 They tried to revive me with electric shots, adrenaline and bloodthinner but it was to no use. πŸ˜† After so many updates and no villian present, only lovey dovey PDA couple, it finally made my BP go rocket high and end me.🀣 My laughing soul hopped aboard the Choo Choo plain leaving you without a Ni to give you her comments.🀣 oh lord, what have i done to this 2 poor souls...please forgive me & let them come back to earth o reinjcarnate them...i want them madly & badly so that i can torture them with some more PDA...πŸ˜†
But before leaving permanentely I'll give you a comment on this update.πŸ˜† u r not leaving anywhere Ni..got it!! if u leave also ur ghost shld leave the comments for the remaining update!!πŸ˜†
Really? Really? Please someone take all the villians in whatever story you have ever read containing them and please push them inside this one.πŸ˜† Let them show RK some manners.🀣 So they can teach him some new ones. He can't go away from his Biwi without a second, he hovers around her, not letting her get a scratch on her. He is worse than a hawk. Even a hawk gives you room to breath. This one doesn't even give you that luxuary. 🀣 But then again I guess he borrowed Dumbo's big floppy ears, which enables him to do so.🀣 haha...how much ever Villain u borrow from other stories & put in this one..the resut will be the same...Rishbala will kill the villains with their PDA, bed rocking, kissing,...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† haha...yes, he is wrse than hawk...i solemnly agree with that!!
But I cant blame the good doctor for all. aww..thanks for calling him good doctor unlike kavya LOL He is the way he is thanks to our Billi that has already used up her 3 lives. πŸ˜† 6 more to go & it will go soon LOL!! Please let it be at least 7 more attempts on her life and end her 🀣 Then we'll positiviely know she can't survive. Cause cats has 9 lives. 10 attempts on her life, and well you know what will happen then... what's wrong with u & kavya?? why u r hell bound to kill my leads?? so some merci on them...dont take any revenge on them for killing u too...please LOL!! you know how to count.🀣 As I said I have come to a realization. This woman isn't a Dumbo as everyone has claimed her to be. She is one manipulating...🀣 well, u could say that!! she is so..
She has RK wrapped around her little finger. Cause if she only gets a scratch on it he will call in the best plastic surgeons there is to make that finger okay again.🀣 haha...u studied my Doctor pretty well. yes, he would do that!! πŸ˜†
It's all an act of hers. The crying, the supposed guilt, the resistance of saying I love you. Sudha you made a huge blunder with Madhubala. She shouldn't have work in office she should be a spy.🀣 She could easily manipulate everyone to get information and everything she wants.πŸ˜† haha...i'm experimenting with madhubala's character in all my stories but unfortunately all are turning out to be crazy & stupid talli bala's LOL. hmm..may be i ll write a story where she will be a spy LOL NO!!!!No, no, no. NO!!! Sudha. I promise that if the villian you thought of is the one I just come up with. I will... I have no idea what I will do...but it won't be easy for me to digest. It would in your words, be the ultimate lollipop for both Kavya di and me. haha...soon u will know the villain & that would be a very big lolipop for u & kavya... LOL So don't you dare do that.πŸ˜† i will dare to do that after all u r not in this planet LOL!! Now you wonder what will be the ultimate lollipop, probably others as well. So here it is. What if Madhubala did all of that by herself. All of those killing attempts, those sent photos. All of it. Just to make RK abide her every bidding, make him her personal obsessive loverboy. Okay. I can't go further, my brain is needed else where. So I'll just let this one go for now. haha...now itself i ll crash ur idea bcos she is not the one who did all those hungama's LOL. to make him lover stuck puppy all that she has to do r kiss & rock the bed then automatically he will dance for her tunes LOL...there is no need to pull such stunts LOL!!
You know during the time Madhu was sitting on the counter I was thinking, please, please let a burgler or someone get in and beat the crap out of RK.🀣 Hopefully he'll get normal after that.🀣 No more are you okay, are you...πŸ˜† And I was thinking it could be Sikky that send him.πŸ˜† But I guess after this update there is no more Ikky Sikky. After this update there will be the wedding of Mukku Pukku and NoCharisma Trishna .🀣 haha...funny name for the soon to be wedded couple!!
hmmm...sikky pikky has a small part to d before he evaporate LOL!!πŸ˜†
You had my hopes up when Madhu asked RK if he won't leave her. I was thinking all the time. Please RK, please, make my wish come true. Don't say a word. Just go into your bedroom, pack your bags and just leave.🀣 Make that talli bala as Di has renamed her, cry. I want her suffer.🀣 why oh why? u wanna see her suffer?? what harm she did to u?? she just rock her bed & kissed her hubby then what's burning u & kavya?? the world wants to know the answer? πŸ˜† She irritates me now, and let one irritating person be with another. Let her be with that Ikky Sikky. then u both go & find one perfect match for my Doctor & come then i ll send her to siky pikky LOL!! Let her go to him.🀣 Make everyone's wish (probably only me and Di) come true.πŸ˜† yes, its only ur wish which will never ome true LOL!! As for that apple a day keeps the doctor away. I have never heard that saying.πŸ˜† oh my! its a very famous saying!! apple is generally good for health & when u stay healthy there wont be any need for Doctor right? But I positive it's not true. Cause RK was still there when she ate it.🀣 haha...as kavya said he might be a fake doctor LOL!! Why do have to keep our hopes up that RK will leave her. That dream oh that dream, well, actually i wrote that part & thought to bring her dream come true by sending him to hospital but then many voted for No so i scarped that idea but simply kept that dream sequence as i wrote it LOL!! , her nonstop questions this is bcos to boost u her dream LOL!! , that apple this one...well, that quote suddenly popped in my mind so used it by which my readers got one love bite LOL!! . It's not fair yaar. You are buiding up false hopes for those who wants RK to go away from Madhu.πŸ˜† haha...yes, i'm creating false hopes but by now u shld know well that i wont do such things LOL!!πŸ˜†
I have an idea. Since both me and Di are bye bye...πŸ˜† I guess we can be something like Rohan in Message Delivered. 🀣 Lets hunt them both Di. Avenge them for our broken hopes and dreams.🀣 Let show them the true meaning of horror when there is no villian introduced.🀣 Let show them there is more to life than bedrocking. Let show them the true meaning of horror.🀣 Avec pleasure u both can do that to my fictional characters but dont haunt me for writng so & killing u LOL but then if u do also i wont get scared but i will warmly welcome u in my embrace LOL!!πŸ˜†
Sudha. One last shot. Some villians. Real villians in the next update. And then some miracle can happen so Di and me are alive again.πŸ˜† oh no, no villains for next two updates as they are enjoying in mukku trish wedding LOL only after that villain & then ending of this SS LOL!! but still i wish u both come back alive & get killed for the second time LOL!!πŸ˜†
Thanks for the update and for the PM. welcome dear!! And an awesome present to Uma di. u r kidding!!πŸ˜†

oh my Good god, please please dont send these two back to earth, i'm tired of replying to their comments LOL!! just kidding...looking forward to read more crazy comments & please dont fail any case on me for killing u...after all i'm ur insane friend!!πŸ˜†

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