TS: We Are A Family (final part in pg.9)

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: PRATHA1
Mindblowing part Sudha!
This RK is so cute & his thoughts are so hillarious😆OMG!!ROFL!!
These 3 kids are sweet & smart!Finally his family is completed! I loved this story!

thank u so much dear for this lovely comment.

haha..yes, rks inner voice made me too rolf..

glad u loved d story.

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-
awesome update fabulous writer u r Tfs for pm sudha by the way u can call me chitra 😃

thanks dear..aww..glad to hear that..it means a lot to me..welcome chitra.

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: tvcv
Very sweet story...I love this RK...when he asked Madhu to adopt him I was like 😆.
Felt really nice after going through the story 👏
Keep up the good work !!!!!

thank u so much dear.

haha...adopt me lol tjat part cracked me too

thanks & Will try to keep up this good work.

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: uma88
OMG OMG Let me finish laughing first... It doesn't seem to stop.. So here's my comment.. Frankly telling the truth, seeing your story title i thought it to be a more emotional little romantic but never ever i thought it to be this much jovial.. God my cheeks paining due to overdose of laughing you know.. Rk bittuji combination dialogues were excellent.. I have read this chapter 3 times til now,don't know how many times i'll read further completely loved everything in it, whether the way rk asked her to adopt him os to adopt bittuji too or when the kids call them with unique name lol or when madhu asked bittuji about his family where he replied chief i really laughed out at the all said places.. Thank god am alone while reading this else my hubby would have been sacred thinking i have become mad as am laughing alone with my mobile.. Rofl... Please do write more on this genre

aww..loved reading ur comment akka. It makes me feel so happy & Want to write more stories like this mainly to make u laugh. Yes, i agree...the title sound like one emotional story but i thought to make it light as u know none of my stories were emotional or heart wrenching bur just easy going one.. Here too i just wanna empasis that they all have no connection but they are bonded by love & Became "a family" & For a long i wanted to write something giving importance to adoption..thats it.

well, while writing this story i had few places i really want to make readers rolf & I guess i made it bcos u said all the cracking places i had in my mind. Glad u r alone While reading this story lol. Thanks u so much for this beautiful comment. Yeah sure i will write stories like this. Even now i have one idea but gathering few more funny scenes to pit in that os & Soon i ll post it.

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: JsparrowJ
awesome yaar i was smiling throughout.
when bittu spotted blushing r.k.
when maya said i m your girl friend
when r.k. said adopt me.
when bittu said i love you chief.
when r.k. accepted he love bittu to
when r.k. said to madhu adopt bitu tooo

awesome everywheree

thanks sparrow.

haha..u have nicely listed out all the lughing & Rolfing scenes. Thanks for liking this story & I'm so happy to make u smile.

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: silent.desire
Brilliant update loved the ending a lot. Thanks for pm and replying to my comment.

thanks dear

glad u loved d ending

welcome

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

It was damm cute and awsumm os..!!

Loved it alot.!!

Good job..!! :)

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Anish

@anish17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

wow sudha it was an amazing,awesome and hilarious 😆 TS

maya insulted rk very cutely that she ll marry HR's son not him😆

all 3 kids were cute and naughty, poor mb

omg maya wants to date rk 🤣 "she is a spoiled brat.thats the only thing came to my.she ll date me and marry HR's son huh?"

even my mind voice was same 😆

u made sullu and sikky as maid and servants 😆

rk asked madhu to "adopt him and bittuji as her kids" was cute and funny.i thought u only make madhu as crazy in ur stories but for a change u made rk as crazy 🤣

kids calling him as "daddy papa dad" 🤣 was too funny and unique.

finally madhu accepted him.instead of "we are a family" u should hav titled as "crazy family"🤣.

overall superb ts dear.enjoyed very much.

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: desire_nikki
It was damm cute and awsumm os..!!
Loved it alot.!!
Good job..!! :)

thanks dear.

glad u loved it.

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: anish17
wow sudha it was an amazing,awesome and hilarious 😆 TS
maya insulted rk very cutely that she ll marry HR's son not him😆
all 3 kids were cute and naughty, poor mb
omg maya wants to date rk 🤣 "she is a spoiled brat.thats the only thing came to my.she ll date me and marry HR's son huh?"
even my mind voice was same 😆
u made sullu and sikky as maid and servants 😆
rk asked madhu to "adopt him and bittuji as her kids" was cute and funny.i thought u only make madhu as crazy in ur stories but for a change u made rk as crazy 🤣
kids calling him as "daddy papa dad" 🤣 was too funny and unique.
finally madhu accepted him.instead of "we are a family" u should hav titled as "crazy family"🤣.
overall superb ts dear.enjoyed very much.

awe,thanks dear. It was such a lovely comment.

glad u liked d story.

yes, i want to show rk crazy so wrote one story from rks pov..that was a change for me too bcos usally my bala's r crazies but here rk lol...

maya is cute like u said & She is my fav among d three kiddos.

haha...sullu & Sikky only deserves to be cook & Driver lol...

two lines i loved in dis story d most are daddy papa dad & Adopt me which u too u have mentioned.

lol..maya wants to date him as practice for future lol..

haha...when i named d story i never thought this story will go crazy if i had that idea then i would have named as crazy family as u have suggested lol..

thanks for ur hilarious comment on my hilarious story.

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