TS: We Are A Family (final part in pg.9) - Page 10

Originally posted by: Ni33

Okay first of. YES. YOU MADE IT FUNNY!!! phew!! i'm happy now!! Don't ever doubt it.okay!! I laughed hard through and through. 😆 aww...that's nice Ni!!

Put me in shame?😲 haha...just kidding!! Well it's a rare thing for me as well. 😆 But it happens. There is a higher possibility of putting me in shame than making me blush. 🤣🤣 haha...Ni & blushing are like north pole & south pole LOL!! At least I know how to be in shame, unlike me and blushing.🤣 seriously Ni being a girl u don't know to blush😲😲 I won't ever stop laughing over that one. A girl that doesn't blush.🤣 While in a story there are two guys blushing. 🤣🤣 haha...even the arrogant kundra knows to blush & not u!! LOL You don't know how hard I laughed on that one.🤣🤣 now i do know!! LOL Still am, just thinking about it. 🤣🤣 You know I probably get some nice abs on my stomach due to over excessive in laughing these days. If not, my tummy will stay flat. 😆 Reading Bittuji and RK blush.🤣🤣 Just remembering it makes me go in a laughing fit all over again. Luckily no one is around to see me.😆 Now that would be a hard thing to explain, why I am laughing that much. haha...after reading ur comment i cant stop laughing then for sure i know abt how u would have laugher LOL!! glad my story is helping u to keet ur tummy flat LOL!!

Oh, by the way I read Kavya di's comment. oh!! I searched for it, and luckily I found it on page 6 😆 u could have asked me then i would have told u the pg. no. & saved u from searching!! After your reply on her comment how could I not read it.😆 Di. An awesome comment. yes! it was!! now i'm waiting for her comment to the final part eagerly!! I am glad at least someone pulled her legs. Ni😡😡 u r happy that she pulled my legs??😡😡 I didn't have time for that one.😆 that's good for me!! Sorry Sudha, but it's true.😆 yeah! i know!! 😆

Okay over to the update.

AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!!👏 Gee! thanks!!!

I laughed so hard through it all. 😆 i don't know whether i laughed this hard while writing!! ur comment always make me ROLF!!

RK blushing, Bittuji making fun of him. The kids. Everything. AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SULLU SULLU SULLU. 😳😆😆 ha! actually i should say thank u for asking me to bring him in so used hi in a bit portion as a cook & that rle is enough for the expressionless sullu!! LOL You made my day, hey week with that one. So funny. 😆 haha...thank dear!! Even the kids called him Sullu, Sullu Sullu. bcos Ni my little kid calls him sullu sullu sullu LOL!! They made RK nervous and use that brain of his for a while, thinking if Sullu Sullu Sullu could be their father.😆 haha.. yes! they does think him hard & made him pissed by say he was thier cook LOL!! I so wished that they would say yes, making RK face go pale, opening his mouth wide open. Then we would see Bittuji coming by and tell him, Chief close your mouth or some flies might get in your mouth.🤣🤣🤣 RK would fume, but tell him. Bittuji I am RK even the flies have to pay to see me.🤣🤣🤣 haha...Ni, that would be awesome & even more funnier but unfortunately such idea's didn't pop up in my mind LOL!!

There were absolutely nothing I didn't love about this TS. aww..thanks!! It's through and through comedial. i'm glad to know that even i could write something comical LOL!! The conversations, selfthoughts. Everything. The only person that wasn't that comedial was Madhu. yes! may i wrote in Rk's point of view so couldn't touch with madhu's side but then also she was not as funny as Rk LOL!! But someone has to be in this story. We can't have all the characters go over excessive in comedy.😆 exactly!! What would happen if you did? People would fall of their chair, couch, bed or whatever. Rolling on the floor laughing. haha...i don't want my readers falling down & hurt themselves LOL so i restrained from making madhu a comic too LOL!! But might have been something good. People would have less dusting to do. 😆 They already dusted the floor with their clothes.😆 yes! one side good effect & one side bad effect LOL!!

The thing I found strange is how fast Madhu fell in love with RK. She showed absolutely no signs that she was in love with him. So the No from her was expected for me. So for RK to convince her that fast was unexpected. But hey what can one do when one is as handsome and a superstar like he is. Then there is no problem at all. yes! u urself answered ur question! who will not love a handsome superstar who is shamelessly asking her to adopt him LOL!! she knows he is the pill for her pain she took it LOL!! one more thing its a 2 shot so rushed & made her accept soon than dragging it like SS or FF!!

Now a little request from me. u can command me!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE *blinking really fast, showing my eyelashes while pouting* WRITE ANOTHER COMEDIAL STORY SURE!!. I just love them.😳 oh dear, its such a simple request & i'm readily granting it!! after my exams i'll write n 2s or 3s out & out comidial one specially for u but this time from madhu's point of view & i 'll try to write as funny as possible & make u satisfied. in fact i have 3 stories in pipe line one for u - comedy story, one for kavya - a killer story or tragedy & one i wanna write my fav genre romance!!

And by the way, the song I thought of for this story. Well it the same as the title We are family. It's not that funny, but the title on this TS made me think about it. oh nice!! Just ignore the sister part. 😆 okay!! I thought of posting it on the previous commment of mine. But I decided for posting it on this comment. But I changed my mind yet again, just to make room for a different song. haha...any way u hve posted a song for this story!! that's so sweet of u!! This song popped up in my mind. Don't ask me how. haha...okay!! All those none useful cr*p is still stuck in my brain. 😆 haha...ur brain storage capacity is far more than ours LOL!! u remember a lot more things!! good!! Taking up some needful space for other things, like for studies. 😆 Anyway it's a song from the Disney movie Aladdin. ha! i have seen that movie!! It's called a Friend like me. I thought of RK and Bittuji's relation. haha...Rk - bittuji & for their blushing LLOL!! So in their honour I am posting this song below, with of course some alteration. hmm...!!

Well, Ali Baba had them forty thieves,
Scheherazade had a thousand tales.
But Chief you're in luck, 'cause up your sleeves
You've got a brand of magic never fails

You've got some power in your corner now!
Some heavy ammunition in your camp!
You got some punch, pizzaz, yahoo and how.
See, all you gotta do is call that PA, and I'll say:

Chours:
"Mr. RK, Chief, what will your pleasure be?
Let me take your order, jot it down?"
You ain't never had friend like me

Life is your restaurant and I'm your maitre'd
Come on whisper what it is you want;
You ain't never had friend like me!

Yes sir, we pride ourselves on service.
You're the boss, the king, the shah.
Say what you wish; it's yours, true dish.
How 'bout a little more baklava?

have some of column A try All of column B,
I'm in the mood to help you, dude.
You ain't never had friend like me

Oh my. No no. My my my.
Can your friends do this?
Can your friends do that?
Can your friends pull this
Out their little hat?
Can your friends go poof?
Well looky here.
Can your friends go abracadabra, let her rip,
And then make the sucker disappear?

So don't just sit there slack-jawed, buggy-eyed,
I'm here to answer all your mid-day prayers,
You've got me bona fide certified;
You've got a PA for charge d'affaires.

I've got a powerful urge to help you out,
So what you wish, I really wanna know?
You've got a list that's three miles long, no doubt,
Well all you've gotta do is call like so, and oh -

Mr. RK, Chief, have a wish or two or three.
I'm on the job you big nabob!
You ain't never had a friend, never had a friend,
You ain't never had a friend, never had a friend,
You ain't never had a friend like me.
You ain't never had a friend like me

well, nice choice of song selection!! i loved it!! in fact i thought of posting a song at the end of the story but as the story went too long i cut it down!! & the song is "WE ARE A FAMILY" if u see the lyrics it will more or less suits the entire story!! though i didn't write the story based on that song in fact i was searching for a song & i typed my story title in google & i got a song exactly with my title & saw its lyrics but unfortunately i couldn't use it in my story!! okay!! thank u so much dear for ur lovely comment!! as ever ur comment made my day!! i always love reading ur comments in fact most of the writers on whose story u r commenting!! thanks!!

Originally posted by: madhurish

Okay first of. YES. YOU MADE IT FUNNY!!! phew!! i'm happy now!! As long as you are happy. 😆 Don't ever doubt it.okay!! I laughed hard through and through. 😆 aww...that's nice Ni!!

Put me in shame?😲 haha...just kidding!! I know you were. 😆 Well it's a rare thing for me as well. 😆 But it happens. There is a higher possibility of putting me in shame than making me blush. 🤣🤣 haha...Ni & blushing are like north pole & south pole LOL!! That is so true. 🤣 At least I know how to be in shame, unlike me and blushing.🤣 seriously Ni being a girl u don't know to blush😲😲 What? I can't help it. Frankly it's just not me. Or what Shree said my cup of tea. 🤣 And the things that makes you guys blush, I laugh. 🤣 I won't ever stop laughing over that one. A girl that doesn't blush.🤣 While in a story there are two guys blushing. 🤣🤣 haha...even the arrogant kundra knows to blush & not u!! LOL I know. And if he could put me in shame he would. But unfortuantely that is just not possible. 😆 You don't know how hard I laughed on that one.🤣🤣 now i do know!! LOL Still am, just thinking about it. 🤣🤣 You know I probably get some nice abs on my stomach due to over excessive in laughing these days. If not, my tummy will stay flat. 😆 Reading Bittuji and RK blush.🤣🤣 Just remembering it makes me go in a laughing fit all over again. Luckily no one is around to see me.😆 Now that would be a hard thing to explain, why I am laughing that much. haha...after reading ur comment i cant stop laughing then for sure i know abt how u would have laugher LOL!! glad my story is helping u to keet ur tummy flat LOL!! Yeah and after my exam, I stopped laughing and was lazy and gained a Pound. Now coming back to IF and read my comment and your reply. Hello abs.😆

Oh, by the way I read Kavya di's comment. oh!! I searched for it, and luckily I found it on page 6 😆 u could have asked me then i would have told u the pg. no. & saved u from searching!! It barely took a minute. No sweat.😉 After your reply on her comment how could I not read it.😆 Di. An awesome comment. yes! it was!! now i'm waiting for her comment to the final part eagerly!! I am glad at least someone pulled her legs. Ni😡😡 u r happy that she pulled my legs??😡😡 Yes very happy. I couldn't do it so at least she did it. 😆 Don't be angry. 😳 🤣 I didn't have time for that one.😆 that's good for me!! And bad for me. Sorry Sudha, but it's true.😆 yeah! i know!! 😆

Okay over to the update.

AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!!👏 Gee! thanks!!! You are welcome.

I laughed so hard through it all. 😆 i don't know whether i laughed this hard while writing!! ur comment always make me ROLF!! Thanks and you are welcome. Now I have some Company if I reach 100.🤣

RK blushing, Bittuji making fun of him. The kids. Everything. AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SULLU SULLU SULLU. 😆😆 ha! actually i should say thank u for asking me to bring him in so used hi in a bit portion as a cook & that rle is enough for the expressionless sullu!! LOL YES. Enough for him. Ullu Sullu Sullu wanting to separate my Rishbala. They didn't pull the plug fast enough on that. 😆 You made my day, hey week with that one. So funny. 😆 haha...thank dear!! Even the kids called him Sullu, Sullu Sullu. bcos Ni my little kid calls him sullu sullu sullu LOL!! I am not a kid. For God sake I am older than your sister. 😆 God, like it isn't enough torment I have to go through during the day, people assuming me to be 5 or 6 years younger than what I am. 😕😆 They made RK nervous and use that brain of his for a while, thinking if Sullu Sullu Sullu could be their father.😆 haha.. yes! they does think him hard & made him pissed by say he was thier cook LOL!! Naw. I so would have exaggerated that one. 🤣 I so wished that they would say yes, making RK face go pale, opening his mouth wide open. Then we would see Bittuji coming by and tell him, Chief close your mouth or some flies might get in your mouth.🤣🤣🤣 RK would fume, but tell him. Bittuji I am RK even the flies have to pay to see me.🤣🤣🤣 haha...Ni, that would be awesome & even more funnier but unfortunately such idea's didn't pop up in my mind LOL!! Yes, unfortunantely. But then people would literally fall down from their seats and make some modern painting, ruining their shirt in the process. 🤣 Still it was one hilarious TS.😉😆

There were absolutely nothing I didn't love about this TS. aww..thanks!! It's through and through comedial. i'm glad to know that even i could write something comical LOL!! You can. Don't doubt it. The conversations, selfthoughts. Everything. The only person that wasn't that comedial was Madhu. yes! may i wrote in Rk's point of view so couldn't touch with madhu's side but then also she was not as funny as Rk LOL!! But someone has to be in this story. We can't have all the characters go over excessive in comedy.😆 exactly!! What would happen if you did? People would fall of their chair, couch, bed or whatever. Rolling on the floor laughing. haha...i don't want my readers falling down & hurt themselves LOL so i restrained from making madhu a comic too LOL!! Lets not forget the painting. 🤣 Lawsuits aren't acceptable in case of laughter. 🤣 But might have been something good. People would have less dusting to do. 😆 They already dusted the floor with their clothes.😆 yes! one side good effect & one side bad effect LOL!! Exactly.

The thing I found strange is how fast Madhu fell in love with RK. She showed absolutely no signs that she was in love with him. So the No from her was expected for me. So for RK to convince her that fast was unexpected. But hey what can one do when one is as handsome and a superstar like he is. Then there is no problem at all. yes! u urself answered ur question! who will not love a handsome superstar who is shamelessly asking her to adopt him LOL!! she knows he is the pill for her pain she took it LOL!! one more thing its a 2 shot so rushed & made her accept soon than dragging it like SS or FF!! Exactly. So I am happy with the ending.😉

Now a little request from me. u can command me!! I command thee to write a comical story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE *blinking really fast, showing my eyelashes while pouting* WRITE ANOTHER COMEDIAL STORY SURE!!. Thanks.😳 I just love them. oh dear, its such a simple request & i'm readily granting it!! after my exams i'll write n 2s or 3s out & out comidial one specially for u but this time from madhu's point of view & i 'll try to write as funny as possible & make u satisfied. in fact i have 3 stories in pipe line one for u - comedy story, one for kavya - a killer story or tragedy & one i wanna write my fav genre romance!!

And by the way, the song I thought of for this story. Well it the same as the title We are family. It's not that funny, but the title on this TS made me think about it. oh nice!! Just ignore the sister part. 😆 okay!! I thought of posting it on the previous commment of mine. But I decided for posting it on this comment. But I changed my mind yet again, just to make room for a different song. haha...any way u hve posted a song for this story!! that's so sweet of u!! Thanks.This song popped up in my mind. Don't ask me how. haha...okay!! All those none useful cr*p is still stuck in my brain. 😆 haha...ur brain storage capacity is far more than ours LOL!! u remember a lot more things!! good!! How is any of that good?😆 It is taking up some needful space. Hey I know human brains has a capacity of 10 %, but sometimes I even surprise myself knowing things I didn't even know I knew. Too bad there is no such thing as spring cleaning your brain, otherwise I would be the first one to do that. 🤣 Taking up some needful space for other things, like for studies. 😆 Anyway it's a song from the Disney movie Aladdin. ha! i have seen that movie!! Thank God. No need to explain what Movie that is and make myself a something something knowing all of these things. 😆 It's called a Friend like me. I thought of RK and Bittuji's relation. haha...Rk - bittuji & for their blushing LLOL!! Exactly. 😆So in their honour I am posting this song below, with of course some alteration. hmm...!!

Well, Ali Baba had them forty thieves,
Scheherazade had a thousand tales.
But Chief you're in luck, 'cause up your sleeves
You've got a brand of magic never fails

You've got some power in your corner now!
Some heavy ammunition in your camp!
You got some punch, pizzaz, yahoo and how.
See, all you gotta do is call that PA, and I'll say:

Chours:
"Mr. RK, Chief, what will your pleasure be?
Let me take your order, jot it down?"
You ain't never had friend like me

Life is your restaurant and I'm your maitre'd
Come on whisper what it is you want;
You ain't never had friend like me!

Yes sir, we pride ourselves on service.
You're the boss, the king, the shah.
Say what you wish; it's yours, true dish.
How 'bout a little more baklava?

have some of column A try All of column B,
I'm in the mood to help you, dude.
You ain't never had friend like me

Oh my. No no. My my my.
Can your friends do this?
Can your friends do that?
Can your friends pull this
Out their little hat?
Can your friends go poof?
Well looky here.
Can your friends go abracadabra, let her rip,
And then make the sucker disappear?

So don't just sit there slack-jawed, buggy-eyed,
I'm here to answer all your mid-day prayers,
You've got me bona fide certified;
You've got a PA for charge d'affaires.

I've got a powerful urge to help you out,
So what you wish, I really wanna know?
You've got a list that's three miles long, no doubt,
Well all you've gotta do is call like so, and oh -

Mr. RK, Chief, have a wish or two or three.
I'm on the job you big nabob!
You ain't never had a friend, never had a friend,
You ain't never had a friend, never had a friend,
You ain't never had a friend like me.
You ain't never had a friend like me

well, nice choice of song selection!! i loved it!! in fact i thought of posting a song at the end of the story but as the story went too long i cut it down!! & the song is "WE ARE A FAMILY" if u see the lyrics it will more or less suits the entire story!! though i didn't write the story based on that song in fact i was searching for a song & i typed my story title in google & i got a song exactly with my title & saw its lyrics but unfortunately i couldn't use it in my story!! okay!! thank u so much dear for ur lovely comment!! as ever ur comment made my day!! i always love reading ur comments in fact most of the writers on whose story u r commenting!! thanks!!

That's the one I was telling you about. We are Family. Three women singing but they have one vers on I ... sister ... me. Sorry can't remember the entire song now.😆 Oh, okay. Maybe not the same song.😆 Nice Little fact I got to know.

Originally posted by: Ni33

We're big - We're big
We're small - We're small
We're young - We're young
And we're old - We're old
We're all different people living together with love.

We laugh - We laugh
We play - We play
We learn - We learn
everyday - everyday
We're all different people living together with love.
Together with love.

And we - we
are -are
a - a
family - family
living - living
Together - together
Together - together

Chorus:
We are a family - family
Wherever We may go
We are a family - family
I can feel our love - grow
I can feel love grow

We hug - We hug
We care - We care
We help - We help
and we share - We share
We're all different people living together with love.
Together with love

We sing - We sing
We hope - We hope
We dream - We dream
and we grow - We grow
We're all different people living together with love.
Together with love.

And we - We
are - are
A - a
family - family
Living - living
working - working
Together - together
Together - together

Chorus:
We are a family - family
Wherever we may go
We are a family - family
I can feel our love - grow
I can feel love grow

by - jack hartmann

Ni, the song which u said was "we are family" by sister sledge if i'm not wrong!!

Originally posted by: madhurish

Okay first of. YES. YOU MADE IT FUNNY!!! phew!! i'm happy now!! As long as you are happy. 😆 Don't ever doubt it.okay!! I laughed hard through and through. 😆 aww...that's nice Ni!!

Put me in shame?😲 haha...just kidding!! I know you were. 😆 Well it's a rare thing for me as well. 😆 But it happens. There is a higher possibility of putting me in shame than making me blush. 🤣🤣 haha...Ni & blushing are like north pole & south pole LOL!! That is so true. 🤣 At least I know how to be in shame, unlike me and blushing.🤣 seriously Ni being a girl u don't know to blush😲😲 What? I can't help it. Frankly it's just not me. Or what Shree said my cup of tea. 🤣 And the things that makes you guys blush, I laugh. 🤣 okay u don't know to blush then what abt flush?? even there also u will laugh ah?? What do you mean flush? Flush like a toilet? I don't think they have made a big enough toilet to fit a human being to be flushed down.🤣 I won't ever stop laughing over that one. A girl that doesn't blush.🤣 While in a story there are two guys blushing. 🤣🤣 haha...even the arrogant kundra knows to blush & not u!! LOL I know. And if he could put me in shame he would. But unfortuantely that is just not possible. 😆 You don't know how hard I laughed on that one.🤣🤣 now i do know!! LOL Still am, just thinking about it. 🤣🤣 You know I probably get some nice abs on my stomach due to over excessive in laughing these days. If not, my tummy will stay flat. 😆 Reading Bittuji and RK blush.🤣🤣 Just remembering it makes me go in a laughing fit all over again. Luckily no one is around to see me.😆 Now that would be a hard thing to explain, why I am laughing that much. haha...after reading ur comment i cant stop laughing then for sure i know abt how u would have laugher LOL!! glad my story is helping u to keet ur tummy flat LOL!! Yeah and after my exam, I stopped laughing and was lazy and gained a Pound. Now coming back to IF and read my comment and your reply. Hello abs.😆

haha..hello abs from my side too!! LOL Good, then I have some Company in that department. Hey look at it this way. No need to go to the gym.😆

Oh, by the way I read Kavya di's comment. oh!! I searched for it, and luckily I found it on page 6 😆 u could have asked me then i would have told u the pg. no. & saved u from searching!! It barely took a minute. No sweat.😉 fine!! After your reply on her comment how could I not read it.😆 Di. An awesome comment. yes! it was!! now i'm waiting for her comment to the final part eagerly!! I am glad at least someone pulled her legs. Ni😡😡 u r happy that she pulled my legs??😡😡 Yes very happy. I couldn't do it so at least she did it. 😆 if u r happy then no issues for me bieng pulled my friends LOL!! but seriouslu liked her tricky questions LOL Me too. 😆 Don't be angry. 😳 🤣 No! i'm not angry!!😆 I didn't have time for that one.😆 that's good for me!! And bad for me. Sorry Sudha, but it's true.😆 yeah! i know!! 😆

Okay over to the update.

AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!!👏 Gee! thanks!!! You are welcome.

I laughed so hard through it all. 😆 i don't know whether i laughed this hard while writing!! ur comment always make me ROLF!! Thanks and you are welcome. Now I have some Company if I reach 100.🤣 oh God! but i don't want to live till 100 LOL😆 Does it look like I want to do that?😆 At least I won't be alone. We will be chatting through IF when we are still that old and when people call us aunties.🤣

RK blushing, Bittuji making fun of him. The kids. Everything. AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SULLU SULLU SULLU. 😳😆😆 ha! actually i should say thank u for asking me to bring him in so used hi in a bit portion as a cook & that rle is enough for the expressionless sullu!! LOL YES. Enough for him. Ullu Sullu Sullu wanting to separate my Rishbala. They didn't pull the plug fast enough on that. 😆 haha...now i really like to make fun of ullu sullu in all my stories LOL!!! Me too. So continue to do that.😆 You made my day, hey week with that one. So funny. 😆 haha...thank dear!! Even the kids called him Sullu, Sullu Sullu. bcos Ni my little kid calls him sullu sullu sullu LOL!! I am not a kid. but i cant help saying that!! only kids laugh in place of blushing LOL!! What only kids? Hey, just because I laugh instead of blushing, crying and when I feel physical pain (yes the second when I sprained my ankle I laughed like an idiot 🤣) does not mean I am a kid.😆 It just mean I am not a normal girl. 🤣 A fact I realised years, years back. You saw what read when I was young. What normal kid reads that and enjoys playing chess? Sure I don't count in those other sports, cause they seemed normal.😆 For God sake I am older than your sister. 😆 God, like it isn't enough torment I have to go through during the day, people assuming me to be 5 or 6 years younger than what I am. 😕😆 u should feel happy for being young!! u knw what all the guest who arrive at my house will think i'm the elder one & my sis is younger & i get mad at that moment for saying so LOL!! yes, i agree i'm taller than her but till she is 2 yrs older to me but here, u are getting pissed for calling u a kid LOL!! Poor you. 😆 Still it's better than being younger. 😆 The same thing happened to me and my cousin. She is five years younger then me, but is taller and people assumed her to be older one. But I got my revenge when people told her she was my cousins cousin and I was my cousin's sister. Because us two are looking very similar to each other.😆 She was shocked.🤣 They made RK nervous and use that brain of his for a while, thinking if Sullu Sullu Sullu could be their father.😆 haha.. yes! they does think him hard & made him pissed by say he was thier cook LOL!! Naw. I so would have exaggerated that one. 🤣 haha...yes, u ould have done that!! I so would. I so wished that they would say yes, making RK face go pale, opening his mouth wide open. Then we would see Bittuji coming by and tell him, Chief close your mouth or some flies might get in your mouth.🤣🤣🤣 RK would fume, but tell him. Bittuji I am RK even the flies have to pay to see me.🤣🤣🤣 haha...Ni, that would be awesome & even more funnier but unfortunately such idea's didn't pop up in my mind LOL!! Yes, unfortunantely. But then people would literally fall down from their seats and make some modern painting, ruining their shirt in the process. 🤣 haha...i dont want my readers get a smack on their head for ruining the shirt or painting LOL!! Why not? 😆 Still it was one hilarious TS.😉😆 thanks!! You are welcome.

There were absolutely nothing I didn't love about this TS. aww..thanks!! It's through and through comedial. i'm glad to know that even i could write something comical LOL!! You can. Don't doubt it. The conversations, selfthoughts. Everything. The only person that wasn't that comedial was Madhu. yes! may i wrote in Rk's point of view so couldn't touch with madhu's side but then also she was not as funny as Rk LOL!! But someone has to be in this story. We can't have all the characters go over excessive in comedy.😆 exactly!! What would happen if you did? People would fall of their chair, couch, bed or whatever. Rolling on the floor laughing. haha...i don't want my readers falling down & hurt themselves LOL so i restrained from making madhu a comic too LOL!! Lets not forget the painting. 🤣 Lawsuits aren't acceptable in case of laughter. 🤣 no! i wont forget that in my life!! LOL Neither would I. I would never have thought a little comment of my can bring such commotion and such results.😆 But might have been something good. People would have less dusting to do. 😆 They already dusted the floor with their clothes.😆 yes! one side good effect & one side bad effect LOL!! Exactly.

The thing I found strange is how fast Madhu fell in love with RK. She showed absolutely no signs that she was in love with him. So the No from her was expected for me. So for RK to convince her that fast was unexpected. But hey what can one do when one is as handsome and a superstar like he is. Then there is no problem at all. yes! u urself answered ur question! who will not love a handsome superstar who is shamelessly asking her to adopt him LOL!! she knows he is the pill for her pain she took it LOL!! one more thing its a 2 shot so rushed & made her accept soon than dragging it like SS or FF!! Exactly. So I am happy with the ending.😉 Good!!

Now a little request from me. u can command me!! I command thee to write a comical story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE *blinking really fast, showing my eyelashes while pouting* WRITE ANOTHER COMEDIAL STORY SURE!!. Thanks.😳 I just love them.😳oh dear, its such a simple request & i'm readily granting it!! after my exams i'll write n 2s or 3s out & out comidial one specially for u but this time from madhu's point of view & i 'll try to write as funny as possible & make u satisfied. in fact i have 3 stories in pipe line one for u - comedy story, one for kavya - a killer story or tragedy & one i wanna write my fav genre romance!!

And by the way, the song I thought of for this story. Well it the same as the title We are family. It's not that funny, but the title on this TS made me think about it. oh nice!! Just ignore the sister part. 😆 okay!! I thought of posting it on the previous commment of mine. But I decided for posting it on this comment. But I changed my mind yet again, just to make room for a different song. haha...any way u hve posted a song for this story!! that's so sweet of u!! Thanks.This song popped up in my mind. Don't ask me how. haha...okay!! All those none useful cr*p is still stuck in my brain. 😆 haha...ur brain storage capacity is far more than ours LOL!! u remember a lot more things!! good!! How is any of that good?😆 It is taking up some needful space. Hey I know human brains has a capacity of 10 %, but sometimes I even surprise myself knowing things I didn't even know I knew. Too bad there is no such thing as spring cleaning your brain, otherwise I would be the first one to do that. 🤣 haha..spring cleaning LOL!! I can't come up with anything else than that.😆 Taking up some needful space for other things, like for studies. 😆 Anyway it's a song from the Disney movie Aladdin. ha! i have seen that movie!! Thank God. No need to explain what Movie that is and make myself a something something knowing all of these things. 😆 It's called a Friend like me. I thought of RK and Bittuji's relation. haha...Rk - bittuji & for their blushing LLOL!! Exactly. 😆So in their honour I am posting this song below, with of course some alteration. hmm...!!

Well, Ali Baba had them forty thieves,
Scheherazade had a thousand tales.
But Chief you're in luck, 'cause up your sleeves
You've got a brand of magic never fails

You've got some power in your corner now!
Some heavy ammunition in your camp!
You got some punch, pizzaz, yahoo and how.
See, all you gotta do is call that PA, and I'll say:

Chours:
"Mr. RK, Chief, what will your pleasure be?
Let me take your order, jot it down?"
You ain't never had friend like me

Life is your restaurant and I'm your maitre'd
Come on whisper what it is you want;
You ain't never had friend like me!

Yes sir, we pride ourselves on service.
You're the boss, the king, the shah.
Say what you wish; it's yours, true dish.
How 'bout a little more baklava?

have some of column A try All of column B,
I'm in the mood to help you, dude.
You ain't never had friend like me

Oh my. No no. My my my.
Can your friends do this?
Can your friends do that?
Can your friends pull this
Out their little hat?
Can your friends go poof?
Well looky here.
Can your friends go abracadabra, let her rip,
And then make the sucker disappear?

So don't just sit there slack-jawed, buggy-eyed,
I'm here to answer all your mid-day prayers,
You've got me bona fide certified;
You've got a PA for charge d'affaires.

I've got a powerful urge to help you out,
So what you wish, I really wanna know?
You've got a list that's three miles long, no doubt,
Well all you've gotta do is call like so, and oh -

Mr. RK, Chief, have a wish or two or three.
I'm on the job you big nabob!
You ain't never had a friend, never had a friend,
You ain't never had a friend, never had a friend,
You ain't never had a friend like me.
You ain't never had a friend like me

well, nice choice of song selection!! i loved it!! in fact i thought of posting a song at the end of the story but as the story went too long i cut it down!! & the song is "WE ARE A FAMILY" if u see the lyrics it will more or less suits the entire story!! though i didn't write the story based on that song in fact i was searching for a song & i typed my story title in google & i got a song exactly with my title & saw its lyrics but unfortunately i couldn't use it in my story!! okay!! thank u so much dear for ur lovely comment!! as ever ur comment made my day!! i always love reading ur comments in fact most of the writers on whose story u r commenting!! thanks!!

That's the one I was telling you about. We are Family. Three women singing but they have one vers on I ... sister ... me. Sorry can't remember the entire song now.😆 Oh, okay. Maybe not the same song.😆 Nice Little fact I got to know.

no! i guess that's not the one u are telling!! okay i ll post the song below this post so will come to know!! And as already told you through scrap, that's not the sone I thought of. But the other one you guessed I was thinking.😆

Originally posted by: Ni33

Originally posted by: madhurish

Okay first of. YES. YOU MADE IT FUNNY!!! phew!! i'm happy now!! As long as you are happy. 😆 Don't ever doubt it.okay!! I laughed hard through and through. 😆 aww...that's nice Ni!!

Put me in shame?😲 haha...just kidding!! I know you were. 😆 Well it's a rare thing for me as well. 😆 But it happens. There is a higher possibility of putting me in shame than making me blush. 🤣🤣 haha...Ni & blushing are like north pole & south pole LOL!! That is so true. 🤣 At least I know how to be in shame, unlike me and blushing.🤣 seriously Ni being a girl u don't know to blush😲😲 What? I can't help it. Frankly it's just not me. Or what Shree said my cup of tea. 🤣 And the things that makes you guys blush, I laugh. 🤣 okay u don't know to blush then what abt flush?? even there also u will laugh ah?? What do you mean flush? Flush like a toilet? I don't think they have made a big enough toilet to fit a human being to be flushed down.🤣 No! not that flush! the flush - when ur face turns red in embarrassment or anger!! Okay, not that flush. 🤣 I have a question. If I don't blush nor cry, you suspect me to flush?😆 From embarrassment never. I can be embarrassed, which rarely happens. Cause the things I do (I always do intentionally thus can't get me embarrassed, but I am one coldheaded girl so don't suspect me doing something... 😆) or others do can't get me embarrassed. It's more likely that they make me uncomfortable but not flush. But anger, well then you really have to make me angry to get that affect and when you do. You better not be around me. You know my way of writing, what do you think my way is when I talk?🤣 I won't ever stop laughing over that one. A girl that doesn't blush.🤣 While in a story there are two guys blushing. 🤣🤣 haha...even the arrogant kundra knows to blush & not u!! LOL I know. And if he could put me in shame he would. But unfortuantely that is just not possible. 😆 You don't know how hard I laughed on that one.🤣🤣 now i do know!! LOL Still am, just thinking about it. 🤣🤣 You know I probably get some nice abs on my stomach due to over excessive in laughing these days. If not, my tummy will stay flat. 😆 Reading Bittuji and RK blush.🤣🤣 Just remembering it makes me go in a laughing fit all over again. Luckily no one is around to see me.😆 Now that would be a hard thing to explain, why I am laughing that much. haha...after reading ur comment i cant stop laughing then for sure i know abt how u would have laugher LOL!! glad my story is helping u to keet ur tummy flat LOL!! Yeah and after my exam, I stopped laughing and was lazy and gained a Pound. Now coming back to IF and read my comment and your reply. Hello abs.😆

haha..hello abs from my side too!! LOL Good, then I have some Company in that department. Hey look at it this way. No need to go to the gym.😆 haha...no gym, no exercise nothing but only Rolfing to keep ourself fit LOL!! Exactly. Saving a lot of time and effort on keeping ourselves fit.😆

Oh, by the way I read Kavya di's comment. oh!! I searched for it, and luckily I found it on page 6 😆 u could have asked me then i would have told u the pg. no. & saved u from searching!! It barely took a minute. No sweat.😉 fine!! After your reply on her comment how could I not read it.😆 Di. An awesome comment. yes! it was!! now i'm waiting for her comment to the final part eagerly!! I am glad at least someone pulled her legs. Ni😡😡 u r happy that she pulled my legs??😡😡 Yes very happy. I couldn't do it so at least she did it. 😆 if u r happy then no issues for me bieng pulled my friends LOL!! but seriouslu liked her tricky questions LOL Me too. 😆 Don't be angry. 😳 🤣 No! i'm not angry!!😆 I didn't have time for that one.😆 that's good for me!! And bad for me. Sorry Sudha, but it's true.😆 yeah! i know!! 😆

Okay over to the update.

AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!!👏 Gee! thanks!!! You are welcome.

I laughed so hard through it all. 😆 i don't know whether i laughed this hard while writing!! ur comment always make me ROLF!! Thanks and you are welcome. Now I have some Company if I reach 100.🤣 oh God! but i don't want to live till 100 LOL😆 Does it look like I want to do that?😆 At least I won't be alone. We will be chatting through IF when we are still that old and when people call us aunties.🤣 haha...chatting in IF for next 80 yrs (aprox) LOL!! by then people wont call us aunties but grannies LOL!! Speak for yourself.😆 The way I am going, being 23 and being mistaken for a 16 year old, do you honsetly think they won't call me aunty.🤣

RK blushing, Bittuji making fun of him. The kids. Everything. AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SULLU SULLU SULLU. 😳😆😆 ha! actually i should say thank u for asking me to bring him in so used hi in a bit portion as a cook & that rle is enough for the expressionless sullu!! LOL YES. Enough for him. Ullu Sullu Sullu wanting to separate my Rishbala. They didn't pull the plug fast enough on that. 😆 haha...now i really like to make fun of ullu sullu in all my stories LOL!!! Me too. So continue to do that.😆 okay!! Good.You made my day, hey week with that one. So funny. 😆 haha...thank dear!! Even the kids called him Sullu, Sullu Sullu. bcos Ni my little kid calls him sullu sullu sullu LOL!! I am not a kid. but i cant help saying that!! only kids laugh in place of blushing LOL!! What only kids? Hey, just because I laugh instead of blushing, crying and when I feel physical pain (yes the second when I sprained my ankle I laughed like an idiot 🤣) does not mean I am a kid.😆 It just mean I am not a normal girl. 🤣 A fact I realised years, years back. You saw what read when I was young. What normal kid reads that and enjoys playing chess? Sure I don't count in those other sports, cause they seemed normal.😆 if u r not normal girl then u r what?? Alien?? i guess now u ll agree with me LOL!! Never! 😆 I will only say I am not normal.😆 For God sake I am older than your sister. 😆 God, like it isn't enough torment I have to go through during the day, people assuming me to be 5 or 6 years younger than what I am. 😕😆 u should feel happy for being young!! u knw what all the guest who arrive at my house will think i'm the elder one & my sis is younger & i get mad at that moment for saying so LOL!! yes, i agree i'm taller than her but till she is 2 yrs older to me but here, u are getting pissed for calling u a kid LOL!! Poor you. 😆 yes, now a days when anyone comes to my house i myself introduce as i'm the younger one & she is 2 yrs elder to me before they say anything LOL!! Naw poor Sudha.😆 Still it's better than being younger. 😆 i dont think so!! i dont want to be caller old when i'm really young LOL!! Well you do have a valid Point. The same thing happened to me and my cousin. She is five years younger then me, but is taller and people assumed her to be older one. But I got my revenge when people told her she was my cousins cousin and I was my cousin's sister. Because us two are looking very similar to each other.😆 She was shocked.🤣 ur cousin know exactly how it feels bcos she is in my place LOL!! Well she wasn't shocked for people were thinking she is older then me, but for them mistaken me for being my cousins sister and her to be her cousin. 😆 They made RK nervous and use that brain of his for a while, thinking if Sullu Sullu Sullu could be their father.😆 haha.. yes! they does think him hard & made him pissed by say he was thier cook LOL!! Naw. I so would have exaggerated that one. 🤣 haha...yes, u would have done that!! I so would.i know I know you know.😆I so wished that they would say yes, making RK face go pale, opening his mouth wide open. Then we would see Bittuji coming by and tell him, Chief close your mouth or some flies might get in your mouth.🤣🤣🤣 RK would fume, but tell him. Bittuji I am RK even the flies have to pay to see me.🤣🤣🤣 haha...Ni, that would be awesome & even more funnier but unfortunately such idea's didn't pop up in my mind LOL!! Yes, unfortunantely. But then people would literally fall down from their seats and make some modern painting, ruining their shirt in the process. 🤣 haha...i dont want my readers get a smack on their head for ruining the shirt or painting LOL!! Why not? 😆 i love my readers so i dont want them getting hits LOL!! But maybe it will get some sense into them. Okay I am not saying they don't have sense, just thinking about various Madhu characters I have read about. Thereby coming to that conclusion.😆 Still it was one hilarious TS.😉😆 thanks!! You are welcome.

There were absolutely nothing I didn't love about this TS. aww..thanks!! It's through and through comedial. i'm glad to know that even i could write something comical LOL!! You can. Don't doubt it. The conversations, selfthoughts. Everything. The only person that wasn't that comedial was Madhu. yes! may i wrote in Rk's point of view so couldn't touch with madhu's side but then also she was not as funny as Rk LOL!! But someone has to be in this story. We can't have all the characters go over excessive in comedy.😆 exactly!! What would happen if you did? People would fall of their chair, couch, bed or whatever. Rolling on the floor laughing. haha...i don't want my readers falling down & hurt themselves LOL so i restrained from making madhu a comic too LOL!! Lets not forget the painting. 🤣 Lawsuits aren't acceptable in case of laughter. 🤣 no! i wont forget that in my life!! LOL Neither would I. I would never have thought a little comment of my can bring such commotion and such results.😆 me neither!! now i'm alert! before laughing i check my surrounding LOL!! Good going. Now check it before you read my PM I'll send you soon. 😆 But might have been something good. People would have less dusting to do. 😆 They already dusted the floor with their clothes.😆 yes! one side good effect & one side bad effect LOL!! Exactly.

The thing I found strange is how fast Madhu fell in love with RK. She showed absolutely no signs that she was in love with him. So the No from her was expected for me. So for RK to convince her that fast was unexpected. But hey what can one do when one is as handsome and a superstar like he is. Then there is no problem at all. yes! u urself answered ur question! who will not love a handsome superstar who is shamelessly asking her to adopt him LOL!! she knows he is the pill for her pain she took it LOL!! one more thing its a 2 shot so rushed & made her accept soon than dragging it like SS or FF!! Exactly. So I am happy with the ending.😉 Good!!

Now a little request from me. u can command me!! I command thee to write a comical story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE *blinking really fast, showing my eyelashes while pouting* WRITE ANOTHER COMEDIAL STORY SURE!!. Thanks.😳 I just love them.😳oh dear, its such a simple request & i'm readily granting it!! after my exams i'll write n 2s or 3s out & out comidial one specially for u but this time from madhu's point of view & i 'll try to write as funny as possible & make u satisfied. in fact i have 3 stories in pipe line one for u - comedy story, one for kavya - a killer story or tragedy & one i wanna write my fav genre romance!!

And by the way, the song I thought of for this story. Well it the same as the title We are family. It's not that funny, but the title on this TS made me think about it. oh nice!! Just ignore the sister part. 😆 okay!! I thought of posting it on the previous commment of mine. But I decided for posting it on this comment. But I changed my mind yet again, just to make room for a different song. haha...any way u hve posted a song for this story!! that's so sweet of u!! Thanks.This song popped up in my mind. Don't ask me how. haha...okay!! All those none useful cr*p is still stuck in my brain. 😆 haha...ur brain storage capacity is far more than ours LOL!! u remember a lot more things!! good!! How is any of that good?😆 It is taking up some needful space. Hey I know human brains has a capacity of 10 %, but sometimes I even surprise myself knowing things I didn't even know I knew. Too bad there is no such thing as spring cleaning your brain, otherwise I would be the first one to do that. 🤣 haha..spring cleaning LOL!! I can't come up with anything else than that.😆 i can see that!! LOL Taking up some needful space for other things, like for studies. 😆 Anyway it's a song from the Disney movie Aladdin. ha! i have seen that movie!! Thank God. No need to explain what Movie that is and make myself a something something knowing all of these things. 😆 It's called a Friend like me. I thought of RK and Bittuji's relation. haha...Rk - bittuji & for their blushing LLOL!! Exactly. 😆So in their honour I am posting this song below, with of course some alteration. hmm...!!

Well, Ali Baba had them forty thieves,
Scheherazade had a thousand tales.
But Chief you're in luck, 'cause up your sleeves
You've got a brand of magic never fails

You've got some power in your corner now!
Some heavy ammunition in your camp!
You got some punch, pizzaz, yahoo and how.
See, all you gotta do is call that PA, and I'll say:

Chours:
"Mr. RK, Chief, what will your pleasure be?
Let me take your order, jot it down?"
You ain't never had friend like me

Life is your restaurant and I'm your maitre'd
Come on whisper what it is you want;
You ain't never had friend like me!

Yes sir, we pride ourselves on service.
You're the boss, the king, the shah.
Say what you wish; it's yours, true dish.
How 'bout a little more baklava?

have some of column A try All of column B,
I'm in the mood to help you, dude.
You ain't never had friend like me

Oh my. No no. My my my.
Can your friends do this?
Can your friends do that?
Can your friends pull this
Out their little hat?
Can your friends go poof?
Well looky here.
Can your friends go abracadabra, let her rip,
And then make the sucker disappear?

So don't just sit there slack-jawed, buggy-eyed,
I'm here to answer all your mid-day prayers,
You've got me bona fide certified;
You've got a PA for charge d'affaires.

I've got a powerful urge to help you out,
So what you wish, I really wanna know?
You've got a list that's three miles long, no doubt,
Well all you've gotta do is call like so, and oh -

Mr. RK, Chief, have a wish or two or three.
I'm on the job you big nabob!
You ain't never had a friend, never had a friend,
You ain't never had a friend, never had a friend,
You ain't never had a friend like me.
You ain't never had a friend like me

well, nice choice of song selection!! i loved it!! in fact i thought of posting a song at the end of the story but as the story went too long i cut it down!! & the song is "WE ARE A FAMILY" if u see the lyrics it will more or less suits the entire story!! though i didn't write the story based on that song in fact i was searching for a song & i typed my story title in google & i got a song exactly with my title & saw its lyrics but unfortunately i couldn't use it in my story!! okay!! thank u so much dear for ur lovely comment!! as ever ur comment made my day!! i always love reading ur comments in fact most of the writers on whose story u r commenting!! thanks!!

That's the one I was telling you about. We are Family. Three women singing but they have one vers on I ... sister ... me. Sorry can't remember the entire song now.😆 Oh, okay. Maybe not the same song.😆 Nice Little fact I got to know.

no! i guess that's not the one u are telling!! okay i ll post the song below this post so will come to know!! And as already told you through scrap, that's not the sone I thought of. But the other one you guessed I was thinking.😆 yeah!

By the way. What a decoration.🤣

Originally posted by: Abhiya4life

RK's reactions were hilarious
Fist pumping at its finest 🤣
Loved the update sudha...it was sooo sweet...like candy
Beautiful 😳

PS I was imagining RK's expressions all along
My sides hurt from laughing 😆

Originally posted by: meenji22

good story written by exilent writter

Originally posted by: meenji22

your rk is so cute asking madhu to adopt him