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Bun

@KazBrekker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: madhurish
very nice but why u killed madhu?😭 y cant it just be a plan to realize his mistake?😭 why oh why? u killed my sweet madhu?😭 oh i'm crying!😭 my heart is aching!🥺 over dramatic hun?😆 okay control!!😆 now back to the story.. very different piece!!👏 short & crisp!!👍🏼i loved this terminator part 4 a lot!!😉 i always wished to see Rk as superhero having super natural powers & i even asked one of my fav writer to write such story but u wrote one like that & made me so happy!!😃thank u dear!!🤗

I had killed madhu because I had something in mind. .with which the story could progress but then I gave up amd posted the crap that was already written by just changing the ending a bit..
I personally love super heros that's y I guess I wrote it but am highly disappointed with the outcome..

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Bun

@KazBrekker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

More replies later...am getting late for something now..so byee

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.Shree.

@.Shree.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Nice OS Lu 😛

Ni I loved ur comment 😆

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shasha

@shasha1989

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

it's an emotional os dear...

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kg15

@kg15

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

It just reminded me of mixture of Iron Man and Avengers! Hehehe... I like those movies but I always get more confused with them... 😆 And so did I with your OS! I am sorry Lu! But what did the doctors want to do with those robots? And kind of global destruction it was or just national destruction... ROFL... And for Madhu... Haayeee... Maar Daala... Allah... Maar Daala... Tune Bhi Maar Daala... You are also getting affected by the "Kill The Leads" Virus! ROFL... Ok, I won't ask you why you killed her. I can understand, sleep can do wonders to any story... ROFL... But for your smile, I loved the emotional cry of Rishabh! So, Lu "Only For You", #IWantNextPart with explanation...

Please write it in daytime... ROFL

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Ni33

@Ni33

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Mentally-Insane

🤣 this is me after reading ur comment Ni 🤣
Now let me explain...I duck at writing and this was written when I was half as leep...secondly..of course it would remind u of those heroes (they r the only ones I have watched 🤣 ) thirdly...How dare u dis my heros?!? Especially Iron Man!!! 😡 They r all awesome as hell 😆 amd about the story. .well there can be a part two if I want but I can't write superheros..Iddon't knw hw to describe..the comics have animations do don't need to describe here I don't. .I could let all the mystery of the robots..doctor..madhu..his past vanish eith another part but I am justean and will let u all imagine. .hehe 😆

I am glad you took my comments lightly Choti. 😆

I didn't dis your heroes, I am dissing the movies based on them. The heroes are okay, but not the movies that are portraying them.

In that department Hollywood fails for me. I can never understand how any of those movies get such a gross and popularity, it baffles me even today and every time I think about it.

Never watched the Iron Man Movies, sorry 😆, but I did watch the Avengers and even then I felt like I will never get that time back again. Why did I waste my time, and that to while fastforwarding most of the parts in the movie. Thank God, I watched it just two or three months ago on my computer and was able to fastforward, otherwise I would have stop watching it after only 5 minutes.

I liked Iron Man's character, the arrogant engineer and the so called hero in the movie. I found him comical. But I didn't like him that much I would watch the Iron Man movies. I will passed on those.

And that is also why you will never ever see me watch the show Avengers.

Well if you write a second part do PM me, I want to have a good laugh.

You are a great writer and you have portrayed the heroconcept in the story well. But as I said I find all of this herothings very funny for the reasons I have already explained.

Sorry again Choti, can't stop laughing, I find this all very amusing.