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Posted: 11 years ago
Don't know what to say about the update. It was an edge of the seat update.
Like Madhu I also wanted Sultan to speak up and then the gun shots & you ended the update.
Continue soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Now what should I say about the update when I am quite irritated with the fact that you ended it at where you have..
I will comment tomorrow okay?
I can't switch my lappy on now..
Anyways the update was fabulous :p
Edited by drashtifan1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i'm tired of saying "i'm 1st to comment" lol!!🤣 If you are, then let someone else be first. ROFL

Ni, i'm extremely sorry for the delay in commenting!!😭😭 i'm in a dilemma to say whether my net is in tortoise speed or snail speed but still i came 1st lol (lucky me)😉😉 then my net completely went down🤢🤢 & i couldn't log in for long!!😡😡 (unlucky me)😭😭 finally it showed some mercy on me & now i'm unresing (don't spam my inbox)😆😆
Finally!!👏👏👏
Okay, this time I will forgive you. 😳 Just because of the net. I was just about to spam your inbox.😈

okay! coming to the teasing update!!😆😆
nice update!!ClapClap
hmmm... so it's sultan!! the one i left in my list of who is outside the door bcos i assumed he was dead so i dint suspect him but some how i was right, he will be dead soon LOL!!😆😆 totally 5 bullets were shot & madhu took 3 but she is still alive😲😲 & sultan took 2 & he is gonna die.😲😲 Well you are correct. 5 shots were fired. But only two hit Madhu. One in the arm and one above her heart. The third one missed her, because Sullu saved her. 😆 Sullu, Sullu, Sullu. ROFL Love that nickname.ROFLROFL Now I can't tell you yet if Sullu is dead. 😆 Or if it is even him who is the deceased person. 😆

Ni, i have lots of doubts regarding the years , months & hours. Wait! let me make myself clear... 1st u started ur story in party, then bar, then childhood days (at least 15 yrs back), then 2 months back from present (i.e., on someones funeral - i assume the deceased person is sullu) so now the 39 hours is before the funeral, rite?
Now coming to the time. Yes you are right. 😆 First from the party we went back 2 months to the bar. From there we had another flashback 10 months back, that is still very much ongoing, the funeral. In the funeral we had a little flashback from when they were kids and ended it with the return to the funeral. Then we had a chapter with only the funeral. And then from the funeral we had yet another flashback, for the happenings of 39 hours earlier. It's confusing even for me. 😆 Now when I write and think about it. I should have thought about that earlier. 😆 Well don't worry I plan to end the 39 hours flashback and the funeral flashback in the next chapter or the next two chapters. So we will be back at the bar. 😆 Which will give us only one ongoing flashback. Cause I am waiting for the moment to the snarky, sassy Madhu to return like in the first 2 chapters. The one with the attitude. And the flirtatious RK with 007 attitude.😳 And after that. Well then it's when the real story begins. 😈 The party will be fun. And as the first paragraph said; no party is considered as a success without some hungama.😆

sultan came to meet madhu, he was tensed, he want to say something to her but that idiotic arse😡😡 dint say anything to madhu & before that someone shot both madhu & him... in that he will die & madhu will think it has something to do with uncleji (i mean Rk's dad) & that's y she behaved coldly with him in funeral!! Well I can't say directly if that's the reason. If you remember, she mentioned both RK and uncelji when he flinched. 😆 But it might be some other reason, why Madhu behaved that coldly towards him. I can't reveal much. But I hope you got your answer on who is Aryan's mother.😆😆 Well then you can do the math. If you know what I mean?😆

Ahhh... Why oh why? Ni? why u left us like this? i was biting my nails & waiting for sultan to say something but🤢🤢 for a moment i want to snatch his drinks bottle & smack on his head for beating around the bush & not coming to the point!!😡😡
who's the real culprit? who's the villain in this story? who shot them?😕😕 Well I love cliffhangers and mystery. 😆 Yeah, even I wanted to do that. I don't know how he found that vodka, when he was going to have some water. Maybe he knew where Madhu had her secret stash. 😆 Huh, the real culprint... I haven't even gotten there yet. 😆 Not even I know who shot them. How do you expect me to tell you?ROFL Okay, I know. I was just kidding. ROFL
full of 😕😕 & ❓❓ but i have to wait for a month to know the answer this is too bad, Ni!! u shouldn't stop at such place!!😡😡
YES, this suspense is killing me😡😡 Well I hope I answered a few. 😆 But I think I raised some more questions. Well I am a sucker for cliffhangers.😆 You have to deal with it. Especially the wait.😆
update soon, bondyEmbarrassedEmbarrassed You already know the answer.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
You are welcome!😛
Ni33 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you!😳
Ni33 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

awesome update loved reading it 👍🏼 Tfs dear 🤗

Thank you Chitra! 😳 You are most welcome🤗
Ni33 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: noiseygirl

u stopped here why NINA? It was awsmmm ...do cont soon ...thanks 4 PM

I love cliffhangers.😆 Both reading and writing them. 😆 Thank you dear.😳
Well, I can't promise anything, not before 16 october anyway. 😆
You are welcome.😳
Thanks for commenting.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Don't know what to say about the update. It was an edge of the seat update.

Like Madhu I also wanted Sultan to speak up and then the gun shots & you ended the update.
Continue soon.

Thanks for the wonderful comment dear!😳🤗
It was my intention.😆 Hope I didn't disappoint you.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you!😳

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