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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hurray!! 1st to comment on ur 1st work!!🥳

Nina dear, firstly a huge thanks for writing such a story on rishbala!! i'm a huge fan of Bond movies & i was longing to read similar kind of story in rishbala version.. finally u came up with this!!😛 🤗

a big congo for ur first work!!🥳

i cant believe this is ur first story!!😲 u have written mighty fine dear!!👏 awesome start!!👏

kundra, rishbak kundra & maik, madhubala malik sounds like Bond, james Bond😉

even i added the bond bgm while they say their name!!😆

i find this madhubala is too brazen!!😉

u hooked up me in very 1st chapter itself!! now i'm eager to no what's gonna happen next!! how they knew each other? what is there in their past? what they are gonna do now? are they spies or cop or secret agent? i wanna know everything!!

but no hurry, u can update whenever u feel like updating!!😳

& haan.. special mention to title - i loved it!! i find it apt to the story!! it says a lot!!😉

thanks for the pm!!😊

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kg15

@kg15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Congratulations for the New Fiction, dear!! Great that you started writing!!

It's really intriguing to read yaa...

I am a huge fan of Die Hard and Bond movies... Saw them many times so it won't be difficult for me to attach with your stuff!!!

Looking forward to read more from you!!

Keep it Up Buddy!!! :D

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

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Posted: 11 years ago

wooww...welcome to the club...i was just hoping for new stories from thw writers..as I myself wanted to start anew FF...gosh..this is just amazing..a totally new concept...loved it...👏👏👏

BTW..keep updating and let's contribute for the FOrum's positive activity...we have to make Rishabala alive...and trend for Season-2...😃😃😃

Lot of things...huh..love yah 😳😳😳

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Azra Zaidi

@AzraZaidi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Congrats dear 😊😊

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Azra Zaidi

@AzraZaidi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Intresting 😊

Do continue

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Ni33

@Ni33

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kg15
Congratulations for the New Fiction, dear!! Great that you started writing!!
It's really intriguing to read yaa...

I am a huge fan of Die Hard and Bond movies... Saw them many times so it won't be difficult for me to attach with your stuff!!!

Looking forward to read more from you!!

Keep it Up Buddy!!! :D

Thanks Kavya di!😃 It means a lot t hear such wonderful comments from an experienced writer as yourself. Thank God, I'm not the only girl who had seen Die Hard and Bond movies. Before speaking with Tainar, I believed I was the only one.😆

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Ni33

@Ni33

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashabanerjee
wooww...welcome to the club...i was just hoping for new stories from thw writers..as I myself wanted to start anew FF...gosh..this is just amazing..a totally new concept...loved it...👏👏👏

BTW..keep updating and let's contribute for the FOrum's positive activity...we have to make Rishabala alive...and trend for Season-2...😃😃😃

Lot of things...huh..love yah 😳😳😳

Thanks! 😉😃 Of course, we will not let this fourm get shut down now, will we. 😉

Of course, anything for MB.

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Ni33

@Ni33

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AzraZaidi
Congrats dear 😊😊

Originally posted by: AzraZaidi
Intresting 😊
Do continue

Thanks Azra! 😃 Will sure do.

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kg15

@kg15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ni33

Thanks Kavya di!😃 It means a lot t hear such wonderful comments from an experienced writer as yourself. Thank God, I'm not the only girl who had seen Die Hard and Bond movies. Before speaking with Tainar, I believed I was the only one.😆

You know me??? 😲 To be very frank dear, I didn't expect it at all... Lol

I am not at all an experienced writer darling! It's just that I have written few shots. There are many more talented, ace ones here than me!!! But I tell you, you have really got an interesting style!! Keep going with it... I love such films a lot hence watched them a lot...:)

May I know your name dear?? :)

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SuRu

@My_VivJaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Firstly a Big CONGRATULATIONS dear for ur First story!!!
actually I saw ur post regrding this story but didn't cmmnt as I never saw any bond films nd don't knw how to portray such spy characters!!! sorry dear!

Now coming to ur story u pen down it excellently dear!!! I must say u describe both Rishbala in an amazing way I totally loved it.. 👏
Will love to read it further!!! continue soon dear!!! :D

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