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Ni33

@Ni33

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Posted: 11 years ago

#761

Originally posted by: zelja89
Awesome update 👏

Thank you dear!😳

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Ni33

@Ni33

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Posted: 11 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: poojabhatt934
Awsome update
Luvd it

Thank you so much!😳🤗

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Karamjeet Kaur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#763

How could u end like that????
jab update itni Intresting twist per thi u just end...
But Nice update...Awesome hoti agar who Sulltan idiot itna waqt ek baat per na lagata nd even in end he didn't tell...
Where is Rk????
Missinggg him...

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Love-Blossoms

@Love-Blossoms

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#764

ohh god no rk again uff
n wat can i expect frm sullu bhaiya he will irritate even in update lol thats wat he do best eat my rk ki update presence
okay coming to update u have confused me like anything
this past n.present is just damm going above my head
now to only rk can help me to understand something
hope in next part he is there n he enlightens my poor brains which bhai has put in rest mode bcoz of his you were right chanting lol
it was nice update but expecting rocking update for future
n hope i dnt forget the story in a month

all the best for ur exams
study well godbless

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Ni33

@Ni33

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Posted: 11 years ago

#765

Originally posted by: karamjeet
How could u end like that????
jab update itni Intresting twist per thi u just end...
But Nice update...Awesome hoti agar who Sulltan idiot itna waqt ek baat per na lagata nd even in end he didn't tell...
Where is Rk????
Missinggg him...

Thanks for the comment!😳

Well, I like cliffhangers that's why I ended it like that.😆 I am sorry if I disappointed you.😳 But if I felt if I had written something more, it wouldn't be up the mark.

Yeah, Sullu is an idiot.😆 He is a persistent idiot.😆

Well RK didn't appear in this update, but he will hopefully in the next.

Am not quite sure if I should disclose the whole shooting scene and the aftermath of it. Or just some part of it and then go back to the funeral, end it and get back to the bar. I am a bit confused. 😕 Cause just like you I want RK to appear. Which will only happen after the shooting. But either way, right after that RK will appear. I miss him also.😳 Only then we can all enjoy that flirtatious RK.😳 And a snarky, sassy Madhubala to match his personal. That you can be sure of. 😆

Thanks again for your comment! 😳 I appreciate it.🤗

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Ni33

@Ni33

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#766

Originally posted by: NehaVdian
ohh god no rk again uff
n wat can i expect frm sullu bhaiya he will irritate even in update lol thats wat he do best eat my rk ki update presence
okay coming to update u have confused me like anything
this past n.present is just damm going above my head
now to only rk can help me to understand something
hope in next part he is there n he enlightens my poor brains which bhai has put in rest mode bcoz of his you were right chanting lol
it was nice update but expecting rocking update for future
n hope i dnt forget the story in a month

all the best for ur exams
study well godbless

Yeah that he does. 😆

Yeah, while thinking about it myself I my own mind went 🤪I think I went a little above with those flashbacks. Believe me I won't make that mistake again. 😆 A flashback in a flashback in a flashback.😆 But a when a person remembers one thing they automatically remember another. Which I tried to portray but, I guess somewhere along the line it went wrong. But I am happy you all tell me that, so I won't make that mistake again.😳 All comments are appreciated.😳

Yeah, I hope so as well. Will see. I am thinking of ending those two flashbacks and get back to the bar. Then we will see that flirtatious RK and a snarky and sassy Madhubala. Hopefully all of that will be in the next chapter or two chapters. But RK will be coming. And will stay in the story after that.

Will do my best on fulfilling your wish.😳 I hope so as well.

Thank you!🤗 And thanks for the wonderful comments!🤗

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Meghana

@simply.meghana

Achiever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#767

Nooo Nina
I hate cliffhangers!!!!!!! 😆

Update soon
I want to know what happens next
You got me on the edge of my seat now!!!!! 😃

Update soon

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Ni33

@Ni33

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#768

Originally posted by: Abhiya4life
Nooo Nina
I hate cliffhangers!!!!!!! 😆

Update soon
I want to know what happens next
You got me on the edge of my seat now!!!!! 😃

Update soon

Well I love them.😳😆 Both reading and writing them.😆

Can't make any promises.😭

Well so do I. I want to update so I can show you.😆

That was my idea.😆