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Posted: 11 years ago
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miss him and his grey shaded character I am thinking of writing a fanfiction


story summary:
All it took was one perfect dimpled smile and he knew that he had to have her...
god had other plans
she was to marry another
but he knew that she would be his and only his.
he didn't believe in god
he would become her god
he would make her his

and what rishab kundra wanted he got>>>
TELL ME IF YOU WILL BE INTRESETED???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I really liked it, go ahead i am with u 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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continue plsss n pm me
nice start
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nice start
continue soon n pm me
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awesome concept dear
please start it soon
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i would love to read this story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Okay so here is my first chapter...

Premise
Madhubala and Rishab are married living in the mountains of karvasthan, A sucessful actor with young beautiful, wife that nobody has seen, that he keeps to himself.
His obsession.
This story will be set in present day.
And shots of the past of how the couple got married. So please be ready...
And tell me what you guys think :)
Present day.
Madhu sat on the window seat of her beautiful house. The doors had been locked again.
RK had locked them again. So she wouldn't run away.
Opening on the window she saw Bittuji busy talking to someone.
"Bittuji, please open the door" She begged with tears afresh in her eyes.
Bittuji looked around before going towards the window.
"Bhabiji I can't, chief doesn't like it and last time I left them open you tried to run away" Bittuji said shaking his head.
"Please he has kept me inside all week, just let me out for a few hours" Madhu begged.
Bittuji could hear in the distance the sound of a speeding engine. Chief was coming home.
"I have to go" Bittuji said gulping uncomfortably, nobody was aloud to speak to her. Nobody was aloud to look at her.
Madhu closed her eyes as the door opened, the slow whistling of hum hai dewaane tera dewaane hit her ears making her cringe.
"Biwi, come welcome your husband home" He shouted, Madhu turned her face away as he walked towards her.
A hand snaked around her waist pulling her up against him.
Madhu pulled away, and walked away from him, only to have him grab her wrist in an iron clad hold.
"Don't turn your back to me, there are two people you don't turn your back to god and the other me" He said pulling her back against him.
"I will runaway, the first chance I get I will" she promised him.
"And I will find you, no matter where on earth you go..."He answered back kissing her neck softly making her jump, her skin turned a deep shade of red.


1 year ago...
Rishab opened his canister flask and took in a long sip, a wailing women was affluently arguing with the director.
Bittuji was busy on his phone rescheduling his shooting for tomorrow. The sheer level of noise started to get to him.
"Bittuji please shut them up" He said closing his eyes and leaning back on his soft velvet cautioned chair.
"What's going on, here?" Bittuji always had a habit of screaming when he spoke. Rishab groaned inwardly.
"This women wants an advance, for her daughter's wedding" The director, said looking annoyed.
"Then give her one, why are you fighting so much for" Bittuji asked feeling his third phone in his pocket begin to vibrate.
"She never came and shot the scene these junior artists think they are, the real hero's, get out of here" He said pushing the sari clad women away.
Suddenly the set went quiet, as the soft sound of tinkering bangles, made Rishab open his eyes.
He gasped she was beautiful, dressed in a simple white suit as she walked past people stared with their mouths hanging.
"She is even more beautiful then the heroine" He heard someone whisper, she wrapped her arm around the women that had been fighting for her pay.
"Ma, let's go" She said softly, Her mother stared at her with tears in her eyes.
"Madhu, what are we going to do the money..." Her mother cried.
"Ma, please stop crying, when you cry I start to cry, we don't need it, I spoke to Mukul, his mother is no longer asking for a dowry" Her mother sighed in relief.
Rishab watched as she never once gave any attention to the director nor did she give any attention to anyone on the set.
"Bittuji, PACK UP!!!" Everybody broke out of their spellbound state. She looked up at him and smiled politely. She had dimples, she was probably the most beautiful girl he had ever seen"
"B-b-but chief" Bittuji turned away, he knew better than to ask questions. Nobody questioned RK.
"Sir, we only shot one scene..." The director started off, RK held up his palm.
"Put all the expenses on my account" He said, slowly circling the director before stopping in front of her.
"What a beautiful daughter you have Mrs...?" He said politely as he could, turning on all of his charm. Her sparkling eyes distracted him, by their slightly naughty expressive manner.
"Malik, yes thank you sir" her mother stared up at him with a wary look in her eyes. While the daughter just stared with her slight dimpled smile.
"I am RK" he said holding out his hand for her to shake, she took and her smile deepened.
"Madhu" she pronounced in a soft sweet voice. In took all he had in him not to grab her then and there.
She had a gold ring on her finger.
She was engaged.
"Getting married soon?" He asked, her mother stared at him with a confused expression.
"Yes, next week in fact" her bright smile deepened at the thought.
"Arranged, or a love marriage?" He asked without a skip of a beat.
"He had seen madhu at the market and the next day he proposed, brought his whole family to our house" Her mother answered.
"You know him? " He asked another question.
"No she trusts me to choose the right boy for her" Her mother answered for her again.
"Bittuji!" RK shouted turning away for a second.
By then madhu disappeared.
"Yes chief" Bittuji answered.
When RK turned around the girl and her mother had disappeared.
"I want to know everything there is to know about this Madhu Malik"

Edited by RKDEWAANA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I really enjoyed the response from yesterday, it made me write this one a whole lot faster.
Please enjoy.
And tell me what you think :)
Here goes chapter 2


Present day
Rishab sat down lithly onto an antique rocking chair. Swiftly pulling her into his lap, her skin still brightly flushed from his previos kiss, he held her tightly as she squirmed trying to get away.
"There was time, when you loved being in my arms" He mused somewhat, Madhu stilled herself.
"Let me go" She repeated so calmly that Rishab raised a brow.
"Bahoon ki daarmiya" He sang hugging her tightly against him.
He laughed at her enraged expression, she was always the most beautiful when she was angry.


1 year ago
Madhu sat down, as Aman came in, he was only three years old, but loved coming over to see her.
"Madhu" He squeled in delight as she picked him up and placed him on her lap.
A loud knock on the door made her look up.
"RK, what are you doing here?" She asked confusedly, why would the Romance hero of bollywood come to the chawl to there particular door.
Aman's finger stabbed her cheek playfully, Rishab found his stomach doing a turn in as he watched the child touch her so openly, He knew it was ridiculous to be jealous, but he could not help the green feelings he received.
"I came to see your mother" He prounounced the entire sentence foreignly as though it even sounded strange to him.
Outside tenants came out and stared at him, Madhu put Aman down.
"Come in" She said closing the door.
"Ma went to the temple, I don't know when she will be back, do you wish to wait, or perhaps maybe you could tell me and I could pass on a message to her" Madhu suggested while Aman held her leg protectively.
"My Madhu" He said adorably, Madhu laughed, While RK raised a brow, was this child really trying to compete with him?
"If you were a little bit bigger Sweethart I would marry you without a second thought" She told him picking him up again.
"My Madhu" He said hugging her, while she laughed.
"Its rather important, I shall wait, is he related to you?" RK asked politely, He smirked innerly as the thought of her holding one of his children, the thought of her being pregnant with his child was intoxicating, blooming with his seed.
There house was the size of his kitchen, the walls were covered with family pictures that tried vainly to block out the cracked walls.
"No his my neighbour's son" She said rubbing his back softly.
RK found his eyes unable to move away from her face.
"You are very beautiful" He said without thinking he was rewarded with a pretty flush.
The kid fell asleep quickly and she placed him on the couch and guarded him by placing pillows near the edge so he wouldn't fall down.
"Thank you" She quickly got up and went into her kitchen looking for cups.
"Your home is rather lovely" He said getting up, and standing near her. Madhu smiled as she found the ice and placed them in side a tumbler and handed it to him.
"Ma always says we should never let a guest stay without ofering them atleast a glass of water"
Madhu watched with open shock as he drank it quickly and then placed a hand one either side of her waist on the kitchen counter and leaned in placing the cup there she felt her heart gallop like a prized stallion.
"Thank you" He muttered a little bit intoxicated by being so close to her.
He could hear the door open but did not move away and looked up to find, Mrs Malik, standing with Mukul her fiance at the door.
Just as he had planned.


Edited by RKDEWAANA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter three will be up shortly sweetharts😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hope rk's obsession will turned to love soon
love your story want a nice ending
Edited by ainanwer - 11 years ago

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