RiMa FF: My Brutal Love...[Thread 2 link on pg 1]

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kg15

@kg15

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

Amazing update Suru! Loved to read RK's point of view! Loved every bit of it... Eager to know the reason for Madhu's hatred for RK...

Continue Soon!

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kia karoge jaan kar

@JsparrowJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

you given update at night i waited whole day

well coming to episode

well actually if i would be in your position i never given r.k. POV to create suspense as its going on now from past and present case i will always makes in readers mind that wheather he loved him or not

well that question was in my mind but you totally cleared the same...well from todays episode it was confirm that he also liked madhu or i can say attracted..

and madhu is cute and you explain ezpressions well

awesome update and beautifully written R.K. POV..this told me that he was feeling same as madhu strange without bag..and also he tries to be cool which he is not

and first girl friend hahah never talked to any girl..wah..

waiting for next

and thanxx for dedication ya i wa swaiting from long...

and update regularly

LOVE U MY SURUJAAN

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Swati

@PRATHA1

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#463

Awesome update Suru! this RK's pov is nicely written! I liked it!
waiting for the next update!

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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#464

Cute Update

RK's pov was unexpected

Liked how he was thinking and confused abt madhu's behavior

hehe madhu was copying rk's handwriting

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Desire6

@Desire6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#465

Now u can say me a greedy...ofcourse after reading ...past 'rks pov ..now am eager to read present RKs pov

jus loved whole study part...nd dat sleepin part was so cute..😳
hehehe she is a real talent in copyin handwritiin

all in all a cute update...
so sparks dono taraf hai...

jus now more curious to know wat went wrong...in past ki unka present aisa hai...

waitin
waiti Suru...next part jaldi dena...🤗

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#466

awesome update..
loved it rk pov..
he started feeling something for madhu...

continue soon

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#467

WOW!! reading RK's p.o.v. made the story more beautiful...loved it..I know u have planned it to write in madhu's p.o.v...but I don't mind to read more of RK's p.o.v..., specially present one...

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SuRu

@My_VivJaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#468

Originally posted by: AzraZaidi
Res
UNRES😉

Yesss !!!!!!! I am first⭐️⭐️⭐️
The update was awesome Rks POV was something i dint expect but i would love to know present rks POV😉😉😉

This update was cute !! Loved rks thoughts, he was so confused wit madhus behavior😆😆
The ending was very cute !!!! And madhu copying rks handwriting was funny😉

First congratulations dear 🤗

thanks glad u loved it all!!! now sr RK view its not possible!!! 😛
yup he is confused soul just like u my confused soul 😆