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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: momi78
This update was not at all boring ... this chapter was very much needed for the story to move forward. And you wrote it beautifully! Please continue soon ...

Thank you and it was needed.. 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: NehaVdian
superb going
pehle part mein hi kabab mein haddi ko maar diya haha u know our crazoness for rk
n update ur other story too plss
that hum hai deewane story
waiting for it

Yes everyone happy that i ended abhay's chap in first part... And yes I will update my story soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Emotional Update[/QUOTE

yess

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bald

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

nice concept

waiting for rishbala moments

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: bald
nice concept
waiting for rishbala moments

Thanks.. And yes hopefully I will put some rishbala moments in next part...

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varsha joshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Superb n waiting for rishbala

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janvi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

gr8 part..

cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,

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revti21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Nice update...waitin fr rishbala meeting

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

THANK YOU ALL WHO LIKED PREVIOUS UPDATE AND COMMENTED.. HERE GOES THE NEXT PART.."

Chapter 3

"Mohan I was thinking to keep a puja at our place for peace.." Radha told.. "Yes why not.." Radhaji smiled at turned at Padmini's side "Padmini ji u and ur family are invited and take Madhu also.. She will feel better.." Padmini nodded ok...

At night.. Kundra place... At the dinning table.. Everyone having their dinner silently.. "Rishu tmrw dnt go for shoot.." Radhaji said him and he gave her a question look.. "Tmrw I kept a puja here.. And you have to stay here.." "But I dnt want to attend anu puja.. I have my work.." He spoke rudely.. "I am not saying you.. I am ordering you to stay here tmrw at any cost.. Infact I informed Bittuji to change your schedule..." RK fumed and left the dinning table...

Next morning... All the servents were busy in decoration.. Radhaji and Mohan also... Malik family arrived... Madhu looked all over the house and remembered when she first came here with Abhay.. Her eyes filled with tears... Radhaji came and hugged her.. Later the priest came and Radhaji and Mohan welcome him... The puja starts.. RK and Madhu both were there.. "Where is the Aarti thal Radhaji??" Priest asked her.. Radhaji looked at Madhu and said "Madhu beta.. I kept the aarti thal in my room.. Can you please take it.." Madhu nodded and went upstairs.. Tha havan was running suddenly RK's phone rings... He picked his call ""Hello!!!" "I didnt hear anything.. Wait a minute.." He spoke and left outside.. After sometime he was coming inside the hall while checking his phone and suddenly he bumped with Madhu... She slipped and the Aarti thal which Madhu was holding overturned in sky and the sindoor fall on her forehead.. She was about to fall when RK hold her by her waist... Everyone looked at them... RK made her stand properly and looked at her forehead and fumed and went to upstairs... Radhaji came near Madhu.. "Maa I.." "Its ok Madhu.." Radhaji spoke and looked at her forehead.. Madhu felt something and she touched and saw sindoor on her fingure... She immediately took her dupatta to clean it.. Then they attend the puja... After the puja Radhaji took Madhu in her room.. "Maa why are you take me here??" Madhu asked surprisingly.. "Madhu.. Actually I.. I want to ask you something.." Madhu nodded her head.. "Madhu I dnt know whatever I am thinking is right or wrong but I want to make your marriage with my Rishu..." She spoke with hesitate.. Madhu was shocked.. "Maa what are you saying.." She asked her shockingly... Radhaji took her near the mirror.. Madhu saw herself and noticed there was some sindoor left on her forehead.. Madhu was trying to clear it with her palm but it didnt remove.. "Madhu.. Dnt you think God signal you something.." "No maa.. I cant think about it.. I cant give Abhay's place to anyone.." Saying this was going to left but stopped when she heard "If I told you it was Abhay's last wish then.." Madhu got another shock.. She turned at Radhaji's side and gave a question look.. "Yes Madhu.. Abhay told this to Rishu when he was taking his last breath.." Radhaji spoke with teary eyes... "No.. No.. He cant do this.. He knew it very well that I cant love anyone except him.. Then how.." Radhaji came near her and caressed her hair "He want to see you happy... He want you to move on in your life.. And today God also signalled me through this sindoor Rishu is your future.." "No maa.. I cant.." Madhu said while crying.. "Dnt you want to fulfill Abhay's last wish??" Radhaji asked her... "I will not force you.. You think about it once.." She spoke and left confuse Madhu behind...

At night.. Madhu was in her room.. She remembered whatever Radhaji told her.. She picked Abhay's photo and caressed his face "Why did you do this.. You know na how much I love you then.." She was sobbing when sh heard a sound "Madhu!!" She looked up and saw Abhay.. "You know what time can heal every pain.. Madhu I cant see you like this.. I cant see you,spending your life alone.. Madhu I am your past.. We cant meet again.. I know Rishu is perfect for you.. He will keep you happy forever.. Please Madhu move on in your life.. Please fulfill my wish.." Madhu closed her eyes and opened but there was no one.. "Please fulfill my wish..." Abhay's this sentence was echoeing in her ears and she wiped her tears and decided to move on but for Abhay only...

Waiting for your comments..

Edited by ..snow_flake.. - 9 years ago