Rishbala FF ~ Realization ~ Thread 1

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Here I come with a new story line.. Please take your time to read this as it is quiet lengthy... Hope you all will like it...



"Accept the things to which fate binds you,and love the people with whom fate brings you together,but do so with all your heart..."

Chapter One

"I was always thinking,in this world there are so many people who didnt get their love... But I am lucky that I got my love.. He is with me in my life's new journey... He will walk with me by holding my hand... My Abhay.." Madhu thought in her mind while putting red veil over her head... She admires herself...

Abhay,Elder son of Mohan and Radha Kundra... Madhu worked in Kundra office and there she met with him and slowly they both fall in love and today they are getting married..

Padmini was standing behind Madhu,looking at Madhu with teary eyes.. Madhu saw her through the mirror... she turned and wiped her tears and shook her head as no.. Padmini smiled...

In evening,at kundra mansion... Abhay was getting ready... Radhaji came in his room.. "Maa whare is Rishu... Today also he is busy with his shoots.." Abhay asked sadly... Radhaji assured him by saying "He alled me and told me he will come before your wedding.." Rohan nodded as ok and suddenly his phone rang "Hello..." "What.. Ok I am coing..." Abhay said in phone angrily... "What happen Abhay.." Radhaji asked him worriedly.. "Maa I have to go office.. Its urgent..." Abhay said.. "But Abhay we have to leave after an hour... You talk with your manager and ask him to manage..." Radhaji spoke.. But he cut her words by saying "No maa he cnt... I will come within 30mins..." And he left immediately... But again Mohan stopped him in hall and ask him where he is going... "Dad Amerian clients were come.. And they wanted to meet with me and will discuss about the project.. So I have to go..." Abhay spoke hurriedly... "Wait.. I am also coming with you.." Mohan spoke but he cut off "No dad I an manage.." And he left...

At Malik Mansion... Madhu was getting ready... Suddenly Abhay's photo fall from the table due to the heavy wind.. Madhu got panicked... "Abhay!!!" She whispered... Picked her phone immediately and called him... "Hello.." Abhay spoke from opposite side... "Abhay where are you..." Madhu asked him worriedly... "Ammm.. Madhu woh mein..." Abhay was about to complete his sentene when he cut off by Madhu "You what??" "Dnt worry Madhu.. Your groom will not run away.. Be ready.. I will come soon to make to mine forever..." Abhay spoke.. Madhu smiled.. Madhu was going to cut the call when Abhay spoke "Listen..." "Haan.." "I love you.." Abhay spoke.. Madhu blushed and smiled..

At Natraj studio...
"Tum hi mera ishq ho.. tum hi mera junoon.. Tum hi meri dhadkan ho aur tum hi meri zindagi.. Haan Anamika pyar karta hu mein tumse..."
"Cut!!!!" the director spoke loudly.. All the lights turned on... There he was standing Rishabh Kundra,RK... He gave hi5 to director and went to sit.. Bittuji came and gave him coffee... "Bittuji how many scenes are there to take.." RK asked.. "Chief last one..." Bittuji spoke..

At Kundra Mansion... Radhaji was waiting for Abhay.. He didnt come yet... Mohan was also tensed.. He was continuously trying his number but its not reachable... Suddenly he got a call..."What?????" He asked shockingly...

At studio.. RK was giving his last shot.. Bittuji was there also.. suddenly he got a call "What.." RK distracted from his shot.. he looked at Bittuji and came near him "What happen Bittuji.." He asked him worriedly.. "Chief..Woh.." He was stammering.. "Bittuji why are you stammering.. Say something" RK asked him angrily.. "Chief Abhay Sir.. You just come with me..." They duo left from Studio...

At Malik Mansion... Everyone was waiting fro barat.. "Abhay where are you..." Madhu thought in mind.. Tears were rolled out from her eyes,, Radhaji entered in hall... Her eyes were filled with tears... everyone was looking at her shockingly.. Padmini came near her and asked her worriedly "Radhaji Whre is Abhay.. And Mohanji.. Where uis he???" Madhu saw her and came near her runningly "Maa Abhay..."Radhaji stayed mum.. Everyone looking at her curiously.. Finally she broke down on her knees... Everyone was shocked.. Madhu also sat and wiped her tears "Maa.. Where is he??? He is ok naa.. Maa please say something...""Abhay met with an accident..." Radhaji spoke while crying..
Madhu was shocked... Everyone was shocked...

At hospital... RK and Bittuji entered hurriedly.. Bittuji also informed him about Abhay's acident... They saw Mohan was sitting near the OT.. "Dad.." RK spoke.. Mohan looked at him with teary eyes... RK came and hugged him.. He has tears in his eyes...

"How does it happen dad.." RK asked him... That time doctor came out from OT... "Doctor.. Bro.." RK asked but doctor ket silent.. "Why are you staying mum.. Say how is he..." Mohan asked worriedly.. "I am sorry.. We tried a lot.. But.." RK immediateky hold his coller "But what doctor.." He asked angrily.. "He had internal bleeding.. We couldnt stop it... He has some time only.." RK again hold him tightly "How can you say this.." Bittuji make him apart.. doctor excused and left...

Mohan entered in Abhay's cabin.. He was lying there.. He looked at his father with teary eyes... Then he saw RK was coming from behind... "Rishu.." He spoke with a smile... RK came and sat next to him "I am not going to talk with you.." He spoke while crying.. "Will you bid me bye like this Rishu.." Abhay spoke while struggling with his breath.. RK hugged him "Dont go bro.." He apart from him.. "Dad please dnt cry.." Abhay spoke... Suddenly he is breathing fast.. "Bro.." RK whispered.. Abhay held RK's hand.. "Rishu will you fulfill my last wish.." "Me.." "Yes Rishu only you can do this.. Promise me first.." Abhay spoke while struggling.. " Yes I promise you.." "Marry Madhu.." Abhay spoke.. RK was stunned.. He took his hand back.. " Rishu you promised me.. Please Rishu marry her.. Mom dad also want her to make her as their daughter in law.. Now after me.. Only you can do this.. Rishu please say yes.." RK was so confused.. And Abhay was ontinuously forcing him to marry and he says yes... And just then Abhay closed his eyes...

At Malik Mansion.. Everyone was knew about Abhay.. Madhu was sitting there like a statue... Radhaji was continuously crying... Madhu looked at her.. "Maa why are you rying.. You see he will come.. He promised me that he will come.." Madhu spoke.. She was trying to convine everyone.. "Maa.. You believe me na... Abhay will come.." Madhu said to Padmini.. "Madhu take care of urself..." But she didint pay any attention of her words and trying to convince everyone.. Padmini slapped her to make her realize the reality.. "Madhuu Abhay is no more..." "No..." Madhu shouts and she fainted...

RK,Mohan,Bittuji came with Abhay's body for his last ritual and then after completing Kundra family went to their house... RK entered in Abhay's room.. All the past moments were coming near his eyes.. He sat on bed and took his photo... Suddenly he felt a touch on his shoulder and he turned... Mohan was standing there with teary eyes and RK immediately hugged him.. They shared a emotional scene.. Mohan wiped RK's tears.. " Rishu do u remember what u promise to Abhay.." Mohan asked him and RK remembered that.. "Dad please leave me alone... I want to stay alone.." Mohan understand his situation and he left him alone for some time...

Please don't forget to comment...

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~Thread 2 ~



Thank you.

Love, Tulika.
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christobelle thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well nice update
u killed off abhay in the first update itself😆
bokul thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
fantastic start
very intense emotional chapter
kg15 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
An emotional start!! Abhay died!!!
How Madhu and RK gonna come together...???
Update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hmmm...I have a doubt.>RK-Abhay are twin brothers?????
loved the beginning...continue yaar :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update i liked it thank god abhay mar gaya .rashta clear hai rishbala keliye😆so rk going to marry for his bros wish hmm let see what happen and what will be madhu reaction
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start
now rk has to marry with madhu for abhay last wish
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice start...very emotional one..
update the next soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start!!👍🏼
i m happy that u killed abhay in 1st part itself lol!!😆
continue soon dear!!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: christobelle

well nice update

u killed off abhay in the first update itself😆



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