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Posted: 11 years ago
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very beautuful and expressional update, waiting for rk's part, update next part soon.
Edited by uma88 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
The impression madhu has given to kids abt rk
seems to have made them this stubborn
towards him she had just filled them with his leaving part not how much he loved them or cared for them n wat all he did for madhu
its madhus fault that ria is not able to understand that point bcoz madhu herself believe that rk left her for nation he didnt considered somewhere its her fault that she didnt understood rks point
so now even she thinks he ll leave them again
waiting for rks past to come out
i m sure its gonna clarify all
n plss no vikram inbetween
n ria shd accept rk soon no more hurt for him he already beared enough
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Posted: 11 years ago
Excellent update Teekay 👏
Both Madhu and RK changed tremendously. Last 7 years were hell for both of them and both hiding some truths of the past from each other. RK thinks that his truth may hurt Madhu and Madhu doubts wether RK would love her after knowing her truths. And i was wondering what had happend to them. What happend to RK??Who is dipali and i guess RK was kidnapped and tortured by some terrorist. I hope its true. And what happend to Madhu?? Ya she struggled with two little kids in his absence but that truth wont make him dislike her,, right?? I am actually scared to know about their past. But what ever happend it wasn't their fault . They didn't do it intentionally , right? We can only blame destiny here ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update!!! :-) I hope next update would be RK's story :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG! u r an AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME writer and I LOVE ur work;i'm MESMERIZED by this story of madhu and RK,and i do wait eagerly for the next update,bye and god bless u dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Needless to say, update was awesome.

madhu's feelings are understandable but somehow I feel she has given children the impression that RK has left them instead of impressing upon them that he was doing his duty towards nation.
Finally waiting for RK's story.


That;s not true. Hopefully the next chapter would clarify. She told her children about her father and his heroics as a fighter pilot. Rohan in fact is a huge fan of her father's stories. She told them he couldn't be there for them because he was a great pilot and was needed to protect the country. But some times it's not what you say that's the only things that matter. She grieved for him, cried and struggled a lot in his absence. The kids see that, and somehow they absorbed that their father leaving gave their mother a lot of pain, which hurts them too - Ria in particular because she's the more sensitive and also older kid.

She did impress upon them that they didn't need a father, or to be more correct didn't need both parents, to grow up. She wanted to be both a mother and a father to them, and also not let them believe when their grandmother (padmini) would tell the kids on the phone some times about if they would like madhu to remarry and get them a daddy.

The part about Madhu wishing she had told better stories about Rishabh was basically implied to say that her stories were in past tense and some times she won't go into many details because remembering Rishabh would increase her own pain. Had she known he was alive, her stories would have a lot more hope. She could have kept their father alive all this while for her kids if there was a chance he would return.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NehaVdian

The impression madhu has given to kids abt rk
seems to have made them this stubborn
towards him she had just filled them with his leaving part not how much he loved them or cared for them n wat all he did for madhu
its madhus fault that ria is not able to understand that point bcoz madhu herself believe that rk left her for nation he didnt considered somewhere its her fault that she didnt understood rks point
so now even she thinks he ll leave them again
waiting for rks past to come out
i m sure its gonna clarify all
n plss no vikram inbetween
n ria shd accept rk soon no more hurt for him he already beared enough


I understand where you're coming from. It's easy to find faults with madhu/kids, but would just add one point from madhu's perspective. Yes, RK is a hero. But to Madhu, he was her love, her husband and the father of her children first. As much as she was proud of him, does she have no right to want or demand RK and/or get hurt on her promises being broken and being placed low in his priority - for whatever reason. I believe the wife and the lover has the right to feel hurt and angry, the woman and the responsible citizen would probably understand and respect him. The two can co-exist.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: teekay


That;s not true. Hopefully the next chapter would clarify. She told her children about her father and his heroics as a fighter pilot. Rohan in fact is a huge fan of her father's stories. She told them he couldn't be there for them because he was a great pilot and was needed to protect the country. But some times it's not what you say that's the only things that matter. She grieved for him, cried and struggled a lot in his absence. The kids see that, and somehow they absorbed that their father leaving gave their mother a lot of pain, which hurts them too - Ria in particular because she's the more sensitive and also older kid.

She did impress upon them that they didn't need a father, or to be more correct didn't need both parents, to grow up. She wanted to be both a mother and a father to them, and also not let them believe when their grandmother (padmini) would tell the kids on the phone some times about if they would like madhu to remarry and get them a daddy.

The part about Madhu wishing she had told better stories about Rishabh was basically implied to say that her stories were in past tense and some times she won't go into many details because remembering Rishabh would increase her own pain. Had she known he was alive, her stories would have a lot more hope. She could have kept their father alive all this while for her kids if there was a chance he would return.

I agree kids are sensitive n absorb a lot thats happening around them.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: teekay



I understand where you're coming from. It's easy to find faults with madhu/kids, but would just add one point from madhu's perspective. Yes, RK is a hero. But to Madhu, he was her love, her husband and the father of her children first. As much as she was proud of him, does she have no right to want or demand RK and/or get hurt on her promises being broken and being placed low in his priority - for whatever reason. I believe the wife and the lover has the right to feel hurt and angry, the woman and the responsible citizen would probably understand and respect him. The two can co-exist.

yes she has right to be hurt
but without knowing his full story one cant judge
wat was the reason behind a particular step of his
n if we see there r ppl in this world who actually prefer their nations over their families
n being dedicated to their country they prefer their country over their families as its their first family n even their priority as being in charge of serving the country u cant put urself above it
u need to compromise a lot
so thats the reason its easy to see rks pov as a soldier n moreover madhu is reaching to conclusions that he ll leave again
without knowing his side of story wat actually happened to him she cant decide y he left
its her right to question him n demand answers but before knowing anything drawing conclusions over his past actions is not right
as even he didnt do anything intentionally
now if he wld have broken his promise intentionally then it was right to judge him but wen even he wasnt aware of it then how can one judge him n if one wants to have a balanced relationship u need to know all the perspectives of his scenario first bcoz life is too short to be living in doubts abt ur partner so its better to clear them first rather than reaching to conclusions
thats all i ll say n i m not finding faults in madhu n kids just stating a pov as a reader wat i felt i hope i have not offended u
Edited by NehaVdian - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Uuff ... what a wonderful update ... trust, love, promise ... all words seem so empty when someone faces a situation like this!

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