rishbala ff - destiny brings them together NOTE on page 40 (ON HOLD) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: christobelle

nice but small

try to update bigger one


next time i will try a bigger one
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Betting with ones feeling just to prove charm ... absurd. ..

Hope both brothers fell in their own trap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Nice start.👏
I think they know eachother already. may be trishna is madhu's elder sis😊
Does madhu love anyone?🤔 or she wud fall for RK n he wud reject her for dipali bcz he loves her😡
I think rk wud losw bet n sultan wud tell him to do wat he [ sultan ] was supposed to do to win bet. jus my pov😆
continue soon dear n make it bigger one nex time👍🏼🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL

Nice start.👏

I think they know eachother already. may be trishna is madhu's elder sis😊
Does madhu love anyone?🤔 or she wud fall for RK n he wud reject her for dipali bcz he loves her😡
I think rk wud losw bet n sultan wud tell him to do wat he [ sultan ] was supposed to do to win bet. jus my pov😆
continue soon dear n make it bigger one nex time👍🏼🤗


nyc guess dear... u will get to know in next chapter how they are related
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice! Continue soon please and pm me ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

Betting with ones feeling just to prove charm ... absurd. ..

Hope both brothers fell in their own trap



this is how rk is... emotionless
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
that was nice
its good to see that r.k. and sultan have good relationship
it would be fun to read next
and oops they know madhu before

anyway update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

CHAPTER 2

"you know her?how?" said rishabh and sultan to each other.

Rishabh: she and i were in the same school in london. But aap kaise jante ho usse?

Sultan: well she is the auditor of our company. She audits are company accounts.

Rishabh: agr wo humari company ki auditor hai to mujhe kaise nhi pata chala?

Sultan: kyunki dad ne 3 days phele hi Miss Malik ki firm se baat ki hai. Infact aaj wo humare office aane wali hai contract sign krne.

Rishabh:ohh... now it will be easy for you to make her fall in your love as she will work with us.

Sultan: have you gone mad? Agr ghr me kisi ko pata chal gya to jante ho na kya hoga?

Rishabh: mujhe nhi pata tha ki RK ka bhai itna bada darpok hai. Bhai agr aapko darr lag rha hai to bata do...

Sultan: mujhe manzoor hai...

Rishabh: ok then the bet is on

Both RK and Sultan headed towards their home. RK look at madhu once again who was playing with some kids with an air of carefree confidence that is most noticable in her almond eyes. He was just lost in her eyes.

Sultan: kaha reh gya rishu? Hearing Sultan voice he came out of his trance.

ON THE WAY

Sultan: dekhlio ye bet to me hi jeetuga.

RK: dekhte hai. (thinking) madhu aap ki flirty lines se impress nhi hogi bhai coz wo un ladkio mein se nhi hai jo smart aur rich ladko ke piche bhagti hai. Ye bet to me hi jeetuga aur vaise bhi RK never lose

KUNDRA MANSION

Radha: aaj tum dono ko itna late kaise ho gya ? aaj se phele to kabhi bhi itni der nhi ki park me, phir aaj kyu late ho gye

RK: kch nhi maa bs aaj kch jyada execise kr li

Radha: acha tum log office ke liye ready ho jao mein patil se keh kr breakfast lagwati hu

RK and Sultan: ok maa

IN RK ROOM

Rk came out from shower and then his phone rings.

Deepali: goodmorning hero!

RK : goodmorning sweetheart! So how is your shoot going?

Deepali: its great. Everyone here appreciates my work. And you know what i signed a contract for 5 yrs with a company.

RK: what? How can you do this Deepali? You know that signing this contract means we can't marry each other for next 5 yrs.

Deepali: yes i know it. But abhi shadi krni kisko hai? Abhi to mujhe apne heroine banne ke dream ko pura krna hai. Mujhe abhi koi shadi nhi krni.

RK: but you know na ki maa is forcing me to get marry soon. Infact mene to socha tha ki tum jab shoot se aoge tab me tumse shadi ki baat kruga

Deepali (angrily): have you lost it RK? i don't know what you think but i am not ready for marriage. So its better ki tum apni maa ko smjhaobut mein abhi shadi nhi kar skti.

RK : how dare you talk to me like this Deepali?

Deepali(faking tone): i am sorry hero. You know na how much i luv u. Its just that i was little stressed coz of work so i talk to you like this. But i really love you a lot. Plz dont get angry with me.

RK: its ok. Even i am sry ki me tum par chilaya. Chalo tum shooting par dhyan do me maa ko samjha dunga. bye

Deepali: bye hero. Love you.

RK: love you too and they disconnected the call

Deepali: what he think of himself ? bs ek baar me star ban jau phir bataugi usse ki wo kya hai

She asked the man laying in her bed " baby hum tumhare daddy se kab milege?"

Sikander: very soon sweet heart . itni bhi kya jaldi hai

Deepali: mein uss rk ko dikhana chathi hu ki mujhe ab uski koi jarurat nhi hai. Jis din me tumhare daddy ke sath contract sign karugi unki nayi film mein heroine usi din me uss rk ko uski aukat dikahugi

Sikander: jaldi hi milege daddy ji se. Jab tak tum meri jarurat ka khayal rakhogi me tumhara khayal rakhuga saying this he kissed her and take her into the bed.

KUNDRA MANSION

Radha: rishu deepali kab aa rhi hai apni shoot se vapas. Mujhe tum dono ki shadi ki date fix krni hai.

RK: wo maa... actually mujhe aap se kch baat krni thi.

Radha: haa bolo

RK: wo maa mein aur deepail abhi shadi nhi kr skte kyunki Deepali ne 5 yrs ke liye contract sign kia hai aur vaise bhi abhi hum shadi ke liye ready bhi to nhi hai.

Radha: bs bhoth ho gya rishu. Tum bache nhi ho. Bade ho gye ho. Society me log kya kahege ki bade bhai ki shadi ko 4 saal ho gye aur chote bhai ki shadi hi nhi ho rhi. 2 months mein tum 26 ke ho jaoge. Mein tumhe tab tak ka time deti hu ya to tum Deepali ko shadi ke liye mana lo ya phir me tumhari shadi apni pasand ki kisi ladki ke sath krwa dugi.

Rishabh( shocked): maa aap janti hai ki mein deepali se kitna pyar krta hu. Mein kisi aur se shadi nhi kar skta

Radha: to phir ja kar deepali ko manao saying this she headed towards her rrom, leaving behind a shocked RK who don't know how to convice his mother and gf.

Well it almost took 3 hrs to write this. It would be great if you press like and comment.

Edited by bald - 11 years ago
christobelle thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
i forgot to appreciate
i know it requires immense patience to write a stuff
3 hrs hard work is grt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update...continue soon...plz pm me when you update
one request plz try to write in english

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