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Originally posted by: shasha1989

fantastic update

Originally posted by: rekha.366

nice update😃

Originally posted by: karamjeet

Awesome update...Madhu is tooo muchhh...working on dhaba lol...plzzz Continue soon...

Originally posted by: uma88

So finally hero and heroine met, but why his face was covered, update next part soon.

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

superb update

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi

Nice update

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

akku marvaye gi kya blue eyes blue eyes blue eyes...bolke.😡🤪🤣

ab honey singh ko kahase ladko ke liye naya valla blue eyes ganaa gane ke liye bulau...🤔🤣

mera hero agaya...jaldi jaldi darshan bhi karade na akku plzzz...☺️

vaise your narration is terrific...i feel as though i've seen thoese blue eyes my self😉

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

so caught up with Captain Jack Sparrow's updates finally hehe !!

Am loving the concept Sparrow and loved all the updates as i read them in one go 😛😛😛 !!
Please continue soon Sparrow...from now on me gonna be regular hun 😛😉

part 4

his face is covered only I can see his ANGELIC BLUE EYES

ITS PEACE I M LOOSING MYSELF its peacefull to sleep everything is fading this blue eyes I m...

He saved me ahh ye kya hua tha mujhe if I was unconscious this place wiered arrey haan meri bus ka accident hua tha blue eyes he saved me there he is someone standing there

"Excuse me" said i

He turned but ye wo ni hai he don't have blue eyes he has simple eyes as we have something blackish brownish

"hello maidam jee " said he

"kya aap ne mujhe bachaya" janti toh hu nahi bachaya but chalo confirm kar leti hu

"nahi nahi aap yahi pari hui thi ham ne toh bus aap par pani maara hai " said he

His phone rings its karma wali tone te te te te te te

"hello" he was speaking loudly

"kaha na ho jaega ek bar jo raja ne koi kaam le liya toh wo phir poora kar kee hee dum leta hai samjhe chalo rakho jai basaman mama kee" he was talking accha toh iska naam raja hai

Smile toh kafi acchi hai dono cheeks pe dimple atti hai he is cute

"suno" I said "pls meri help kar do I don't knoe abt this place mujhe rewa jana hai pls mujhe chor do"

"madad toh kar denge par chor nahi paenge maidam jee" sais he

"Madhubala naam hai mera maidam jee mt bulao" I said

"chaliye phir Madhubala jee" said he

We walked for a while and get main road

"dekhiye maidam jee ye road seedhe aapko rewa le jaegi hame yaha se ulta jaana hai toh aap jaaeye" said he

"yaha se akele kit... kitni dur hai rewa" I was confused yaar

"derh du so hoga arrey nahi samjgi 150 - 200 km" said he simply

150 km kaha se jaugi yaar ye kaisa insaan hai

Before I say anything he started again " pachaas rupiyaa" said he

I was confused muh se nikla "hainn"

"fifhty fifty rupees only nikalie" said he

"fifty rupees kyu" I was still confused

"aapko waha se yaha tak ka rasta dikhane k liye ab koi kaam free me toh na hee karenge ham toh nikaliye" said he in his ajeeb se tone

I was still watching him awakwardly

"arrey nikaliye" he was louder this time

Okay I gave him 50 rupees he snatched it from me

"ye hui na baat dekhiye maid... Madhubala jee yaha se koi gari pakrogi toh seedhe rewa jaogi chalo jai basaman mama kee " and he turned to leave and then turned back "waise lagan barat ka season hai toh gariyaan kam he milengi " and he left

Kaisa azzeb insaan hai yaar iski smile hee bus acchi hai naam raja aur kartoot hush now what to do kaha yahu ek b bus ni dikh rahi help me someone yaar... ye kaisa azzeb aadmi tha pehle toh smile se laga how cute and now how rude ek akeli larki ko koi aaise chorta hai n fifty rupees b le liya hell

Oye here a bus came but how to take life oh yaa!! I seen in film bus stops thank god

"kaha" asked the man perhaps conductor

"rewa" I was fully hoped

"rewa nahi jaegi... rampur tak chalo phir ek bus taxi kuch b le kar chale jana" said he with confident

Ek bus toh mujhse lee ni jaa ri change kaun karega

"ni bhaiya jao" I repied

Chali gaii bus arrey yaar raat b ho ri hai kaha jau uss raja kee mai ... mil jae bus ek baar aur...

'rewa jaengi madam jee" voice came from backward

Mil gayi andhe kee lathi "yes" I said and turned back

Oh no ye toh gundey typed hai wo b chaar chaar abi ye b hona hai baki mere sath... shit conductor said ye dakuo ka ilaaka hai

"mai apne se chali jaugi " I said and started moving fastly

They came

"ek raat hamare sath reh lo kal jaha chalugi waha pahucha denge" said one of them

Pitaji ka maal hai jao bhaiya yaha se I wanted to say but its better to run now but where kaha yau!!!! Kya karu!!! Ab toh bola b ni jaa raha help me someone I was about to cry yaar help karo pls I cant explain my fear that time

But I started running they are chasing me help please kahu toh kis se I fallen shit ye b aaj he hona tha they are coming near me save me pls someone pls

Bike flashes from backward

Kaun aaya koi mujhe bachane ya phir ...

He came faught with those goons and turned to me bach gayi mai

Oh !!! wow blue eyes with covered face again my angel blue eyes ... he saved me again I cant tell you my feeling that time...

I thought he is coming towards me but he was going to his bike and he started it kya ye b mujhe chor ke jaega nahi..iii...iii

"dekhiye I m first time travelling alone and first time rewa too mujhe kuch nahi pta pls meri help karo mujhe rewa thak chor do pls ek akeli larki anjaan kaha jaaegi aap toh acche insaan ho aap he na mujhe girne se bachaya tha pls save me now too pls pls pls pls..." I cant leave this chance

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