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''you cant kill me ... we love each other" I said to the person who was pointing gun to me in mid night near these mountains

"need se jago Madhubala " said he " I don't love you ye sab toh ab tum acche se janti ho wake up"

"Nahi tum sirf mujhse pyar karte ho band karo apna drama please R.K. stop it now" said I with my shivering tone but In confident way

"tumhe kitni baar samjhana parega kee mai koi R.K. WARKE nahi hu SULTAAN NAAM hai mera aur ye mera mission hai jiske beech tum aayi ho isiliye kehta hu bhaag jao warna mai tumhe marne mein ek second nahi lagauga" said he is passonate way

Isn't is funny that I m still finding that person passonate who is about to kill me but still I have faith in my love too so in my full faith I said " tum koi sultaan wultaan nahi ho tum mere r.k. ho mere r.k. suna tumne ham ne kitne haseen pal sath bitaye hai ham ek doosre se pyaar karte hai tum mere ho please ye naatak band karo" I can see he was loosing himself so i stepped towards him an then I began again " ham nahi reh sakte na ek doosre ke bina ... u r my r.k. and I love you ... I love you r.k. I love you" I kept repeating the same as I can see him loosing command but he suddenly jerked me and I fallen

Seeing me injured he rushed toward me " tumhe kuch hua toh nahi tum theek toh ho" he asked

I smiled " tum toh mujhe marne wale the na kya hua meri ek chot bhe bardaast nahi ho rahi maro na muhe himmat hai tumm me maro na r.k.!!! sorry sultan miya mariye na hame mariye " I was shouting

And then

BULLET FIRES...

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Hello MBians I m officially back

So this is my new ff this would be narrated by Madhubala herself

So if you want to know how this happens ???

To continue I neeed just 9 comments so are you interested?????


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rekha.366 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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welcome back jack🤗 and i liked it please continue and pm me
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Interesting cont soon n pls pm me
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Akkuuu...!!! Hugs!!!!
Finally, my Barbie is baackkk... Hunn!!!
And that too directly with the story... Wowww...
I am all in to read it!!!
Lovely concept re...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow aku, u r finally back, happy to see you after so long, and u again started a new story, thanks a lot dear, and it was a very nice start, sounds to be a thriller one, like RK is a gunda like our raja, ok enough of my guess, now waiting for you to continue the story.
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Welcome back dear..
yaar pls ye story khatam kie bina mat gayab ho jana..
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Interesting cont soon n pls pm me
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I think It's my 1st time I m reading u ...plz cont soon as it sonds sooo nyc plz pm me
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interesting start...cont soon nad please pm me😊
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Hey Akku..good to see you back in action...lo tume bas 9 comments chaiye the..main 11th pe ake kahdi hogayi...to update kardo fatafat se..

Edit:
Comment post karte karte ek number piche bhi chali gayi...roll no.12 present madam😆

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