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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
I am a silent reader of your story😛 this story is really heart touching. I think this is only story I have read till now in which all the characters r grey...its sooo real I mean its just like the world we live in😳 you have pulled it out very well.I think not only RK but maya, madhu are equally in fault in different perspective! Human make mistakes and they regret it later and tries to rectify it and the same thing is here. I am loving story.
One thing I wanna say the story is of rk madhu for sure but tagline is different ! Oftenly people say " they are not meant to be together but destiny wants them togather" but here" they are meant to be togather but destiny dont want them togather" 😆
That means they have to fight all odds to be togather.
I just hope in the end rk madhu gets happy ending cause they have suffered a lot.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh well I had this Nisha thing somewhere in my mind .. because Madhu wasnt going to spill it to RK... that was nice.. she was going to tell RK even after his engagement but Madhu's fainting in the hospital had stopped her.

I didnt comment for last update as I seriously had nothing to say about it... I was totally clueless and thought to wait till the story moves forwards..today we got the Maya's side of the story, last update was RK's side of story.. after reading that.. if we say no human is perfect.. everyone has a dark and evil side.. everyone in their life experiences a phase when all the sanity goes out of the window and they become selfish and mean.. we cant fight the demons inside us all the times now can we?

All three of them have been wrong in some places and right at other.. but what make us feel bad for Madhu is her past.. she never got the love and affection from her parents.. and we know almost everything she had gone through. so her not speaking up for her rights.. not demanding answers and making up theories in her mind is somehow justifiable... but RK and Maya's story is so new to us.. we can never choose them over Madhu.. My mom says, " A mother is the closest person to her child, still she feeds an infant only when he cries" and that I need to be more expressive and not keep things within myself.. and thats where I think Madhu was wrong, as we hardly get a person who can understand us without words... but when I look at the bigger picture I think she wasnt wrong .. a girl who yearned to be loved all her life..who wanted to belong to someone..who thought she cant get that love and when she got that love ..then it was only the love that mattered not anything else...dont we ignore the smaller things when we are getting bigger and better things in life?

So, RK is still negotiable, Madhu is always welcomed in the story.. and Maya..she has to leave... she cant be in this story anymore not even as a friend and even if she ties Rakhi to RK.and with Maya out of the story I guess after some time Rishbala can reunite.
Now the part which is worrying me the most... Destiny cried for Madhu 😕...

And then, at another place, Destiny saw Madhu walk over the pieces of her own shattered heart. Each piece pierced her feet, but she continued to walk, and Destiny worried what all left Madhu's body mixed with the blood.

That night, even Destiny cried."

I want to ask,why destiny took too long to cry for Madhu and why didnt it cry last night when madhu spent the whole night writing the future storyline? what did she do in between that made destiny cry for her? did she execute the story she had written last night? these lines really left me wondering.. I have a feeling that she has done something drastic.. has she decided to divorce RK or she aborted her baby? plsss dont do that.. she cant do that to her baby or else I wont forgive her.. her theories of being a third wheel in RK-Maya's story and her sacrifice is okay as long as it affects only her..and the other two morons .. but not this unborn life .. which has nothing to do with his father's stupidity and mother's tyag mode..

Again a very well written update... I really want the story to move forward now.. you're doing your best TK and thanks for the PM. 😃

Edited by shonuu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heart-touching update. Hope madhu and baby is fine!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice update.. Love nisha.. She really did a good thing..
I really feel bad for RK..poor guy..he truly loves madhu...but he has taken some wrong decisions.. Giving more importance to maya than madhu in the past still hurts me..he deserves a bit pain..hope he meets madhu & apologies for everything & rishbala get back together..
I don't know I can't sympathize with maya..I don't like her..
The last line of the update scares me hope madhu is fine...& the baby too..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Read chapters 33 and 34 in one go. My heart is crying and bleeding for Madhu. I don't feel even an ounce sorry for Maya. And RK - that idiot should've been smarter. RK has put Madhu through a lot of pain, knowingly or unknowingly, and he should definitely get the return with interest.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So finally we got to see Maya's side of story. I can understand that she could not control her feelings or emotions but she fell down to that level where she had to question herself - "WHO AM I..." I even doubt whether she was even a genuine friend 😕??? coz from where I see, she was literally waiting for RK's break up with Madhu in a name of RK's suffering and unhappiness 😡

Coming to RK , I am glad that at least now he has started questioning himself n started seeing Madhu's pain but alas its too late now ... Both loved each other but only difference was : For RK, Madhu was a "big part" of his life but for Madhu "Only RK was her Life"😒

Last lines were so emotional - And then, at another place, Destiny saw Madhu walk over the pieces of her own shattered heart. Each piece pierced her feet, but she continued to walk, and Destiny worried what all left Madhu's body mixed with the blood.
That night, even Destiny cried. - I believe this indicates that despite of her pain Madhu will move on in her life.😭

Congratus for new thread TK and thank you for writing this story so wonderfully.😳⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very painful update...After reading Maya's p.o.v. , I don't feel any sympathy for her...for me she is a home breaker & will always be like that...& I don't care about her guilt trip...😡...I am happy that RK get to know about madhu's condition for a long time & her pain due to her insecurities due to maya & RK's closeness...Now he will know what mistakes he has done & I don't have any sympathy for RK,...he deserves this pain...but I don't want Madhu to suffer...hope to know about madhu in ur next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heya! Thanks for the PM and congrats for the new thread. I actually paid heed to your comment before posting and it got me thinking- it's true not everyone is perfect and am so glad you used this medium to express this😊
My treacherous heart is beginning to soften towards RK though it kinda gets mad again when I read how he thought Madhu was so needy, desperate and possessive. I mean who wouldn't be seeing you and your bestie like this? Where did your brain go? I kinda understand his point of view on how he thought not mentioning Maya or even deleting his texts from her would reassure Madhu but it was so wrong on all levels. i mean it just made him look more guilty and stupid too! Oh RK he's beginning to realise now how his actions have really hurt Madhu and I would really like them to come together and talk it through. I wonder where Madhu is😉You're just building up the tension right? Felt so bad about the last lines of the update. Destiny got what it wanted anyway!

So glad you brought in Nisha. It was good for her to tell RK about Madhu already knowing of Maya's love. Oh my RK you have been such an idiot throughout! On the other hand can't say I feel any tinge of sympathy for Maya. She claims to be RK's friend but throughout she has only given him advice on how to go farther from Madhu rather than stay close to her. I mean what kinda friendship is that? And I couldn't believe it when she said she just wanted to steal in one moment! I mean dude they are married if they were still in the dating phase it would have been something although it's just as bad but here they were already wife and husband. How could she even think of that?

Okie am gonna stop now😃Would love to know where Madhu is and how she's holding up! Continue soon and thanks for updating so soon! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
loved the update...i still have no sympathy on Maya ...and RK ...he called his own trouble...i was needed 4 him...to understand Madhu's pain... looking 4rwd to the next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Fabulous update TK. Congrats for the new thread. Like nisha realizing RK that madhu knows about maya love but still she trusted him. I am liking the way the story is going, its fav kudos to you 👏
That night, even Destiny cried- Where is madhu ??
Eagerly waiting for next

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