Rishbala SS: Dil, Dosti, etc...Last Chap & Epi Pg65

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sangeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#431

hey mimi..I just caught up with it last night..& I couldn't stop..a very heart touching story...plus the music with it was a treat..

I loved Adit and Rishab's bond very much..and loved that you kept the story very real without too much drama..I could really connect with all the characters..and Sultan n Trishna were an added treat..

though I loved all the parts my favorite part was Simran's wedding..I loved hove simply yet effectively Simran told Madhu to move on in her life and that she should not stop herself from being happy..her telling Madhu about Amit that part was very nicely written & accommodated in the story.
and events that followed after that conversation with added bonus of Iktara BG brought happy tears to my eyes!!!

a very beautiful story!!!!

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

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Posted: 11 years ago

#432

mimiii...hw beautifully u hav written the ending...i know i hav said it before but can't seems to stop saying it again 😊😊😊

finally radha realised she was not a goos mothe rto madhu...was only a good MIL...i'm not bashing at radha,yet...

the epilogue was super...so super...the way rk said "lets go to manorca" to madhu...so sweet 😳😳😳

mimi,it was ur best best best work dear...wow...👏👏👏

now waiting for the updates of balika bodhu and a new story 😉😉😉

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sani9226

@sani9226

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Posted: 11 years ago

#433

lovely ending, like how adit first words were pa

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

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Posted: 11 years ago

#434

Awsum ch 12 mimi..I hate Pabbo...sorry for the late comment...

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Seema

@...Seema...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#435

a fantabulously fantabulous ending fr a fabulously fabulous ss.hated pabbo but it worked as an eye opener fr radha.rk was on cloud nine when adit called him papa fr first time.i really loved their bonding.

rk n madhu got married and da epilogue was heart touching n interesting.gonna miss this ss fr sure.

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

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Posted: 11 years ago

#436

Fantastic ch 13...hayee they were looking at each other in the pic...awsum...

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Rafangirl

@Rafangirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#437

lovely last chapter...though I was expecting few more chapters..never mind..as a reader, we keep expecting endless things..but can understand from ur candid confession about running out of ideas..its better to end on happier note than stretching endlessly.. happy that finally radha realized that she should get rishbala married n nice to see sultan-trish supporting...loved pabo's symbolism of addressing rishbala as ghee and fire..hahaha...sweet adit too accepted them as 'pah' n 'mah' n the happily ever after

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Rafangirl

@Rafangirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#438

this is one of the shortest yet sweetest epilogue I hv ever read..how realistic was rishabh's dream of seeing amit and getting a nod from him about madhu...kissing madhu on mallorcan beach at sunset is the most romantic thing I read...n comment abt haddi-trish's baby was quite funny too...

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

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Posted: 11 years ago

#439

Ch 14: Good job Deeplai...actually she became the match maker of Rishbala...loved the whole update very very much... and oh yeah..the kiss was far more than awsum...very well written...thanks for pm...