Rishbala SS: Dil, Dosti, etc...Last Chap & Epi Pg65 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice..looks like a different one...interesting..update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Very interesting! Please continue soon and pm me 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Is madhu married to amit [ elder bro / friend of rishu] he is saying sorry rishu for snatching madhu [ his love ] from him [ jus an idea sirji😆]
Awesome prologue.👍🏼
plz continue soon dear🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowww amazing start
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi dear friends...I will be updating one chapter everyday...hopefully...so the length may seem to be short...
It seemed many questions have popped up in your mind from the prologue...the story will be flowing from past to present intermittently, flashbacks will be in italics...
My old laptop crashed down, with it all my bookmarks...I would be very glad if someone lets me know of a reliable music converter (mp3 to swf) for attaching the background music files with the updates...your help will be much appreciated...
And lastly, I am providing the youtube link of the musical piece which I had hoped to attach to this introductory chapter...so please listen to it while reading...
Now enough of nonsensical talks...hope you like the story...it would seem a bit slow-paced at times, but that is the way I have envisaged it to be...
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YWlNhHGUfDU[/YOUTUBE]

"Sir, 500 rupees," said the taxi driver. As if startled from some deep thought, Rishabh stared at him for few moments. "Sir, the taxi fare, 500 rupees," repeated the driver. Rishabh nodded and handed him the money from his wallet. He took out his bag from the back and stepped in the entrance gate of the poshest high rise residential apartment of Gurgaon. The security guard greeted him on recognition, some of the passers-by stopped and looked at him. It was a look of sympathy in their eyes, which Rishabh avoided dejectedly and headed towards the tall tower. It was looking all the same, the same garden, the same pool area, the corridor to the lift lobby, the lift moving with the same pace, and stopping at the same 25th floor. But as the door opened to the penthouse it all looked so unfamiliar to Rishabh. The floor was covered in a white carpet. Many familiar and unfamiliar faces crowded the living area, the air filled with smell of all the white flowers and wreaths strewn all over the space. For a moment Rishabh's subconscious mind dictated him to step back inside the elevator, "It's not my home, it's not my..." "Rishu," cried Radha and rushed to him in despair. As she hugged him, Rishabh came to his senses. "Ma," he called as he hugged her back. In all the past 48 hours post receiving the message he had pent up his tears which now broke all the barriers. Both of them held each other as tight as possible, tears streaming out incessantly from both their eyes, as the grave loss of their nearest one had left them all shattered.

"Ma, why are you crying?" asked little Amit, wiping away the tears on his mother's face. "Nothing beta, it's just that Rishu's mother has gone away very far from us. We will never be able to see her again. That is why I am crying," replied Radha, composing herself. "Even Rishu will never see his mother again?" Amit asked shocked. "No betu." Rishu was his best friend, then how could he have his mother always with him when Rishu would not have his own? Little Amit told his mother with conviction, "Ma, Rishu will come here and stay with us. And from today you will be his mother also, right?" Radha stared at her son stunned; a little boy of 5 years could mend destiny's injustice so easily with his love and innocence.

Trishna came forward, held Radha, and said "Aunty, please come and sit. Have some water. Rishabh, give me your bag and please sit down. You must be exhausted after travelling this far." "I'll keep it myself," said Rishabh and slowly headed towards his room. As he was going to open the door of his room, his eyes fell on one figure, sitting on the floor with her back against the wall. She was clad in a white saree, without any ornaments, sitting like a stone statue and staring at the framed photograph, placed at the middle of the room. There he was, Amit, smiling widely with a twinkle in his eyes; as if he was about to talk to Rishabh from within the photo frame. How could he be dead, if his mere photograph was so alive? Rishabh looked back on her again, and somewhere the sorrow blended with a hint of loathing. He looked away and entered his room.

Edited by mimibm - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So Rishab was Amit's best friend and he hates Madhu. Interesting! Continue soon please ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update Mimu Di 😊 So Amit was Radhaji's son & Madhubala's husband I guess!Radhaji is like a mother to RK!Amit died!So the 3 of them r in grief!Pls continue soon 😳 & Yipee Me second 🥳
Edited by lwrimaforever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So amit is rishab's best frnd nd madhu's husband
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's beautiful Mimi... Could feel Rishabh's anguish at the end !! Amit did actually say that when he was merely five, that means he loves Rishabh like his own brother ! So Madhu is Amit's wife and not Rishabh's !! Am pretty sure Amit wasn't aware of the dynamics and Rishabh may have never confessed 😕 !! Has amit killed himself deliberately or something ???
Pls give us a longer update soon...I know your pc crashed, sorry about that !! Hope everything is safe n fine !!
Btw @ Goodluckangel : wow...ur guess was awesomely right yaar 😆😉 !! Phew...I was like how could you guess that haan ? ...on the spot hun 😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
nice update ,amit was madhus husband and rks friend interesting

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