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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part-13

It was a party given by rk at his house he invited madhu depali and mukund also there friends preeti rohit karan sonia kabir misha..

Everyone were enjoying the party rk was with madhu in hall mukund went to washroom

Rk: hey honey how is your boyfriend

Madhu: nice and your girlfriend i think she hates me

Rk: no honey its not like that she is just a little bit jealous like how i get...

Madhu: what you get jealous

Rk: no i was talking about something else

Madhu: oh really

Rk: yes

Depali was seeing all this and listening their coversation getting jealous she went to them faked a smile and said

Depali: hey madhu

Madhu: yes

Depali: can you plzzz come with me to the kitchen to check the food

Madhu: but you can check that na

Depali: ya but want to show you something else

Madhu: ok

They both went inside the kitchen

Madhu: so depali what you want to tell me

Depali: coz of you rishabh was always with you talking about only you but now i cant bear this he will be only mine from today

Madhu: what are you talking about depali

Depali: oh come on madhu and stop it now dont act to be innocent atleast infront of me you are a stupid and looser you cant take away my rishabh

Tears were started falling from madhu's eyes

Madhu: but depali...

Depali: shut up i know why you are doing this you are doing only for money to get rich and stay happy to get rid of that chawl.. Stop acting infront of me i know your true face stop crying your crocodile tears from now rishabh will be mine

Madhu: what are you sayinh depali

Madhu said while crying

Depali: get away from rishabh's life wait i know you will not but rishabh will only throw you out of his life

Depali took a matches box lited it and throwed on the corner on depali's saree

Madhu got shock seeing that and shouted help help

Everyone came inside rk took water and poured it on deepali's saree

He asked depali what happen... Depali started crying and said

Rk: dips what happened how did all this happened?

Dips: rishabh plzzz dont force me to say this

She said while crying her crocodile tears

Rk: plzzz say dips plzzz

Dips: rishabh i dont want to come inbetween yoh and your madhu friendship

Rk: what are you saying depali and why are you taking madhu's name this say dips say dips

Dips: rishabh madhu did all this she put fire on my saree...

Rk quickly saw madhu

Madhu: buy rishu i did not did...

Rk: wait madhu let depali complete..

Kabir before all this drama he saw dips talking with someone so he thought about that and went from there

Everyone were shock seeing rk's behaivior

Karan: what are you doing rishabh madhu cant do this depali has lied to you

Preeti: yes rishabh karan is right

Dipali smirked seeing madhu and
Rk. Stoping her
then continued crying her crocodile tears

Rk: dips what are you saying say clearly

Dips: yes rishabh madhu did all this coz she was insecure and jealous of me she told me to get away from you and your life and i love you only coz of your money madhu said this

While listening all this rk was looking at madhu... Madhu was crying seeing him then at the last sentece of dips rk looked at deepali

Madhu was going from there she cant bear all this but rk went and held her hand he pulled her towards depali who was sitting on sofa while saying all this rk said

Rk: you lied to me depali madhu cant do all This

Precap: dipali's truth will be revealed
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part-14

Rk: yes dips madhu cant do all this you lied to me..

Dips: but rishabh

Rk: shutup depali madhu is not insecure you are insecure and jealous

Everyone were happy listening to rk and rk taking madhu's side mukund seeing all thus but did not say anything

Rk: i should not have taken madhu here to bear you and your crocodile tears you have no right of insulting my madhu

Dips: but rishabh how can you say that...

Kabir came inside with a man and said to rk to listen that man

Man: sir you can beat or do anything but i did not lied dipali mam only said me to bring a matches box

Kabir: see rishabh now its clear dipali did all this and madhu is innocent

Dipali: rishabh listen to me he had lied to you and what about you and me our realationship

Rk: which realationship dipali i break up with you depali..

Depali went near madhu and said

Depali: What happen now you will be happy.. Crying your victory tears na you will never be happy..

Rk: DEPALI..

Rk shouted

Rk: dont you dare say anything to my madhu or utter a word you are a girl thats why i am leaving other wise dont force me to cross my limit now GET OUT

Depali: you are not doing righ rishabh you will regret this

Rk: lets see who will regret and dont you know the exit just go from here you are spoiling the party with your dirty presence

Depali looked at rk then rk holding madhu's hand and gave madhu a deadly glare

Preeti wait i will show you the exit

Rk: no wait preeti she has not that reputation of you showing her exit wait i will show you her reputation
SECURITY

He shouted

Yes sir they came running

Rk: throw this stupid out of the house

They agreed and depali went from there rk took madhu to his room and closed the door

Madhu: rishu why you took me here

Rk: honey i am really sorry you suffered this much only coz of me i am sorry and i want to say you something

Madhu: what

Rk sat down in his knees and said

Rk: i love you madhu

Madhu did not said anything she was standing with no expression rk thought she would say no

Madhu: i love you too rishu

Rk got happy and gave a tight hug to her

Then they both lived happily ever after...

THE END

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi everyone here is my part-4 update thinking what to do after 6,7 parts can anyone plzz suggest me
Part-4
The truth about the shadow man

Rk and madhu both got shocked seeing that everywhere was all blood
And on the wall there was written "I WILL KILL EVERYONE" with blood on the floor there was all blood all the kutions pillows teared into pieces

Suddenly pabbo and malik came inside giving them a suprise but they got shocked seeing everything madhu told them everything about what happened madhu saw a camera on the corner of the wall and asked

Madhu: this cctv camera who put that camera there?

Rk: me

Madhu: rishu You?.. Why?

Rishu: yes me because so many curious things were happening with madhu and everyone was thinking she is gone mad i know the shadow man will take this oppurtunity and do something freaky so before going for shopping i have kept that cctv camera there to know who is doing all this with madhu

He took that camera and saw that footage a man was doing all the thing writing i will kill everyone on wall tearing the kutions and pillows and spearding the blood everywhere
Then he faced towards the camera they saw the face and madhu said

Madhu: vikas...

(He is vikas a character in this ss)

Pabbo: who is vikas?

Rk: Vikas used love madhu and tryed to hurt her he was jealous of me and tryed to kill me but at right time madhu came with police and they arrested him

Madhu: sorry maa and malik i did not told you about this because you both will get tensed and i think now he is back

Vikas: yes i am back

Everyone looked towards the door he was standing there and went towards madhu

Madhu: how dare you to come here

Vikas: arrey madhu i love you and everyday time minute second i used to thinked about you and your saying how dare i

Madhu: you did all this na

Vikas: yes madhu u sended me to jail na this was a small revenge

Madhu: I should have understand before hand only that this all is done by none other than you..

Vikas: yes madhu how silly you are

Rk: just shut up and get lost

Vikas: look who is talking rishabh kundra i should have killed you before but leave it

He went near madhu and slided his fingers on from her cheeks to her lips and said

Vikas: come on madhu lets go we both will be very happy together

Rk: VIKAS

He shouted came near him and punched on his face and said how dare you to talk with madhu like this and touch her they both started fighting and then madhu took the knife it was on table and pointed towards vikas and said stop if move i will kill you he ran from there rk tryed to catch him but he went off rk came back madhu was crying rk saw that and said

Rk: madhu dont cry we all are with you

Madhu: yes but rishu

Rk: dont worry madhu everything will be fine we will soon catch him bittu ji find him

Bittu ji: ok chief

Rk: and haan bittu ji tomm is a pool party on my farm send inivites to everyone

Madhu: why

Rk: beacause it was very frustating you were disturbing me calling me na so now everything is fine now thats why

Madhu: oh really ok now i will never disturb you she turned her face

Rk: i was joking sorry

He said with catching his ears

Madhu: awww really

Rk: yes

They both hugged

Rk: maa dont you think madhu is changed

Maa: no beta why what happened

Rk: look at he maa day by day she becoming fat

Madhu: oh really you are also becoming fat bittu ji do you have number of gym trainer actually wait gym trainer also could not make him slim..fatty rishu

Rk: fatty rishu wait i will show you

Madhu: they both ran all over the house..

Pabbo: now you both stop fighting come on now we should clean the house

All cleaned the house and sat in the hall

Rk: so how was your trip

Malik: nice

Madhu: we missed very much

Pabbo: we also missed you

Madhu: maa what is the meaning of my name?

Pabb: madhubala means honey, a sweet girl

Rk: madhu from now i will call you honey

She thinks in her mind thank god now he will not call me fat girl

Rk: (he comes near madhu whispers in her ear) and fat girl

Madhu: rishu i will kill you

And they both start fighting

Precap: pool party fun...
😛
Edited by sumaiya10 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry for short update

Part-11

It was morining madhu went to office early she did informed rk about going to office rk got little bit angry and thought of going to madhu 's office

Madhu was working with mukund she was in mukund's cabin mukund told her to bring some files which were on top of cupboard madhu went there but she cannot reach on top so she took a stool then she started stretching a bit to get the file and she lost her balance and was about to fall when mukund came and held her by his arm they both have an eyelock

Rk reached to mukund's cabin to ask where is madhu then he saw madhu in mukund's arm and started boiling how dare he? How did he touch my strawberry? He has no right to touch my strawberry... Only I can touch her...

Then madhu saw rk standing near she quickly went near rk but he went out of there madhu went behind rk shouting..

Madhu: rishu rishu wait

Rk: what??

He said in anger mode

Madhu: what happend rishu why are you so angry

Rk: what were you doing with that moron mukund? How dare he touched you..

Madhu: but if mukund touches why are you soo angry?

Rk thought about that then turned back and started walking towards exit

Madhu: rishu why did you came here?

Without saying anything he went from there madhu felt little bit strange but she ignored it

Rk was driving his car and thinking why was I getting angry for strawberry? If mukund touches her why am I getting angry? Do I am feeling jealous?? Yes because I am her best friend and I care for her that's why i was getting angry...

Weeks passed madhu and mukund became friends mukund started liking madhu and madhu was attracted towards mukund he proposed to madhu and she said yes she told this to rk... One day mukund went to madhu and asked her for date she said yes...

Precap: rk preparing madhu for her date

Sorry for short update
Edited by sumaiya10 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Very nice,i like your story.Please continue
and could you please write everything in english.
Thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my god !! Madhu said yes to that mukund !!! Lets see what happens nxt ...😕
I m 1st ...yippee. ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
nice part-1, friendship to love..pls continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
nie start continue soon.
but a request, could u plz write in english?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome
Continue Soon
Thanks For The PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful Start 😳
Continue Soon

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