Feelings ~-( Rishbala )-~ SS updated Last part-14 page-29

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Sorry for hindi dialoges its hard for me to phrase the dialoges in hindi but from second part i will write in hindi if you dont understand anything ask me in comments
PROLOUGE

This is a story of two true friends and they always think that they are made for each other and never cared about what their actual "feelings" are for each other..but when they do start realising about their feelings for each other..in what circumstances will they realise their feelings for each other? Will they will ever be able to confess their love for each other? What will happen? To know about this plzzz read this ss n leave your comments..:)

INTRODUCTION

Madhubala shamsher malik:-
Madhu is a innocent and enjoyble girl with elegant curved lips she lives in a chawl with her maa and malik she has no other friend but Rk he is her childhood best friend. They both like to spend time with eachother.

Rishabh kundra:-
Rishabh is a very rich and handsome boy with cute brown eyes every girl wants to be with him because he is rich and handsome he lives with his father mother and bittuji bittuji is his father's manager he has childhood best friend or u can say best buddy. They both like to spend time with eachother



Part-1

Madhu was sleeping on her bed and suddenly rk comes and move the curtains the sunlights fall on madhu's face slowly her curved lips milky white skin tone and rolled hair Rk says get up madhu she opened her eyes slowly and saw his face his beautiful brown eyes and attracting face she says plzzz let me sleep with a cute puppy face and RK smiles and says

Rk: ok then sleep...phir mujhe mat khena ki maine tumhe the great mishra industries ke 1st interview ke liye nai uthaya

Madhu quickly opens her eyes

Madhu: what..o freak..i am late

She gets up from bed and start running towards washroom after 5 mins she comes out and stands infront of mirror and say

Madhu: rk tumne mujhe phela kyun nai uthaya

Rk: mai tumhe madhu madhu kehkar 7:30 se utha raha hoon aur tum pyari si smile dekar sote ja rahi thi toh isme mai kya karin

Madhu: really toh utni hi pyaari smile ke saath mere face pe pani nahi dal sakte the atleast mai uth toh jati

Rk: ok next time se yeh try karunga

Then she takes her purse and like a wind she moved out of the chawl

Rk went down the stairs running and said

Rk: madhu ruko mai tumhe drop kardunga

Madhu: no thanks mai chali jaungi

Rk: pagal ladki

Madhu: maine sunliye pagal ladke

He smiled and went up

Madhu reached there and gave money to the auto she saw the building and said

Madhu: woww (it was a big building of glass she prayed to god) plzzz bhagwan yeh job mujhe mil jana plzzz agar mujhe yeh job milgayi toh malik ko over time job nahi karna padega

Then she went in the cabin and One man showing some papers to mishra she said

Madhu: may i come in sir

Mr.mishra: (he was reading some papers he saw her and said) yes come in Ms. Madhubala u are late

Madhu: i am really very sorry sir woh actually...

He stops her inbetween

Mr.mishra: i dont need any excuses just show me ur qualification

She gives him the files he saw it and said

Mr.mishra: apne bare mai kuch batao

Madhu: sir woh actually mai ek middle class family se hoon mujhe iss job ki bahut zarurat hai agar app mujhe yeh job denge toh bahut meherbani hogi

Then the man who said stood beside mr mishra said sir yeh ek chawl ki ladki hai and she is not on time apka standard kharab hojayega then suddenly phone rings of madhu mr mishra saw it the name was written rishu she picks the phone and said

Rk: haan kya hua madhu pahunch gayi

Madhu: rishu mera interview chal raha hai..

Rk: oh sorry mai baad mai call karta hoon

Then she cuts the phone and mr mishra asks her

Mr: mishra: rishu kaun hai

Madhu: sir woh RK

Mr.mishra: rk?

Madhu: haan sir woh rishabh kundra

Mr mishra gets shocked and says yeh tumhara dost hai?

Madhu: haan sir kyun

Then the man standing beside her says to mr mishra sir yeh rk sabse mashoor aur amiir khandan ka hai sir aur usse rishu bula rahi hai lagta hai bahut gehri dosti hai sir hume bahut faida hoga then mr. Mishra says to madhu

Mr. Mishra: congratulations you are hired

she gets very happy

madhu: really

He said the man who is standing beside her to bring some sweets he says to madhu

Mr. Mishra: badhai ho lijiye kuch meetha kha lijiye

Madhu: no thanks mai kabse join karsakti hoon?

Mr. Mishra: apki marzi jab apka dil kahe

She gets a bit confused she thinks chodo mujhe toh job milgayi she thanks to god and thinks rishu maa aur malik kitne khush honge mai une abhi jake batati hun she asks mr. Mishra

Madhu: sir kya mai apne ghar ja sakti hun

Mr. Mishra: kyun

Madhu: sir woh mujhe rishu maa aur malik ku yeh khushkhabri deni hai

Mr. Mishra: (with a smile ) yes ofcouse zaroor jasakti ho

Madhu gets out of the cabin very happily. She comes out of the cabin then suddenly hears mishra saying to the man that he kept her on job because rk and madhu are best friends and Rk is very rich

She gets shocked when she listened that she got angry went into the cabin and took the file mishra saw that and said

Mr. Mishra: kya hua mam aap itne gusse mai kyun hai?

Madhu: pehle aap mujhe yeh bataiye ki mai apke company mai kaam karti hun toh aap mujhe mam kyun bula rahe hai?

(He remained silent) she said

Madhu: mujhe yeh kaam apne yogyata aur apne balbute pe chahiye tha isliye nahi kyun ki mai Rishu ki best friend hoon opps sorry rishabh kundra ki friend hun aap jaise ghatiya log ki company main mai kaam nahi karna chahti hoon jo mujhe apne faide ke liye job de rahe hai kyunki mai rishab kundra ki friend hoon

They remained silent she went out of the cabin like a wind with anger suddenly rk calls her she picks and says in a sad and anger tone

Madhu: hello :(

Rk: hey ball toh job milgayi

Madhu: Rishu mai ghar a rahi hoon waha ake batati hun

Rk: ok

And she cuts the phone took a auto to reach home..Rk thinks what happen to madhu why she is talking in a strange tone when i said ball she used to get angry then why she did not said anything to me maybe she lost her job how can i make her happy idea...

Madhu comes on the enterance of chawl and suddenly a red carpet rolls she thought it would be rishu he wants to make me happy she walks on it with a smile and he comes infront of her and start singing in his own voice

Rk: Aaja Mein Hawaon Pe Bithake Le Chalun Tu Hi To,Tu Hi To Meri Dost Hain Aaja Mein Khalon Mein Uthake Le Chalun Tu Hi To Meri Dost Hain Awaaz Ka Dariya Hoon Behta Hoon Mein Nili Raaton Mein
Main Jaagta Rehta Hoon Neend Bhari Jheel Se Aankhon Mein
Awaaz Hoon Main Aaja Mein Hawaon Pe Bithake Le Chalun
Tu Hi To,Tu Hi To Meri Dost Hain
Aaja Mein khayalon Mein Uthake Le Chalun (yuvraj tu meri dost hai) (this is the song which they always used to sing for each other)

Madhu: (she gets happy and says) oo hawoon pe bithaoge aur utaoge
Khayalon mein rakho ge tum toh tumhe koi would be Mrs kundra milgayi

Rk: haan

Madhu: really kaun

Rk: tum

Madhu: shut up rishu tumahri itni bhi buri kismat nai hai

Rk: nai mai toh bahut lucky hojunga agar tum mujhe milogi

Madhu: tum jaise pagal ke saath mai kyun rahungi

Rk: mai pagal tum pagal

Madhu: :) mai pagal nahi tum duffer

Rk: idiot

Madhu: stupid

Rk: moti

Madhu: tumari itni himat abhi tumhe batati hun (she runs behind him and says) mai agar tumari would be banugi toh dekhna tumara kya haal karungi

Rk: tumare jaisi moti ke saath main shaadi nai karunga

Madhu: (she gets more angry and runs behind him) rishu ruko

He goes behind pabbo and keeps his chin on her shoulder and says

Rk: maa madhu ko dekho na woh mujhe maar rahi hai (with a cute puppy face)

Maa: madhu kyun bechare ko sata rahi hai thak jayega woh

Madhu: maa aap uski side kyun le rahi ho rishu mujhe sata raha hai aur moti keh raha hai (she also says with a cute puppy face)

Maa: Rishu beta kyun madhu ko akele sata rahe ho saath milkar satate hai

Madhu: maaa...

Suddenly they together started laughing..

Its evening and pabbo calls madhu for dinner she comes near the dinning table and rk stops her

Rk: madhu ruko tum dinner nahi karogi

Madhu: rishu kya hua dekh mujhe abhi pareshaan mat kar mujhe bahut tez bhuk lag rahi hai ab tak toh mere pet main ke chuhe bhi mar gaye

Rk: nahi tum aaj mere saath bahar dinner karne chalogi

Madhu: plzz rk mujhe bahut bhuk lagi hai hum kal chale jayenge

Rk: agar tum nahi chalogi toh mai khana nahi khaunga

Madhu: ok math khao (they both can't live without food)

Rk: madhu plzzz (with a cute puppy face)

Madhu: ohk fine

Rk: yeppyyy

She goes into room and wear a light pink and white anarkali suit with a pink lip gloss and high tight pony tail
when he saw her his jaw drop she was looking so elegant and beautiful
She gave a look and catch his hand and took downstairs from chawl she comes beside the door of car and he said

Rk: stop

Madhu: now what

Rk opens the door for madhu she sits inside then he sat beside on tha driving seat he starts the car

Madhu: kya baat hai jab girlfriend banegi toh issi tarah treat karne ki
Practice kar rahe ho

Rk: no jab tumara bf banega toh usse manners ate hai ya nahi yeh bata raha tha (he smiles)

After some time

Madhu: rk mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai

Rk: kya tum mere bache ki maa bane wali ho

Madhu: tumhe kaise pata

Rk stops the car and said

Rk: what????

She starts laughing

Rk: ha ha very funny (he gave a fake smile and started the car)

Madhu: rk mujhe serious tumse kuch kehna hai

Rk: i know yeh hi na ki tumhe job nahi mili aur maine yeh baat pabbo ko bhi bata di

Madhu: haan rishu mujhe iss job ki bahut zaroraat hai

Rk: dont worry mil jayegi take a chill pill

Madhu start seeing out of window rk thinks madhu is very sad i think she needs someone who can be with her? Who can give her a job? He shouts

Rk: idea..

He saw madhu and said

Rk: Nothing

Rk thinks about a rich boyfriend who can keep madhu happy..n start concentrating on driving

Madhu asks

Madhu: whats happening in ur life

Rk: kuch nai mum aur dad dono itna kaam mai busy rehte hai ki mujhe waqt hi nahi de pate (that why he always be with her since he was the only child) (he gets sad)

Madhu: she start thinking someone should be in his life who can fill the the emptyness of his life with happiness who could it be? Now she shouts

Madhu: idea...(she saw rk and said) nothing

Yes a sensible girlfriend will be good for him n she starts seeing outside the window thinking how to get a good gf for him!!

But after few minutes they both scratched that idea from their mind thinking it just was not a very good idea..they dont need anyone n they r prefectly happy together :D

Precap: Rishbala cute moments

P.s:If i get more than atleast 15 likes and comments i will continue this ss or else i ll not!!

-Maria

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Very nice,i like your story.Please continue
and could you please write everything in english.
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nice part-1, friendship to love..pls continue
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nie start continue soon.
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Thanks for your support i will start in english from this part and plzzz tell about this ss to your friends I am going to add some horror type parts now in this ss ..are you guys excited?

Part-2

Madhu: rishu

Rk: yes

Madhu: where are we going to eat?

Rk: victoria hotel

Madhu: plzzz rishu can we go to a dhaba

Rk: madhu we are going to hotel and i am taking you.. You are not taking me..

Madhu: ok ok fine uff..

Rk comes out of the car and opens the door for madhu they both go inside a waiter comes and asks

Waiter: sir are you a couple you both look great together

Rk: no we are friends but thank you for the compliement

Waiter: oh i am sorry sir plzz come this side

They both sat on a table

Waiter: what do u like to have sir?

Rk saw in the menu and said

Rk: uhmm one greek salad and madhu what do you want?

Madhu: yes two days before we met and we became friends come on rishu dont you know what i eat? (they both say together pizza and they both smile)

Rk: one pineapple juice for me and one glass wine for madhu

Madhu: seriously rishu

Rk: one glass juice for her!

Waiter: ok sir your order will come in some time

Rk: ok

The waiter walks off from there..

Madhu: how can you eat greek salad vegetable and all?

Rk: i am on diet

Madhu: aww really to become more fat (she laughs)

Rk: ha ha very funny i cant stop laughing!?!

Madhu: rishu see all couples are there here look at that couple the boy is nerd and she is hottie!

Rk: i think she is with him for money

Madhu: they are not married

Rk: still you dont know about girls

Madhu: all the girls are not same

Rishu: but all girls are not like you

Madhu: aww really

Rishu: mad and fat girls

Madhu: fat??..when u ll come home i will show you huh..

Rk: what you will show?

He smirks

Madhu: come on rishu be serious

Rk: will you marry me?

Madhu: rishu..

And he laughs

Rk: lets play game

Madhu: aww rishu baby wants to paly a game

Rk: plzzz dont call me baby i am a mature boy or you can say me man..

Madhu: yes 40-50 years old man (she smiles)

Rk: madhu plzz lets play na

Madhu: ok ok which game?

Rk: whoever will close the eyes first they will loose

Madhu: get ready to loose ( n she winks)

Rk: Ahaan...we will see!

They both start looking into each others eyes after sometime suddenly
Rk moves his eyes down

Madhu: yeppy you loose i won looser looser..

Rk: if i would look into your eyes for some more time the girl who is sitting behind you will get unconsious ( he was looking at that girl)

Madhu: you like her?

Rk: no she is not my type!

Madhu: (she saw back and the girl was smiling seeing rk) ya right why would she like you a fat 40-50 year old man!

Rk: stop it fat girl..

Madhu: me fat you fat

Rk: fat

Madhu: fat

Rk: fat

Suddenly the waiter comes

Waiter: sir ur order

The waiter keeps the food on table

Rk: the girl was asking about me na?

Waiter: yes sir...she was asking are you rich or not?? I said yes!!

Rk: who is she?

Waiter: tina sir she always comes here with a rich guy

Suddenly the girl comes

Tina: hi rk i am tina (she slides her finger on his shoulder)

Rk: (he saw that and said) sorry not interested !

Madhu interrupts and says

Madhu: noo..he was looking at you and saying that he likes you and you are gorgeous.. actually he is a little bit shy na..

Tina: Really Rk?

Rk: no actually she is my girlfriend!

Madhu: no?!

Rk: come on baby i said sorry i will give you a diamond neckles na..
Actually she is angry with me..

Madhu: no thats not true i am his..

He stops her

Rk: come on jannu dont be shy!

Suddenly a boy comes

Tina: hi jannu where were you?

Boy: sorry i was stuck in traffic

Tine: ok let it be we will go for shopping tomm

Boy: ok baby

They both went from there madhu and rk both gets shocked

Rk: these girls na they are so mean!

Madhu: yup

They both eat their food rk drops her home she saw pabbo and malik packing her bags

Madhu: maa malik where are you going?

Malik: tomm i am going to delhi

Madhu: why?

Malik: for some work now go and sleep!

Madhu: ok

They all sleep next morning pabbo and malik went to delhi and after she went rk comes she tell him about pabbo and malik they both are in bedroom madhu is lying on bed and thinking..rk is playing temple run game on iphone

Madhu: rishu i am tense about my job!

Rk: dont worry i will tell to dad!

Madhu: no i want to get independent and not depend on you for a job!

Rk: ok ok now stop your lecture

Madhu: no rishu if i get a job there no need for malik doing overtime (she saw rk) rishu are you listening come on rishu i am saying something to you and you are playing on phone stop it

Rk: my wish i will do whatever i want if i want to lie down i will lie if i want to sit i will sit

Madhu: you are sitting on my bed rishu

Rk: so what? it does not belong to you it belongs to maa and malik!

Madhu: no it belongs to me only me..got it?

Rk: your name is not written here to miss!

Madhu: yes it is see (she shows her) i known u will tell this so i wrote it before hand :D

Rk: oh really

Madhu: yes

Rk: madhu if any ghost or bhooth comes at night what will you do?

Madhu: i will give your address and tell him that you need him and there is nothing like ghost or something

Rk: oh really.. ok send him there we both will make plan to make you scared..

Madhu: ok all the best i am going to make coffee do you want?

Rk: yup

Madhu: ok

She goes in the kitchen and from there she opens the fridge and see shoes and sandles are in fridge..she gets shocked and goes near the shoes stand there were all the milk and vegetables kept..she goes to rk and says all this to him

Rk: madhu have you drunk the wine last night??

Madhu: no rishu

Rk: madhu come on dont be silly maybe its ghost?

Madhu: no its not rishu..come na

Rk: no i want to play or else i will die

Madhu comes and takes the phone and says

Madhu: rishu plzzz come

Rk: madhu wait i will die let me pause the game

She gives him the phone and he stops the game and they both went into kitchen rk opens the door of fridge and the vegetables were there in it..she says

Madhu: see i told you shoes and sandles are there na

Rk: i think madhu you got mad or drank the wine last night

Madhu saw that and runs near the shoe stand and eveything was at the place where it should be..she gets shocked...

Precap: madhu gets scared and calls Rk!!

-Maria

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