Feelings ~-( Rishbala )-~ SS updated Last part-14 page-29

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Sorry for hindi dialoges its hard for me to phrase the dialoges in hindi but from second part i will write in hindi if you dont understand anything ask me in comments
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This is a story of two true friends and they always think that they are made for each other and never cared about what their actual "feelings" are for each other..but when they do start realising about their feelings for each other..in what circumstances will they realise their feelings for each other? Will they will ever be able to confess their love for each other? What will happen? To know about this plzzz read this ss n leave your comments..:)

INTRODUCTION

Madhubala shamsher malik:-
Madhu is a innocent and enjoyble girl with elegant curved lips she lives in a chawl with her maa and malik she has no other friend but Rk he is her childhood best friend. They both like to spend time with eachother.

Rishabh kundra:-
Rishabh is a very rich and handsome boy with cute brown eyes every girl wants to be with him because he is rich and handsome he lives with his father mother and bittuji bittuji is his father's manager he has childhood best friend or u can say best buddy. They both like to spend time with eachother



Part-1

Madhu was sleeping on her bed and suddenly rk comes and move the curtains the sunlights fall on madhu's face slowly her curved lips milky white skin tone and rolled hair Rk says get up madhu she opened her eyes slowly and saw his face his beautiful brown eyes and attracting face she says plzzz let me sleep with a cute puppy face and RK smiles and says

Rk: ok then sleep...phir mujhe mat khena ki maine tumhe the great mishra industries ke 1st interview ke liye nai uthaya

Madhu quickly opens her eyes

Madhu: what..o freak..i am late

She gets up from bed and start running towards washroom after 5 mins she comes out and stands infront of mirror and say

Madhu: rk tumne mujhe phela kyun nai uthaya

Rk: mai tumhe madhu madhu kehkar 7:30 se utha raha hoon aur tum pyari si smile dekar sote ja rahi thi toh isme mai kya karin

Madhu: really toh utni hi pyaari smile ke saath mere face pe pani nahi dal sakte the atleast mai uth toh jati

Rk: ok next time se yeh try karunga

Then she takes her purse and like a wind she moved out of the chawl

Rk went down the stairs running and said

Rk: madhu ruko mai tumhe drop kardunga

Madhu: no thanks mai chali jaungi

Rk: pagal ladki

Madhu: maine sunliye pagal ladke

He smiled and went up

Madhu reached there and gave money to the auto she saw the building and said

Madhu: woww (it was a big building of glass she prayed to god) plzzz bhagwan yeh job mujhe mil jana plzzz agar mujhe yeh job milgayi toh malik ko over time job nahi karna padega

Then she went in the cabin and One man showing some papers to mishra she said

Madhu: may i come in sir

Mr.mishra: (he was reading some papers he saw her and said) yes come in Ms. Madhubala u are late

Madhu: i am really very sorry sir woh actually...

He stops her inbetween

Mr.mishra: i dont need any excuses just show me ur qualification

She gives him the files he saw it and said

Mr.mishra: apne bare mai kuch batao

Madhu: sir woh actually mai ek middle class family se hoon mujhe iss job ki bahut zarurat hai agar app mujhe yeh job denge toh bahut meherbani hogi

Then the man who said stood beside mr mishra said sir yeh ek chawl ki ladki hai and she is not on time apka standard kharab hojayega then suddenly phone rings of madhu mr mishra saw it the name was written rishu she picks the phone and said

Rk: haan kya hua madhu pahunch gayi

Madhu: rishu mera interview chal raha hai..

Rk: oh sorry mai baad mai call karta hoon

Then she cuts the phone and mr mishra asks her

Mr: mishra: rishu kaun hai

Madhu: sir woh RK

Mr.mishra: rk?

Madhu: haan sir woh rishabh kundra

Mr mishra gets shocked and says yeh tumhara dost hai?

Madhu: haan sir kyun

Then the man standing beside her says to mr mishra sir yeh rk sabse mashoor aur amiir khandan ka hai sir aur usse rishu bula rahi hai lagta hai bahut gehri dosti hai sir hume bahut faida hoga then mr. Mishra says to madhu

Mr. Mishra: congratulations you are hired

she gets very happy

madhu: really

He said the man who is standing beside her to bring some sweets he says to madhu

Mr. Mishra: badhai ho lijiye kuch meetha kha lijiye

Madhu: no thanks mai kabse join karsakti hoon?

Mr. Mishra: apki marzi jab apka dil kahe

She gets a bit confused she thinks chodo mujhe toh job milgayi she thanks to god and thinks rishu maa aur malik kitne khush honge mai une abhi jake batati hun she asks mr. Mishra

Madhu: sir kya mai apne ghar ja sakti hun

Mr. Mishra: kyun

Madhu: sir woh mujhe rishu maa aur malik ku yeh khushkhabri deni hai

Mr. Mishra: (with a smile ) yes ofcouse zaroor jasakti ho

Madhu gets out of the cabin very happily. She comes out of the cabin then suddenly hears mishra saying to the man that he kept her on job because rk and madhu are best friends and Rk is very rich

She gets shocked when she listened that she got angry went into the cabin and took the file mishra saw that and said

Mr. Mishra: kya hua mam aap itne gusse mai kyun hai?

Madhu: pehle aap mujhe yeh bataiye ki mai apke company mai kaam karti hun toh aap mujhe mam kyun bula rahe hai?

(He remained silent) she said

Madhu: mujhe yeh kaam apne yogyata aur apne balbute pe chahiye tha isliye nahi kyun ki mai Rishu ki best friend hoon opps sorry rishabh kundra ki friend hun aap jaise ghatiya log ki company main mai kaam nahi karna chahti hoon jo mujhe apne faide ke liye job de rahe hai kyunki mai rishab kundra ki friend hoon

They remained silent she went out of the cabin like a wind with anger suddenly rk calls her she picks and says in a sad and anger tone

Madhu: hello :(

Rk: hey ball toh job milgayi

Madhu: Rishu mai ghar a rahi hoon waha ake batati hun

Rk: ok

And she cuts the phone took a auto to reach home..Rk thinks what happen to madhu why she is talking in a strange tone when i said ball she used to get angry then why she did not said anything to me maybe she lost her job how can i make her happy idea...

Madhu comes on the enterance of chawl and suddenly a red carpet rolls she thought it would be rishu he wants to make me happy she walks on it with a smile and he comes infront of her and start singing in his own voice

Rk: Aaja Mein Hawaon Pe Bithake Le Chalun Tu Hi To,Tu Hi To Meri Dost Hain Aaja Mein Khalon Mein Uthake Le Chalun Tu Hi To Meri Dost Hain Awaaz Ka Dariya Hoon Behta Hoon Mein Nili Raaton Mein
Main Jaagta Rehta Hoon Neend Bhari Jheel Se Aankhon Mein
Awaaz Hoon Main Aaja Mein Hawaon Pe Bithake Le Chalun
Tu Hi To,Tu Hi To Meri Dost Hain
Aaja Mein khayalon Mein Uthake Le Chalun (yuvraj tu meri dost hai) (this is the song which they always used to sing for each other)

Madhu: (she gets happy and says) oo hawoon pe bithaoge aur utaoge
Khayalon mein rakho ge tum toh tumhe koi would be Mrs kundra milgayi

Rk: haan

Madhu: really kaun

Rk: tum

Madhu: shut up rishu tumahri itni bhi buri kismat nai hai

Rk: nai mai toh bahut lucky hojunga agar tum mujhe milogi

Madhu: tum jaise pagal ke saath mai kyun rahungi

Rk: mai pagal tum pagal

Madhu: :) mai pagal nahi tum duffer

Rk: idiot

Madhu: stupid

Rk: moti

Madhu: tumari itni himat abhi tumhe batati hun (she runs behind him and says) mai agar tumari would be banugi toh dekhna tumara kya haal karungi

Rk: tumare jaisi moti ke saath main shaadi nai karunga

Madhu: (she gets more angry and runs behind him) rishu ruko

He goes behind pabbo and keeps his chin on her shoulder and says

Rk: maa madhu ko dekho na woh mujhe maar rahi hai (with a cute puppy face)

Maa: madhu kyun bechare ko sata rahi hai thak jayega woh

Madhu: maa aap uski side kyun le rahi ho rishu mujhe sata raha hai aur moti keh raha hai (she also says with a cute puppy face)

Maa: Rishu beta kyun madhu ko akele sata rahe ho saath milkar satate hai

Madhu: maaa...

Suddenly they together started laughing..

Its evening and pabbo calls madhu for dinner she comes near the dinning table and rk stops her

Rk: madhu ruko tum dinner nahi karogi

Madhu: rishu kya hua dekh mujhe abhi pareshaan mat kar mujhe bahut tez bhuk lag rahi hai ab tak toh mere pet main ke chuhe bhi mar gaye

Rk: nahi tum aaj mere saath bahar dinner karne chalogi

Madhu: plzz rk mujhe bahut bhuk lagi hai hum kal chale jayenge

Rk: agar tum nahi chalogi toh mai khana nahi khaunga

Madhu: ok math khao (they both can't live without food)

Rk: madhu plzzz (with a cute puppy face)

Madhu: ohk fine

Rk: yeppyyy

She goes into room and wear a light pink and white anarkali suit with a pink lip gloss and high tight pony tail
when he saw her his jaw drop she was looking so elegant and beautiful
She gave a look and catch his hand and took downstairs from chawl she comes beside the door of car and he said

Rk: stop

Madhu: now what

Rk opens the door for madhu she sits inside then he sat beside on tha driving seat he starts the car

Madhu: kya baat hai jab girlfriend banegi toh issi tarah treat karne ki
Practice kar rahe ho

Rk: no jab tumara bf banega toh usse manners ate hai ya nahi yeh bata raha tha (he smiles)

After some time

Madhu: rk mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai

Rk: kya tum mere bache ki maa bane wali ho

Madhu: tumhe kaise pata

Rk stops the car and said

Rk: what????

She starts laughing

Rk: ha ha very funny (he gave a fake smile and started the car)

Madhu: rk mujhe serious tumse kuch kehna hai

Rk: i know yeh hi na ki tumhe job nahi mili aur maine yeh baat pabbo ko bhi bata di

Madhu: haan rishu mujhe iss job ki bahut zaroraat hai

Rk: dont worry mil jayegi take a chill pill

Madhu start seeing out of window rk thinks madhu is very sad i think she needs someone who can be with her? Who can give her a job? He shouts

Rk: idea..

He saw madhu and said

Rk: Nothing

Rk thinks about a rich boyfriend who can keep madhu happy..n start concentrating on driving

Madhu asks

Madhu: whats happening in ur life

Rk: kuch nai mum aur dad dono itna kaam mai busy rehte hai ki mujhe waqt hi nahi de pate (that why he always be with her since he was the only child) (he gets sad)

Madhu: she start thinking someone should be in his life who can fill the the emptyness of his life with happiness who could it be? Now she shouts

Madhu: idea...(she saw rk and said) nothing

Yes a sensible girlfriend will be good for him n she starts seeing outside the window thinking how to get a good gf for him!!

But after few minutes they both scratched that idea from their mind thinking it just was not a very good idea..they dont need anyone n they r prefectly happy together :D

Precap: Rishbala cute moments

P.s:If i get more than atleast 15 likes and comments i will continue this ss or else i ll not!!

-Maria

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Part-8

Then it was rk's turn he took the chit from bowl and the name was maine pyaar kiya

He went in middle looked at madhu and showed thumbs up

Madhu: hindi

Then he showed three fingers

Madhu: three words

He nodded in yes then he kept his hands crossed on his chest and madhu said

Madhu: i me you

He nodded in no

Madhu: mai

He nodded yes

Madhu: maine

He nodded yes and showed heart shaped pillow to madhu

Madhu: dil heart pillow

He nodded no

Madhu: love

He nodded yes and showed thumbs up

Madhu: hindi love pyaar maine pyaar kiya

He went near madhu and gave a tight hug to her

It was around 12:30 pm she was in room madhu got a call

Madhu: hello yes

Caller: ms. Madhubala malik

Madhu: yes

Caller: hi mam i am calling from dixit group of industries and you got a job offer

Madhu: really

Caller: yes mam you can come and give your interview

Madhu: really when

Caller: today

Madhu: today

Caller: yes mam you can come today at 1:00 pm

Madhu: ok but address

Caller: dont worry mam i will message you

Madhu: but how did you got my number

Caller: mam your father came here and told us your resume is also with us and plzz dont be late

Madhu: ok i will come bye

Caller: bye mam

She kept the phone went out of room rk was eating apple he was about to bite it she went running removed the apple from his mouth and hugged him tightly everyone were shock seeing that she said

Madhu: rishuuu i got call and he offered me job in dixit industries

Rk: really strawberry

Madhu: yesss

Everyone congratulated her she said to rk

Madhu: rishu now we should leave my interview is at 1:00 pm lets go she went in room for getting ready

Preeti: but..

Rk: dont worry you all stay here in we will give madhu a suprise party on cruise

Sonia: really but preparations

Rk: i will come after leaving madhu

Madhu came and said bye to everyone

Karan: bye dude take your starwberry oh sorry madhu safely

Misha: karan its madhu he will take extra care for her

Rk: stop teasing us bye

They went out and sat i car rk stopped the car infront of florist shop
Madhu said

Madhu: rishu what happen i dont want be late lets go plzz

Rk: wait strawberry have some patience

He bought a yellow rose madhu asked

Madhu: why you took that yellow rose

Rk: said na strawberry have some patience

He drove the car to soon they reached the dixit group of industries
Rk gave madhu a the yellow rose

Madhu: rose??..

She asked in confused expression

Rk: for good luck now bye or else you will be late

Madhu: yea right bye

She hugged him and went inside she was stading out of the office she knocked on the door and said

Madhu: may i come in sir

Voice came yes

Madhu went inside she was seeing the back of chair the chair turned it was mukund dixit he was checkinf her resume without seeing her he said..

Mukund: ms. Madhubala shamsher malik

Madhu: yes sir

Mukund: plzzz sit

She sat on chair and was very nervous

After checking resume mukund saw madhu... he was going to say something but when he saw madhu he was staring at her he was thinking...

She is sooo beautiful.. He was amazed and just staring at her

Madhu was feeling uncomfortable coz he was staring at her

He was attracted to her then he said angel...madhu said

Madhu: excuse me

Then he came out of trance and said

Mukund: sorry actually i was...ummhh.. Actually... Ya i was asking that do you like angels

Madhu: yes sir but why are you asking

Mukund: ummh... Smply

Madhu: ok soo sir i am selected???

Mukund: yes yes ofcourse you are selected you can join from tommorow

She got happy and said

Madhu: thank you sir thank you very much mai apku ek bhi shikayat ka mauka nahi dungi

Mukund: ya right

Madhu: sir now can i go

Mukund: ya sure

She raised her hand and said

Madhu: sir my resume

He gave her then she went out of the cabin mukund thought what has happened to me i was thinking not to give her job then why i gave her the job i think i am attracted to her or is this first sight love...

SORRY I AM NOT GOING TO CANCEL THE CRUISE PARTY COZ IT IS NOT FITING IN STORY I WILL WRITE IT LATER AND AFTER DEEPALI'S ENTRY RK AND MADHU BOTH WILL GET JEALOUS FOR EACHOTHER AND RK WILL GET MORE JEALOUS
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Part-5
Rk and madhu both got ready for party they were wearing this


The party was only for all the friends only...

They both sat in car..while driving rk said

Rk: madhu.. Oh sorry honey.. Why are you wearing western

Madhu: actually rishu you know how much i like western attire

Rk: oh ya right thats why your wearing this




Madhu: yes how i am looking

Rk: fat

Madhu: rishu plzz tell na

Rk: oh honey you are looking so pretty so fabulous i will faint right now at looking you katrina kaif and deepika would look dumb infront of
You

Madhu: really..

Rk: No

Madhu: rishuuu

And then they both reached the farm house rk came out of the car and opened the door for madhu she came out..everyone present on the pool party were looking at madhu and rk... They both start walking together they went inside the farm house in hall then trishna comes and says

Trish: madhuuu how are you i missed you alot

Madhu: trish when did you came to india??? you left me after college and went to paris

Trish: yes madhu yesterday morning i came to mumbai and got invite for rk's pool party

When trishna and madhu were talking rk went from there to talk with his friends

Rohit and preeti (sanaya irani & mohit sehal)

Karan and sonia (karan kundra & krithika kamra)
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Kabir and misha (karan singh grover & jennifer winget grover)
(misha, kabir, rohit, karan, sonia, preeti) they all started talking

Preeti: hey rishabh what happend?? you both are so late??

Sonia: ya rishabh i think something is going on between you and madhu..isnt it??

Kabir: not only you sonia everyone thinks something is there between both of you!!

Karan: yes rishabh something something???

Rk: nothing.. nothing is going on between me and honey

Rohit: oohh your saying honey to madhu and nothing is their between you both..

Misha: awww honey you call her honey...

Sonia: we all are together after college and this many things happened and you did not even tell to us about this rishabh..huh

Preeti: oh god rishabh plzz say when did you propose to madhu?

Misha: yes when did you kissed her?

Sonia: when did you took her on a date?

Preeti: how was your date?

Misha: when did you realize about your feelings?

Rk: stop it girls...we both are just friends and before you again start asking questions i am going uff

Kabir: where??

Rk: to call honey

Karan: honey haan

Rk: madhuuu to call madhu and tell you all that we both are just "FRIENDS"

He went to see madhu and saw that she was sitting with trishna on sofa and talking.. he saw madhu is holding a glass of strawberry milkshake so he thought that he will call madhu strawberry infront of his friends and went near madhu and trishna

Rk: hey honey come on get up lets go

Madhu: rishu cant you see i am talking

Rk: plzz lets go strawberry trish you also come with us

Kabir saw rk and said come on lets go near rishabh and madhu and see what they are talking..ok lets go...all went near them and listened carefully what they are talking..

Madhu: Strawberry again a new name

Rk: yes

Madhu: ok i will also call you with another.. i will call you babyyy

Rk: baby?? i am not a baby!!

Madhu: yes you are fatty baby..

Rk: madhu i m gonna kill you and stop calling me baby they will listen

Madhu: who will listen?

Rk: misha, kabir, rohit, preeti, karan and sonia

Madhu: so what will happen??

Rk: they are thinking that we both are couple

Madhu: what the hell

Rk: so stop calling me that and come with me

Madhu: where??

Rk: to tell them that we are just friends!!

Madhu: ok ok trish lets go

All the six friends were listening to them and when they madhu rk and trish comming they went far from there

Madhu: hi everyone

Preeti: hi honey oops sorry madhuu

Madhu: nothing is there between me and rishu so stop teasing us

Kabir: ok leave it rishabh we are getting bore no music is here

Misha: yes rishabh no music?

Rk: you all want music rights? lets go to the pool side..

They all went to the pool side and rk told the waiter to put the music..

Rk start dancing
Aaj blue hai Paani pani paani paani paani
Aur din bhi sunny
Sunny sunny sunny sunny sunny
Aajaao on the beach yaar
Photo meri kheench, phooti kismat hogi teri
Gar tune ye baat na maani

Then madhu start dancing

Aaj blue hai Paani pani paani paani paani
Aur din bhi sunny
Sunny sunny sunny sunny sunny
Aajaao on the beach yaar
Photo meri kheench, phooti kismat hogi teri
Gar tune ye baat na maani

Preeti start start dancing

Sunset ka time ho
Thandi-thandi ret ho
Let's go to party yaara
Mujhse na ab wait ho
Music chala do
Shuru karo party ho gayi der
Bottle pila do mujhko
Bas phir yaara, i don't care

Then all start dancing

Aaj blue hai paani
Paani pani paani paani paani
Aur din bhi sunny
Sunny sunny sunny sunny sunny
Aajaao on the beach yaar
Photo meri kheench
Phooti kismat hogi teri
Agar tune ye baat na maani (x2)
Oho oho

Then misha went near kabir

Ehee ehe
Tera pyaar... Thats all i need
O mere yaar!

Rk start dancing with madhu

Ek tu ho, main hoon
Aur sea-side pe paani ka shor
Aaja meri baahon me Girl what you waiting for

Then karan start dancing with sonia

Tujhko me leke chalun phir pyari si yacht pe
Ho jaayenge hum talli Malibu ke shot pe

Then all start dancing

Aaj blue hai paani
Paani pani paani paani paani
Aur din bhi sunny
Sunny sunny sunny sunny sunny
Aajaao on the beach yaar
Photo meri kheench phooti kismat hogi teri
Gar tune ye baat na maani (x2)

o ho.. o ho...

Madhu and rk both were dancing and enjoying themselves

It was night madhu and rk both went to see arrangements

All the six friends were on sofa talking about..

Kabir: guys what do you think about rk and madhu

Preeti: i think they both love each other

Sonia: yes but they haven't yet realised about their feelings..

Misha: yes you are right

Karan: coz they both are just thinking that they are friends

Rohit: so lets make a plan

Rohit: yes you are right but what is the plan?

Sonia: jealousy

Preeti: what jealousy sonia??

Sonia: see we all know that madhu is to close with rishabh so if rishabh is with another girl and not giving her much time she will get jealous

Rohit: ya you are right but she is still see rishabh as a friend..

Karan: so preeti will make madhu realize that rishabh is more than his friend

Preeti: ya but madhu does not talk to me she is close to rishabh and trish only

Kabir: so you can ask trish to help you in this plan

Misha: ya right but what if madhu does not love rishabh

Sonia: if she does not love rishabh then she will not feel jealousy

Rohit: how does we will make her feel jealous

Preeti: rohit ofcourse if she see rishabh with a girl

Karan: but from where we can get a girl

Misha: just leave it at destiny may be some one will come

Rohit: till then just leave it at destiny

Preeti: lets wait for the right time

Sonia: and when the right time comes we will help them in realizing their "Feelings"

Rk madhu come and says

Rk: whose feelings??

Madhu: ya right what n whose feelings??

Karan: about your feelings!! N He winked at them!

Rk: what Rubbish??

Sonia pinch karan

Karan: ouucchhh..

Preeti: yes about your feelings for... (She thinks)

Karan: yes for..

Rohit: for girls!

Rk: girls?

Madhu: girls?

Kabir: leave it na lets play a game

Rk: yes..but what girls??

Preeti: leave it na rishabh lets play

Rk: ok

Precap: truth or dare game.. And more

Sorry for any mistakes and short pics actually this is my first ss and plzz click the like button and i am going to add haunted house sequence what do you think plzz say...
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Part-2

Madhu: rishu

Rk: yes

Madhu: where are we going to eat?

Rk: victoria hotel

Madhu: plzzz rishu can we go to a dhaba

Rk: madhu we are going to hotel and i am taking you.. You are not taking me..

Madhu: ok ok fine uff..

Rk comes out of the car and opens the door for madhu they both go inside a waiter comes and asks

Waiter: sir are you a couple you both look great together

Rk: no we are friends but thank you for the compliement

Waiter: oh i am sorry sir plzz come this side

They both sat on a table

Waiter: what do u like to have sir?

Rk saw in the menu and said

Rk: uhmm one greek salad and madhu what do you want?

Madhu: yes two days before we met and we became friends come on rishu dont you know what i eat? (they both say together pizza and they both smile)

Rk: one pineapple juice for me and one glass wine for madhu

Madhu: seriously rishu

Rk: one glass juice for her!

Waiter: ok sir your order will come in some time

Rk: ok

The waiter walks off from there..

Madhu: how can you eat greek salad vegetable and all?

Rk: i am on diet

Madhu: aww really to become more fat (she laughs)

Rk: ha ha very funny i cant stop laughing!?!

Madhu: rishu see all couples are there here look at that couple the boy is nerd and she is hottie!

Rk: i think she is with him for money

Madhu: they are not married

Rk: still you dont know about girls

Madhu: all the girls are not same

Rishu: but all girls are not like you

Madhu: aww really

Rishu: mad and fat girls

Madhu: fat??..when u ll come home i will show you huh..

Rk: what you will show?

He smirks

Madhu: come on rishu be serious

Rk: will you marry me?

Madhu: rishu..

And he laughs

Rk: lets play game

Madhu: aww rishu baby wants to paly a game

Rk: plzzz dont call me baby i am a mature boy or you can say me man..

Madhu: yes 40-50 years old man (she smiles)

Rk: madhu plzz lets play na

Madhu: ok ok which game?

Rk: whoever will close the eyes first they will loose

Madhu: get ready to loose ( n she winks)

Rk: Ahaan...we will see!

They both start looking into each others eyes after sometime suddenly
Rk moves his eyes down

Madhu: yeppy you loose i won looser looser..

Rk: if i would look into your eyes for some more time the girl who is sitting behind you will get unconsious ( he was looking at that girl)

Madhu: you like her?

Rk: no she is not my type!

Madhu: (she saw back and the girl was smiling seeing rk) ya right why would she like you a fat 40-50 year old man!

Rk: stop it fat girl..

Madhu: me fat you fat

Rk: fat

Madhu: fat

Rk: fat

Suddenly the waiter comes

Waiter: sir ur order

The waiter keeps the food on table

Rk: the girl was asking about me na?

Waiter: yes sir...she was asking are you rich or not?? I said yes!!

Rk: who is she?

Waiter: tina sir she always comes here with a rich guy

Suddenly the girl comes

Tina: hi rk i am tina (she slides her finger on his shoulder)

Rk: (he saw that and said) sorry not interested !

Madhu interrupts and says

Madhu: noo..he was looking at you and saying that he likes you and you are gorgeous.. actually he is a little bit shy na..

Tina: Really Rk?

Rk: no actually she is my girlfriend!

Madhu: no?!

Rk: come on baby i said sorry i will give you a diamond neckles na..
Actually she is angry with me..

Madhu: no thats not true i am his..

He stops her

Rk: come on jannu dont be shy!

Suddenly a boy comes

Tina: hi jannu where were you?

Boy: sorry i was stuck in traffic

Tine: ok let it be we will go for shopping tomm

Boy: ok baby

They both went from there madhu and rk both gets shocked

Rk: these girls na they are so mean!

Madhu: yup

They both eat their food rk drops her home she saw pabbo and malik packing her bags

Madhu: maa malik where are you going?

Malik: tomm i am going to delhi

Madhu: why?

Malik: for some work now go and sleep!

Madhu: ok

They all sleep next morning pabbo and malik went to delhi and after she went rk comes she tell him about pabbo and malik they both are in bedroom madhu is lying on bed and thinking..rk is playing temple run game on iphone

Madhu: rishu i am tense about my job!

Rk: dont worry i will tell to dad!

Madhu: no i want to get independent and not depend on you for a job!

Rk: ok ok now stop your lecture

Madhu: no rishu if i get a job there no need for malik doing overtime (she saw rk) rishu are you listening come on rishu i am saying something to you and you are playing on phone stop it

Rk: my wish i will do whatever i want if i want to lie down i will lie if i want to sit i will sit

Madhu: you are sitting on my bed rishu

Rk: so what? it does not belong to you it belongs to maa and malik!

Madhu: no it belongs to me only me..got it?

Rk: your name is not written here to miss!

Madhu: yes it is see (she shows her) i known u will tell this so i wrote it before hand :D

Rk: oh really

Madhu: yes

Rk: madhu if any ghost or bhooth comes at night what will you do?

Madhu: i will give your address and tell him that you need him and there is nothing like ghost or something

Rk: oh really.. ok send him there we both will make plan to make you scared..

Madhu: ok all the best i am going to make coffee do you want?

Rk: yup

Madhu: ok

She goes in the kitchen and from there she opens the fridge and see shoes and sandles are in fridge..she gets shocked and goes near the shoes stand there were all the milk and vegetables kept..she goes to rk and says all this to him

Rk: madhu have you drunk the wine last night??

Madhu: no rishu

Rk: madhu come on dont be silly maybe its ghost?

Madhu: no its not rishu..come na

Rk: no i want to play or else i will die

Madhu comes and takes the phone and says

Madhu: rishu plzzz come

Rk: madhu wait i will die let me pause the game

She gives him the phone and he stops the game and they both went into kitchen rk opens the door of fridge and the vegetables were there in it..she says

Madhu: see i told you shoes and sandles are there na

Rk: i think madhu you got mad or drank the wine last night

Madhu saw that and runs near the shoe stand and eveything was at the place where it should be..she gets shocked...

Precap: madhu gets scared and calls Rk!!

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Part-10

Madhu entered in office she went to mukund's office and knocked on the door

Madhu: may i come in sir

Mukund: yes

She went inside and said..

Madhu: good morning sir

mukund saw her and was stairing at her continuously Madhu adjusted her dupatta but still he was stairing at her then making a sound she cleared her throat he was still stairing at her so she said

Madhu: excuse me sir

He was still stairing

Madhu: SIR

He came out of his trance and said

Mukund: hmm hello yes what did you said

Madhu: good morning sir

Mukund: ya ya good morning

Madhu: i am so sorry sir

Mukund: sorry sorry why are you saying sorry

Madhu: coz i am late

Mukund: late your late

He saw his watch and said

Mukund: oh yes you are late dont worry dont be late from tomm

Madhu: sure sir

Mukund: so you can go to your cabin i will send the receptionist to say that what work you have to do today..

Madhu: ok sir

She came out of cabin and went inside her cabin

Mukund said to himself what happend to me i think i am in love and stop stairing at her mukund control yourself control mukund control

Rk was thinking about madhu he was missing her so he texted

Rk: busy?

Madhu saw the text and replied

Madhu; nope

Rk: really why??

Receptionist came into madhu's cabin and said

Sir told us not to give you any work and disturb you then she went from their

Madhu felt wierd and strange she messaged rk about this and rk replied her

Rk: chill strawberry may be there is no work to do today or its your first day so he dont want to disturb you

They both started chatting madhu replied

Madhu: but rishu its so strange coz no one does that of giving no work at first day

Rk: strawberry you should be happy that at first day you have no work and you are free right now?

Madhu: yup i am free why?

Rk: ok then if you have no work come home we will watch a horror movie

Madhu: no rishu its my first day and if today i will take leave and come home then what will my boss think

Rk: already you have any work you are free na so come home plzzz na honey

Madhu: nooo and why you started calling me honey?

Rk: infront of others i will call strawberry but in private i will call you honey

Madhu: i am your friend not your girlfriend

Rk: so that does not matter you are veryyy close to me na honey so i will call you honey in private

Madhu: as your wish

Then after chatting with rk for some hours madhu went home coz her shift was finished

She went inside the house it was all dark she got tensed and shouted

Madhu: rishu maa malik anyone is there plzz say rishu maa

Then suddenly rk came and shouted in her ear loudly BOOO madhu got very scared she closed her eyes and shouted Aaa mummy then rk started laughing and switched on the lights

Madhu: rishu are you mad you gave me a heart attack

Rk: awww madhu baby got scared shall i call your mummy or do you want some milk

Madhu got angry

Madhu: RISHUUU

She started runnig behind him then...

Precap: rk at madhu's office getting a little bit of jealous seeing mukund and madhu

Sorry for short update
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SORRY I AM GOING TO CANCEL THE CRUISE PARTY COZ IT IS NOT FITING IN STORY I WILL WRITE IT LATER AND AFTER DEEPALI'S ENTRY RK AND MADHU BOTH WILL GET JEALOUS FOR EACHOTHER AND RK WILL GET MORE JEALOUS

Part-9

Madhu went out of the cabin and called rk

Madhu: hello rishu

Rk: haan strawberry say what happened di you got the job??

Madhu: yes

Rk: really strawberry i am veryyy happy for you where are you now?

Madhu: i am at the office but why are you asking?

Rk: ok so be there i will come there to pick you

Madhu: but why??

Rk: dont ask anything just come down and stand

Madhu: ok

Madhu was standing down rk's car came he opened the door of the car and came out he hugged madhu happily and said her to sit inside the car then while rk was driving madhu asked..

Madhu: rk where are we going plzzz say na

Rk: to eat your favv ice-cream

Madhu: really

Rk: yes

Then he stopped the car infront of ice cream parlour and they came out of car and went inside rk ordered chocolate flavour for him amd strawberry flavour for madhu

Madhu: rishu you know when he said i was selected i was sooo happy but he was staring at me

Rk: ok so from tomm you are not going to that office

Madhu: but why

Rk: coz no one has right of staring at you

Madhu: really then who has the right at staring me

Rk: me

Madhu: you

Rk: yes me coz your mine strawberry your my bestest friend

Madhu smiled then the waiter came amd served the ice cream

Madhu: what is this rishu you know i like strawberry flavour not chocolate

Rk: today you will eat chocolate and i will eat strawberry flavour

Madhu: but why

Rk: coz i like you and u are my best friend and my strawberry

Madhu: but rishu

Rk: plzzz

Madhu: ok

They both ate the ice cream.. Rk droped madhu her house amd he went to his house

Next morning madhu was getting ready for her office she was standind infront of mirror and wearing earrings rk came and said

Rk: what happened madhu are you ok?

Madhu: yes what will happen to me and why are you asking this

Rk: coz today first time ms. Madhubala shamsher malik has got up early in moring

Madhu: coz i dont want to be late

Rk: really i think you will be

Madhu: really how

Rk went near her took lipstick from her hand and applied all over her face madhu shouted

Madhu: rishuuu i am no gonna leave

She ran behind and then took water bottle and throwed water on him but rk sat down and behind him was malik all the water fall on malik then rk got up and started laughing

Madhu: i am sorry malik actually i was throwing the water on rishu but he sat down and all the water fall on you sorry malik

Rk: awww bechari madhu..

Madhu: rishu now you are gone

She ran behind him they both went in kitchen running then madhu took flour and throwed on rk he looking like a old man he took a steel plate and saw himself on the plate and he said

Rk: strawberry when i will become old i be as handsome as i am now

Then they both started laughing and pabbo came she said

Pabbo: madhu tu abhi yahi hai office nai jana hai

Madhu: office oh no she rushed towards washroom..

Sorry for short update

Precap: madhu's first day in office

SORRY I AM GOING TO CANCEL THE CRUISE PARTY COZ IT IS NOT FITING IN STORY I WILL WRITE IT LATER AND AFTER DEEPALI'S ENTRY RK AND MADHU BOTH WILL GET JEALOUS FOR EACHOTHER AND RK WILL GET MORE JEALOUS
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Hi everyone thanks for your love and support more fun and suspence is going to come...and sorry for late update.. And sorry for the short update :p

Part-3
Horror sequence

After that incident rk went to his house
Three days passed some curious incidents were happening with madhu rk was really very tensed about it

At night madhu was sleeping on her bed she moved to right side and she saw a shadow wearing raincoat standing near her with a spike shaped knife eyes were open wide she got very scared and she opened the lights of her room and no one was there she went to kitchen to take a knife for her safety and then she came to bedroom the knife she kept under her pillow and she slept

It was around 3 am madhu was on her bed she opened her eyes and saw a shadow wearing rain coat behind her window she shouted

Madhu: who is there..( she took the knife in her hand

The shadow was comming near her with a spike shape knife Madhu got very scared and she called rk

At rk mansion rk was sleeping on his bed suddenly his phone rang he took the phone madhu's name was written on it he saw the time it was 3:15 am he pick up the phone

Madhu: rishu i am really very scared someone is here he wants to kill me

Rk: madhu no one there maybe you saw your own shadow

Madhu: no rishu someone is here he will kill me

Rk: who madhu who will kill you? hello.. Hello madhu

Madhu: rk hello

Rk again called madhu and the it was switched off he got very tensed and rushed towards her house

Rk reached the chawl he went to her she was on bed sitting sleeping with a knife in her hand rk saw that and said

Rk: madhu get up madhu

Madhu: (she got up and said) rishu someone is there near that window

He went there and opened the window no one was there

Rk: madhu no one is here i said u na...

Madhu: no rishu someone wants to kill me with knife

Rk: madhu try to understand i think u saw ur own shadow with knife

Madhu: but rishu..

Rk: madhu its 4 am now sleep we disscus this later

Madhu was slept on bed rk sat down holding her hand he also slept

Tomm morning rk got up first he saw madhu she was sleeping in very scared sleep rk was really very tensed he thought of taking madhu for shopping so that she can get out of those scary incidents

He took madhu to a shopping mall both of them bought clothes for eachother they both tired and hungry they went to eat something in the subway rk ordered a burger and madhu ordered a pizza she them went to washroom

She was washing her hands suddenly all red coloured water was comming through the tap the lights started going on and off she saw in mirror she saw againf same shadow man who was wearing a black coloured raincoat she cant see his face because he was wearing the raincoat cap and the lights were going on and off she shouted RISHU...

Rk was sitting and thinking how make madhu happy because she was very scared and he heard madhu shouting rishu he went in the washroom

Madhu saw behind her no one was there then rk came

Madhu: (she hugged him she was very scared and said) rishu i said na someone wants to kill me the shadow he came here also to kill me

Rk kissed her on forehead and he checked everywhere no shadow man was there

Madhu: rishu blood is comming through this tap someone wants to kill me

He opened the tap fresh water was comming rk called the manager and asked about the man wearing raincoat and about the tap to the manager and he said

Manager: sir today only we have poured the fresh water in the water tank and i asked to the watch man he said he did not saw any man who was wearing a rain coat

Madhu got down on her knees amd started crying she was very scared rk came near madhu and said

Rk: madhu dont cry everything will be fine i am with you na..dont worry

Madhu: rishu mujhe bahut daar lagraha hai he will kill me

Rk: no madhu i with u dont worry anyone cant harm you because i am with you (he hugged her)

They both went in the car and sat for the first time madhu did not talked anything in the car they both were thinking about those incidents

They both reached the chawl they opened the door and got shocked seeing that there was...

Precap: the truth will be revealed about the shadow man...
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Thank you for your support plzzz support like this only and dont forget to like and comment i am little greedy :D and sorry for soo manny parties :p

Part-7
Games

SORRY THE PRECAP I WRITTEN IN 6 PART WAS WRONG

All girls and boys slept in seperate rooms

Madhu was about to sleep then she thought of checking her phone if her mom and dad had called her then she got to know that the phone is with rk so she silently got up the three girls were sleeping happily she went out of the room and she was standing infront of the window of boys room she saw from the window that all 4 boys were sleeping some were snoring from those 4 boys 2 boys faces were covered with blanket...

She went inside the room on her toes silently she slowly went infront of the boy whose face was covered with blanket she slowly removed the blanket from his face it was karan he was moving his hands karan was about to touch her shoulder she moved back...

Then she went near another boy she removed the blanket it was rk she sigh in relief finally i found him she thought in her mind then started checking the phone rk then kept his hand on her back and she shouted rohit got up and said

Rohit: who is there

She quickly went under rk's blanket and covered her and rk face.. madhu
And rk were a inch away she was looking at his face then rohit went and opened the light madhu was hiding coz if anyone will see her then what will they think about her...rohit saw rk he was step by step going towards rk he was going to remove the blanket then karan got up and said

Karan: what happen

Rohit: nothing i heard some girl noise

Karan: no one is here may be you saw a dream now go and sleep

Rohit: ok

He went and closed the light soon karan and rohit both slept madhu in hurry took rk and madhu both phone and she was about to go then suddenly rk kept his hand on her shoulder she saw him smiled and slowly removed his hand and went to her room checked her phonr if her mom and dad had called her and then she slept

It was around 3:30 am rk got up thought of checking emails he searched for his phone but it was not there then madhu's phone was also not there then he thought may be madhu took it but when maybe when i was sleepning he thought of going to madhu's room and take his phone he was very sleepy but still without checking he cant sleep coz he always love chatting and checking emails so went in madhu's room

She was sleeping peacefully and was looking soo beautiful that he was just looking at her for sometime and then he went near her laid down he was continuously seeing he then he started checking phone madhu took his arms and covered with hands she was sleeping in side pose she smiled in sleep and tightly coverd his arms with her hands rk saw her and gave cute smile...

All the six were standing beside madhu and rk gigling and rk got up and saw that he slept beside madhu both were catching each other hands preeti said..

Preeti: oh ho rishabh without seeing madhu you cant sleep

Sonia: ya rishabh atleast you should wait for 1 night

Misha: look still madhu is sleeping

Rk: stop it i just came here for my phone

Karan: your phone not your madhu

Kabir: ya see how both are catching their hands and sleeping

Rohit: just like a sweet lovable couple

Madhu got up and she got shocked seeing rk and little embaressed she quickly removed her hand and went out of the room...

Everyone looked at rk...sonia said

Sonia: awww look at her how shy she is..

Kabir: rishabh when did you came

Karan: after comming what did you did

Rohit: ya rishabh say

Rk: i said na that i just came here to take my phone and before you all say anything i am going from here

Rk went out of the room everyone started laughing

Preeti: i think there is something going between them

Misha: yup lets wait for the right time

They all went out of the room for breakfast... On dinning table

Karan: so what we will do after breakfast

Rk: go to our home

Kabir: come on rishabh dont be a spoil sport

Rohit: yea after so manny years we met

Preeti: ok lets play a game then

Madhu: no after last night incident we will not play

Sonia: oh madhu last night incident just happened now we cant do anything...

Misha: yea coz of tomm we will not spoil today...

Madhu: but...

Sonia: no if no but we will play

Preeti: but which game...

Misha: lets play hide & seek

Kabir: oh come on mish we are not small kids to play

Karan: dumb charlades

Rohit: no blind fold

Rk: ok we will play both games

Misha: ya first we will play blind fold

Everyone agreed after the dinner they went in backyard and rk wore the blind fold...

Everyone were clapping and clicking their fingers rk went near the wall madhu shouted

Madhu: rishu stop

He went near madhu and catch her from her waist and removed the blind fold

All were shouting yea madhu now you should were the blind fold she wore it...

She was roaming everywhere then she was straight going to the wall and rk went infront of the wall her head clashed to his chest...then she removed the blind fold and rishbala eye lock..

All of them played for sometime and then they wrote film names in the chits put them in bowl it was madhu's turn she went and picked up the chit the name was hum tumhare hai sanam..

She went in middle everyone were sitting in semicircle she was looking at rk and she showed thumbs up rk said

Rk: hindi

She noded in yes then she showed 4 fingers rk said

Rk: 4 words

Madhu nodded in yes then she kept her both hands crossed on her chest rk said

Rk: mai

She nodded in no

Rk: i

She nodded in no

Rk: iam

She nooded no and then she pointed to him then her he said

Rk: mai tum hum dono

She nodded yes he said

Rk: hum dono

She showed 2 fingers and touched her first finger

Rk: hum

She nodded yes and showed 2 fingers and touched 2 finger

Rk: 2 word

Then she pointed to rk

Rk: mai tum hum tum

She nodded in no rk said

Rk: mere tumahre

She nodded yes and told him to think

Preeti: madhu dont talk

Rk: hum tumahre... He strated thinking the said hum tumhare hai sanam

She happily jumped and went near rk and hugged him happily...
Edited by sumaiya10 - 11 years ago
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Part-6
Truth or dare
They all sat down on mat with pillows all the couples were sitting opposite madhu n madhu called servant to bring bottle then she spins the bottle top of bottle is on sonia and bottom of bottle is on karan he said

Karan: ok sonia truth or dare??

Sonia: hmm dare

Karan: ok so dance like a boy!!!

Sonia: what?? No...

Misha: come on yaar sonia u can do it..

Rk: i did not knew that the girls are so darpuk(craven)

Madhu: come on sonia show this idiots the the girl power

Preeti: yes sonia show them that who is darpuk(craven)

Sonia: how can i show girl power by dancing like a boy??

Madhu: oh you can do it sonia come on

Misha: yea sonia...sonia come on

Sonia: ok ok fine

She gets up wear a tshirt on top of her dress and dance on the song hud dabang and after the song she sat down

Now rk spins the bottle and it points towards madhu and rk he says

Rk: now strawberry truth or dare

Madhu: truth

Rohit: oh strawberry opps sorry madhu you only said girl power and said truth

Karan: yup right rohit now we can see who is darpuk (craven)...

Preeti: madhu say na dare

Madhu: but...

Misha: u can do it sayy

Madhu: fine but at 1 condition

Rk: what condition

Madhu: it should be easy not vulgar or hard

Rk: ok but if again next time your turn comes then i will give you hard one...

Madhu: ok

Rk: so do a dance

Madhu: dance??

Rk: yes strawberry now dont say its hard its so easy one

Kabir : ya madhu...rishabh gave you simple easy one now dance

Sonia: yes madhu come on

Madhu gets up and dances on lucky boy song from film bachna ae haseeno

She walks around all boys they all gets up Ho kya gazab ki tujhpe
Meherbaaniyan
Main ik nazar daalun jo tujh pe toh
Badh jaaye mere saath teri yaariyan
Kadmon mein tere lakh jannat ho

She went near rk and takes his hand make him stand and dances Aankhon mein baatein hain
Baton mein vade hain
Vadon mein baahein hain
Tu baahon mein aa ja zara

Lucky boy, you're my, lucky boy
Jaane kaun banega mera lucky boy
Lucky boy, you're my, lucky boy
Jaane kaun banega mera lucky boy

All claps for madhu appriciates her and sonia spins the bottle it points towards preeti and rohit

Preeti: ok so truth or dare

Rohit: dare

Preeti: ok so propose me

Rohit: what

Preeti: real or fake however you want

Rk: yea rohit you can do it

Kabir: come on rohit

Karan: rohit rohit rohit

Rohit gets up and say to preeti

Rohit: i love you

Preeti: sit down on your knees and say

Rohit: what no

Preeti: ok rohit got scared of proposing me

Rohit: you will pay for this (he sits down on his knees and says) i love you

All the girls says together awww

Then karan spins the bottle it points towards madhu and rk

Rk: so again strawberry truth or dare

Madhu: (she looks in his eyes and says) dare

Rk: ahaaan so do a seductive dance

Madhu: noo..

Misha: yes madhu

Madhu: no

Misha: yes madhu you can do it

Preeti: plzzz do it

Sonia: come on plzzz

Madhu: ok ok just for you girls

She stands up and the song plays yeh lazy lamhe from film thoda pyar thoda magic

She take rk hand and make him stand and then take him to the small sofa Beete sarak sarak ke, dekho yeh lazy lamhe
Chalte khishak khishak ke, yeh lazy lahme

Lazy lahme..
Kaisi yeh khumari,dekho yeh lazy lamhe,
Palke bhaari bhaari, yeh lazy lamhe..

She sits on rk's lap and slides her finger on rk's face to chest Dheela chor khud ko, aa tu ugliyan fira,
Hasratoin ke nazme, tu badan pe likh jaa..
Then she stands went back of sofa puts her head on his shoulder and slides her both hands on his shoulders to fingers Dhadkan hai..ooh ooh ooh, thehri si..ooh ooh ooh,
Saansein hai..ooh ooh ooh, gehri si..ooh ooh ooh,
Then she makes rk stand her back was touching his chest she takes his hands and puts it on her waist and slow dance Yeahhh...yeahh lazy lazy lamhe
Lazy lamhe
Yeahhh...yeahh lazy lazy lamhe
Lazy lamhe..

The song stops everyone was shock ..seeing madhu dancing with rk...inside they were also enjoying the dance...

Without saying anything madhu sat on mat and she spins the bottle it pointed towards kabir and misha kabir says

Kabir: truth or dare

Misha: dare

Karan: kiss rk on his cheek

Everyone says what??..

Karan stairs at everyone

Kabir: no misha you will not kiss rk

Madhu: yes

Karan says in kabir's ear

Karan: kabir do you remember about plan?..

Kabir: but...

Karan: if she will kiss rishabh is not going to take her to somewhere

Rk: what are you saying in his ear karan??...

Kabir: nothing ok fine misha you can kiss rishabh

Madhu: no

Preeti: why??..

Madhu: coz he is my friend

Sonia: so??

Madhu: any girl cannot kiss him

Misha: why??..

Karan: but she is your friend not any girl..

Rohit: madhu are you getting jealous

Kabir: o my god madhu is jealous

Madhu: no i am not

Preeti: yes you are

Madhu: no

Preeti: yes

Sonia: stop it you both

Madhu: ok you can kiss but only on cheek

Misha: ok fine

then she kisses him on cheek rohit spins the bottle it points towards rk and madhu

Madhu: so rishu truth or dare??..

Rk: always dare

Madhu: ok so do salman khan flim scene

Rk: what no

Madhu: ok looser

Rk: dont call me looser i can do it

Rohit patted on rk shoulder and said

Rohit: thats the spirit bro

Karan: whats the scene???..

Madhu: the scene is of film ishq ram ram in that scene ajay devgan walked on two pipes which were in between of two buildings and he did not even realize that he was walking on pipes coz he was seeing kajol she was on the other side of building you should just walk on pipe...So can you do this?

Rk: no are you mad??..

Rohit: are rishabh you can..

Kabir: yes rishabh dont be a spoil sport

Karan: ya come on rishabh

Rk: but what if i fall

Madhu: then your best buddies are there na if they can cheer u then they can also help you

Rk: ya but its farm house there is no pipe

Madhu: if there is no pipe then you can walk on boudaries of terrace

Rk: WHAT??.. No

Madhu: what happend rishu baby got scared

Rk: i am not a baby and i said you dont call me baby

Madhu: ok if you are not a baby they prove it

Rk: ok lets go

All went on terrace and rk was stading on the boudarie and madhu said

Madhu: ok so you should walk on this from start to end ok na

Rk nooded and started walking madhu gave a smirk everyone were worried and tensed then madhu expression were changed she was thinking

Oh no what i am doing this if rishu will fall then no no i should stop him she shouted

Madhu: rishu stop you will fall plzz stop

Rk is rk he did not stop and was walking

Madhu: rk plz stop karan plzz say something stop him

She was very tensed

Karan: rishabh leave it yaar stop for a game you kept your life in danger dont do that

Madhu: yes rishu if anything will happen to you and i will never be ablebto forgive myself

Rk saw madhu and suddenly he lost his balance and he falls he was hanging on his hands madhu shouted

Madhu: RISHU!!!

He rushed towards then karan and kabir helped him to come up and he sat down madhu immediatly hugged him she was feeling sad and she started crying madhu said

Madhu: rishu i said you na dont walk its all coz of me i should not have to tell you this i am sooo sorry rishu what if you will fall down i will never be able forgive myself and you should not i should fa...

Then rk kept his hand on madhu's mouth and said

Rk: no madhu dont be sorry its not coz of you if i would be at your side i would also do this and stop crying plzzz

He wiped her tears and madhu said

Madhu: its not madhu its strawberry

He chuckled

Karan said

Karan: lets go down i dont know about you all but i am very tired so lets go

Everyone agreed and went down

Precap: madhu going for her 2nd interview mukund's entry and cruise (ship party)

PLZZZ TELL ME WHO SHOULD FIRST REALIZE ABOUT THEIR FEELING I AM THINKING THAT MADHU SHOULD REALISE WHAT DO YOU THINK COMMENT AND SHARE YOUR FEELINGS AND SORRY FOR LATE UPDATE AND SO MANNY SONGS ,PARTY'S... SORRY FOR MISTAKES..


Edited by sumaiya10 - 11 years ago
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Madhu was getting ready she weared jeans and Tshirt

Rk: strawberry what is this?

Madhu: what?? What happend?

Rk: why are you wearing jeans and Tshirt?

Madhu: coz I love it..

She said looking at mirror adjusting her Tshirt

Rk: no go and change and wear this dress

Madhu: no I don't love that

Rk: strawberry do what I am saying

He ordered...madhu made a sad face and went inside washroom to change

Madhu came out wearing a light blue and white anakali suit and she was looking asusual stunning and gorgeous..

Madhu went infront of mirror and started wearing heavy jewellery rk saw that and said

Rk: what is this now?

Madhu: what happen is there any problem again?

Rk: yes

Madhu: what??

Rk: why are you wearing this heavy jewellery at date

Madhu: coz I love it

Rk: but this is not a marriage of someone so wear this jewellery

He gave her a small diamond and light blue ruby set it was small and light

Madhu: but it's so light jewellery

Rk: just wear it

Madhu: but...

Rk: strawberry..

Madhu: ok fine

She took it and wear it

Then madhu said

madhu:now I am ready can I go now?

Rk: no no wait your hands are empty

She saw that and wore a bracelet in one hand then rk gave her some bangles to wear in other hand

Madhu: Ok so now can I go

Rk: no no wait

Madhu: now what?

Rk put his hand in his pocket and took out a single diamond ring and gave it to her

Rk: wear this

Madhu: it's for me

Rk: yes it's your and I want you to wear it today

Madhu got happy and she wore it in her middle finger

Madhu: ok so now can I go

Rk: yes

Madhu: no wait

Rk: what happen

Madhu: if mukund say me to dance with him than how can I dance I don't know how to dance

Rk: wait I will teach you

Rk took madhu's hand and kept it on her shoulder and then he kept his hand on her waist and they both started slow dancing they both shared a rishbala eyelock

Mukund came and horned madhu and rk both came out of there trance and madhu hugged rk and said bye to him and went down

Rk: was standing near the window watching madhu she saw him and waved a bye to him...

Madhu sat in car and they both reached a restraunt and settled them selves on table

Mukund: wow madhu you are looking beautiful in this indian attire

Madhu: oh thank you rishu made me to wear this

Mukund: ok so lets order food

They ordered some food to eat

Mukund: ok so do you love cooking

Madhu: no but rishu cooks really nice...

Mukund: what do you like to eat more?

Madhu: chole bature that to which rishu cooks... Its very tasty i will make you to eat some time

Mukund thinking in his mind why she is always talking about rishabh

Mukund: leave it nice ring

Madhu: rishu gifted me

Like that all the way on date she was praising rk

Mukund: ok so lets dance

They both danced really well then sat on their places

Mukund: you dance really well

Madhu: really thank you rishu teached me

They both left from there mukund was driving car all the way in the car she was praising rk.. They both reached the madhu's chawl rk was standing there madhu went and hugged him they both talked for sometime mukund got jealous madhu just waved bye to mukund and went upstairs with rk

Next morning Rk was in his house thinking about madhu he thought to himself do i love madhu i think yes but i cant express my feelings to madhu... Coz she loves mukund and i cant be selfish and she deserves a guy better than me mukund is that guy...

Rk's father called him and told him to meet dipali but rk was not interested then he thought to stop thinking about madhu i should be with dipali...

Rk told about madhu to depali and make her meet madhu...

Depali was getting jealouse seeing both madhu and rk together so she thought of a plan to get rid of madhu...

Precap: depali's evil plan
Edited by sumaiya10 - 11 years ago

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