Kaisa Hai Pyaar - Rishbala (DISCONTINUE) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Nidhivd

Nice start...plz continue...

me too dont like sultan name😉Kabir is ok😊
n i dont think madhu loves kabir
plz...plz pm me


Thank u dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rishabalalove

nice start...
me also don't like sultan name...
do continue soon & pm me...


Thank u so much..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesum rim..
loved the story..
update soon and pm me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting start...loved it...waiting for next part & don't forget to pm me...btw I loved the name kabir...actually kabir in hum se hai life in channel v was one of my favourite character...so I really love this name kabir..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start rimi,
But i guess there is something that madhu hides to everytone, and she is not leaving RK for her love with kabir,may be kabir may be a good friend who helps madhu or he might be the reason for madhu leaving RK, this s just my guess, waiting for your version of the story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First welcome to the forum rimi
I'm Arsheen
Gud n interesting start
Cnt sn
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
nice start dear
and welcome to mb's land🤗
madhu is hidding something?????????
update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
I liked it. Madhu is trying to hide Sumthing.

Want to see Rishbala together.

Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Hello frnds.. Firstly I thanked to all who read my story.. Who likes my story n comments.. Your comments r so precious for me..
Now as I hv posted my next part on starting of year 2014.. So I want to WISH U ALL A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR..
Here's the next part..
Part 2
Rk opened his eyes.. Tears were rolled out frm his corner of eyes... Rk took Madhu's photo frm drawyer.. He touched her photo "Madhu it have been 5yrs we were separated.. Today I saw u.. I saw u after 5yrs.. Madhu I realized all were my fault.. I had always doubt on u.. Bt Madhu it doesnt mean tht I dnt love u.. Still I love u..And today when I saw u.. I want to hug u,want to touch u,want to say u how much I love u.. Bt in next moment I saw u with him.. How did u mov on in ur life.. How did u forget me so easily.." Another tear drop fall on photo glass.. He remembered the moments when they were together.. In next moment the words "I love Kabir" ringing in his ears n he got up frm bed n as usual took the whisky bottle n glass n sat on his couch n starts drinking...
Other side Madhu came in her house.. Without saying anything she walked towards her room.. Trishna also called her bt she didnt give her any response n came in her room n closed herself.. Trishna get worried for her sister n she also follow her n bang the door "Madhu what happen.. Open the door.." Bt Madhu didnt rply her back n crying very badly.. Trishna get so worried n continuously asking for open the door bt she didnt rply n crying a lot..
~Flashback~
Madhu n Trishna waiting for Kabir at outside of the mall.. "Didu where is Kabir?" Madhu asked her with so much irritation.. She looked here n there suddenly something caught her eyes.. A white mercedes came.. A handsome guy came out fm the car facing his back.. Seeing him Madhu's heartbeat ran so fast n only one name came in her mind "Rk!!" Otherside that guy turned n its RK - The Superstar.. Seeing him the peoples surround him.. Madhu's eyes filled with happy tears n a huge smile came on her face.. And unknowingly she walked towards him.. Otherside Rk somehow free himself n going to leave when he saw Madhu.. His eyes shot opened.. A smile came on his lips.. Both were lost in each other n walked towards each other...
Kabhi jo badal barse..
Mein dekhoon tujhe aankhein bharke..
Tu lage mujhe pehli baarish ki duaa..
Tere pehloo mein reh loon..
Mein khud ko pagal keh loon..
Tu gam de ya khushiyaan Seh loon saathiyaa..
Both were lost in each other.. Thinking abt the past moments when they were together.. Bt suddenly something caught her eyes.. She looked with narrow eyes towards the car.. She was shocked to see a girl came out frm Rk's car.. "Who is she? Why did Rk n tht girl together? Did Rk loves her? Is she's his wife?" The questions were running in Madhu's mind n she stood in mid way.. She looked at Rk n the girl again n again.. Her smile was vanished frm her lips.. And suddenly she turned back.. Seeing Madhu's behaviour Rk also stopped.. Tears rolled out frm Madhu's eyes.. The girl came n hold Rk's arm "Rk what happen.. We r getting late.. Lets go.." Madhu turned to see them.. Seeing them like this she thought Rk moved in his life n she didnt control her tears n left frm there.. And came in corner... Kabir came n patted on her shoulder "Madhu r u alright?" Madhu immediately wiped her tears n nodded yes.. "Lets go" Kabir said her softly n put his arm on her shoulder n left.. Seeing Rk was fuming in anger n he also left...
~Flashback End~
Thinking all this.. Madhu was crying so badly.. "Rk u moved on.. There is no place for me now" Madhu said this with shivering tone n crying badly.. Suddenly she heard another knock on door.. Madhu shouted "Please leave me alone.." "Maasi.." A sweet voice came near the door.. Madhu got up frm floor n mummered the name "Piya".. She immediately wiped her tears n opened the door.. There was a little girl stood in front of her wearing a Pink frock.. She looks so pretty.. Seeing Piya's face smile came on her lips again n she took her in her lap.. Piya wiped Madhu's tears with her tiny hands.. Maasi what happen?? Mumma scold u?? Why r u crying?" Piya asked her so sweetly.. Madhu kissed her nd nodded a no n smiled at her..
Now waiting for ur likes and comments..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yayyy first meee...
Well Happy New Year..
Too nice story..
So Madhu hiding something..
Piya.. I think she is Trishna's daughter..
Waiting for next..
Thnx for pm..

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