Kaisa Hai Pyaar - Rishbala (DISCONTINUE)

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HELLO FRNDS I AM NEW IN FORUM.. MYSELF RITIKA.. BUT U CAN CALL ME RIMI.. FIRST TIME I AM TRYING TO WRITE A STORY ON MY FAV COUPLE RISHBALA.. AS TODAY THEY GOT BEST JODI AWARD TOO.. 😊 SO HERE IS THE FIRST PART OF MY STORY...

Part 1


"Madhu why..Why did u do this with me..U n Kabir love ..How dare u Madhu!! How dare u to ditch me..U always told me that u love me..Is it ur love?? To ditch ur husband..To break his heart.." Rk shouted at the top of his voice..Madhu stood there silently..She didnt utter a word..Rk lost his all presence n held Madhu by her shoulder "Damn it speak out..Why did u do this..U broke my trust today Madhu.." Now Madhu look at Rk n broke her silence.. Madhu removed his hand with a jerk "TRUST.. Rk please dnt say about trust.. This word is nothing meant for u.. If u really used to trust me then these all r never happens.. And wht r u saying I m always said u tht I love u..Yes Rk I loved u.. Remember loved bt now I love Kabir.." She said the last sentence at the top of her voice.. Rk was stunned to hear this frm his biwi.. The whole family was shocked.. Madhu continued "Now he is meant a lot for me.. And Rk I ditched u then wht about u.. For ur kind information Mr.Rishabh Kundra u also ditched me.. U broke my heart into pieces.. First u acted as u love me n then said all were a part of ur revenge.. Revenge for that four slaps.. Ur ego is important than me Rk.. Bt Kabir is not like u.. He was with me in my bad times.. When u left me.. He helped me to came out frm the pain which u gave.. I found a good friend in him.. Bt when u saw us together u felt insecure.. U felt someone was taking ur favourite doll far away frm u so u forcibly took me here.. Bt Rk still I was trying to forgot my pain which u gave n trying to start a new fresh life with u bt u had always a doubt on me.. Bt I ignored all this n gave a chance to our relation..Then we got married bt still u had doubt me.. I want to share my pain with u bt u were not there Rk n I need a frnd tht time Rk..Which I found in him.. So I used to met with him n oneday an incident changed my life.. I came to know tht Kabir got shot by someone n tht day I realized how much I love him.. I love Ka.." Before Madhu completing her sentence Radhaji came n gave her a tight slap.. Rk broke down on his knees.. Tears were falling frm his eyes.. Madhu's eyes were also got wet bt she controlled herself.. "Shut up.. Just shut up Madhu!!! Whts wrong with u.. Wht r u saying.. Just look at Rishu.. Look at his condition.." Radhaji asked her with a concern for her son..Without seeing Rk Madhu replied her back "No maa.. Accept this.. This is the truth.. Now I dnt love ur son anymore.. And now he came to know about this so now I can leave this house.." Hearing those words frm Madhu Rk got up n held her hand into his hands n said with so much concern n pain "No Madhu.. U cant do this.. U cant leave me.. U still love me naa.." " No Rk.. Everything is finished between us..There is no more love, trust, hope.. Now I m nt urs anymore.. I love Kabir.." Madhu said this n hearing this repeatedly Rk was fuming in anger n turned back.. "I ll give u divorce papers very soon please sign the papers.." Madhu said this bt Rk didnt reply her n stood facing his back.. Finally Madhu turned to leave when Rk stopped her by calling her name "Madhu wait!!!" Madhu stopped n turned..Rk came near her n said "So u said everything is over..So tht mean frm now u dnt have to put all this.. Frm now u r free frm all the bonds.." First Madhu didnt understand n looked at him with a narrow eyes.. Rk took out his handkerchief n removed her sindoor frm her forehead.. Madhu was totally stunned.. She never expect this frm him.. Rk continued "Now this marraige is nthng meant for u..Then why did u put all the stuffs" Saying this he was going to remove her mangalsutra when Madhu stopped him by holding his hand.. Madhu said nervously "No Rk.. U cant do this.." Rk raised his eyes n gave her a question look.. Madhu continued "U r still my husband..And how can I forgot tht I loved u at a time..If I removed all this n if something will happen with u then..No Rk I cant do this..Now I will remove all this when u give me divorce.." Rk staring at her n trying to figure out wht was running in her mind..Bt Madhu didnt look at him n turned back n left frm Rk mansion...

SO THIS IS MY UPDATION.. BY THE WAY HERE KABIR IS SULTAN.. I DNT LIKE SULTAN NAME SO I USE THIS NAME... 😉 WELL THIS IS THE PAST INCIDENT IN THEIR LIFE.. NEXT PART WILL BE PRESENT..
NOW WAITING FOR UR COMMENTS AND LIKES...
FOR PM BUDDY ME PLEASE.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superbbb start Rimi...loved it...i loved dat track in show also...looking forward 4 ur point of view on dat track..i like it instead of sultan name u use kabir name ...plZzz CoNtiNuE SoOn...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well first welcome to this forum Rimi..
Nice start..
Why did Madhu leave Rk.. Is she really love Kabir..
So many questions r running in my mind..
Cont soon dear..
Thnx for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: karamjeet

Superbbb start Rimi...loved it...i loved dat track in show also...looking forward 4 ur point of view on dat track..i like it instead of sultan name u use kabir name ...plZzz CoNtiNuE SoOn...


Thank u frnd.. Surely will post very soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rk.madhu

Well first welcome to this forum Rimi..
Nice start..
Why did Madhu leave Rk.. Is she really love Kabir..
So many questions r running in my mind..
Cont soon dear..
Thnx for pm..


Thank u so much.. Many more r here to reveal.. Keep reading dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start Rimi!pls continue soon!& pls can u send me a friend request?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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INTERESTING UPDATE RIMI...
BUT I DON'T WANT IT TO GO LIKE THAT TRACK..
CONTINUE DEAR..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start...plz continue...
me too dont like sultan name 😉 Kabir is ok 😊
n i dont think madhu loves kabir
plz...plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start...
me also don't like sultan name...
do continue soon & pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kg15

INTERESTING UPDATE RIMI...
BUT I DON'T WANT IT TO GO LIKE THAT TRACK..
CONTINUE DEAR..


Thank u.. Dnt worry its different story not same as serial story..

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