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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#681

what an intense update

so the dreams and nightmares which have been plagging rudra all his life have an answer

he was rk in the past birth and now has to find his biwi who is waiting for him

and if he alive, then she will be alive too

rishaan promised to help maya remain the same - but she has to change from maya to madhu

rudra wanted to know if maya was his madhu and he got his answer

but i want to know how

loved the dance, the song and their silent communication

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#682

A long awaited update lol...loved it yaar !! Worth the wait hehe !!

Wow..loved how it opened with Madhu's suicidal attempt from jumping off from the terrace to prove her love with RK-rudra's persistent fear of losing Madhu-maya 😆😆 !!

Rishaan gives me different kind of vibes..it's like watching a diabolical person in action and yet at the same time bipolar when he cares about Rudra !! Me totally conphoosed 😆 !!

Ah finally !! Rudra maya get to spend sometime yippee !!

Totally apt lyrics and song !! Loved their moves, more so for Rudr's intense anecdotes with every move...but still am not convinced how did Rudra realize that maya is his Madhu ?? Am quite intrigued with this revelation now 😉 !!

Please continue soon Maria...intriguing cliffhanger lol !!

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Subhra

@TuMeri

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#683

Awesome update
finally rudra knows his past
seeing ur update after ages
keep updating

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prarthna

@Prarthna.B

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#684

Superb Story, please update soon , can't wait for the next part .

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#685

rudra was remembering the scene on the terrace after the unwedding

the one just after the mar jawan dance sequence

good now that he is getting clear visions

he finally saw the face clearly

and he woke up in a figurative sense

till now he was in darkness

now there is light all around him

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#686

loved the brothers conversation

rishaan wants answers now

i loved that rudra has understood that madhu is the core of his existence

i am getting a strange feeling now

that very soon there will be a rift between the brothers

rudra is trying to hide the truth from rishaan

i feel even rishan did not believe him fully

i mean i felt that rudra was hiding something

i may be wrong too

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#687

so now maya is also changed she is different

had she called rishaan to come to meet her ?

even rishan understood that she has changed some how

the question she asked rishaan was so strange

she asked him about this promise that he will not let him change to some one else

rishaan is not liking the changed maya... this is so good

now she wants to know why he made her that promise

rishaan refused to tell her that is also strange

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#688

rudra in introspecting now

he wants to know his real self

it is said that a mirror shows u the truth

so may be he is standing b4 a mirror to know the truth ?

now she wanted to know the real maya

also he wanted to be sure if she was his madhu

i did not understand why does he feel that he has been living his brothers life

i mean maya was not the life of rishaan

now he wants to find out the truth

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#689

rishaan is now giving intsructions to meera for the party

seems rishaan is very much irritated right now

meera is really concerned for his health

so she made a futile attempt to make him see reason

but as usual he just shushed her

she called rishaan a jerk and he heard it

now rishaan is almost ready for the party

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#690

rudra came to the party and started searching for maya

i loved that his heart skipped a beat when he saw her enter

i love that he recognised that it was his madhu

so now rudra wants to play a game with her

i feel this game is a combination of truth and dare and 20 questions

only the dare part is not there is the game

i can feel that maya is very irritated and frustrated now

she wants to get out of all this mess

so he is trying to gt the truth out of maya with his questions

i must say that this was a real good attempt

how easily rudra understood that maya was lying

when she said that she did not have any dreams

i wonder how he understood that

now he wants to dance with her

now maya is slowly getting affected

she looked into his deep eyes

i loved the questions rudra asked

she was started getting hypnotized she was loosing the control

rudra is shocked now to realize that she is indeed his madhu

i loved this part the best

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