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Maria

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Posted: 11 years ago

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LostTraveller

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Posted: 11 years ago

#662

The Fourteenth chappie is finally here 😎🥳
After such a long wait 😃...and my Alpha really proved ke sabar ka fruit extra sweet hota hai
Love u for this wonderful fantastic update sistar 🤗

Okay so Rudra has finally remembered his past life...the real RK is back 😃...wonderful description of his pain and stress and dilemma !!!
He wants the best for his brother but when it comes to his Biwi...nothing else seems to matter.😳

Rishaan showed us another shade...he too loves his brother but he carries some grave issues in his mind which are constantly agonizing him...waiting to find out what😲

Aww...so Rishaan in his own gruff way assures Maya that he will help her to keep her real self and not lose it anyway.😛

And finally we come to the main scene...loved it a LOT !!!😃
Rudra's dexperation for answers, Maya's sarcastic way of avoidance...and then Rudra's intensity and Maya's heart responding to those heartfelt questions 😳

The song lyrics were really appropriate,,,,,gr8 job!!!⭐️
And I LOVED the dance sequence with the convo...what a convo...what intense questions...I had shivers in my body when i read them...LOVED IT ALL👏

And Maya is compelled to answer...oh...an almost kiss...dratts Maya and her denial mechanism !!😡

But not to fear...RK ne apni Biwi ko pehchaan hi liya hai😃 ...ab ayega mazza...so what happens next...stay tuned for the next chappie...😎

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Shreya

@Secret_Giggle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#663

Awesome update

Finally RK found his Madhu

When will Madhu find her RK?

Edited by SHINYSHREYA - 11 years ago

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Just

@Obscurity

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Posted: 11 years ago

#664

Well just wanna say wow! Your updates are mesmerising and magical!

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vimala jersha

@christobelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#665

superb update

finally rudra found his madhu

waiting for their relation to develop

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taraka2005

@taraka2005

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Posted: 11 years ago

#666

Awsm update Maria ⭐️

loved the dance sequence 😃

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

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Posted: 11 years ago

#667

i think i was longing for this update...rudr,...sry,rk to recongnise his madhu😊...and finally he did...thank u so much for this wonderful update maria🤗

i really liked this two egostic brothers😆...never show that they care for each other😆

so even after realising who he is,rudra is not gonna tell rishan that he is rk,right??😕how complicated is this?😆...poor rudra is in dilemmma😆

wow at last the party time😃...it was super👏...i just enjoyed the way he found his madhu😊...but y madhu always pull herself into a shell😒...i think they havn't kissed,right?if they had i'm damn sure she would hav melt at that moment and said his name "rishabh"😊

now waiting to know the change in rudra that the new discovery-madhu,will bring??...oh i forgot about rishan...he must be shocked to see rudra and maya dancing...but somewhere i feel he knows rudra and maya hav 'something' in b/w them

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#668

awesome update...finally Rudra knows that he is RK & not only this but also he figured it out that maya is his biwi...😳...I don't know why I feel that Rishaan knows that Rudra & maya have something for each other ...waiting for his reaction to this almost kiss...😃

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mimibm

@mimibm

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Just like our darling VD, you are back with a bang in this FF 👏👏

Now the plot has thickened more with Rudra's realization...and I am sure it would not take much time before Maya realizes the same...and as I am contemplating Rishaan would not take all this lightly...

So that means a war...Rudra vs Rishaan...and the most unique part in it is that they both bear the same face of the world's most good looking guy 😳