RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added)

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Shreya

@Secret_Giggle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Amazing start.

Loved the beginning and RK's promise that he will find her.

Plz pm me whenever you update next part.

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bokul

@bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

wow maria this is awesome

its just mind blowing superb brilliant

one question as a doubt please ?

will u give the story in flashback ?

or can we expect some form of reincarnation ?

i will love either

but i will prefer a happy ending though

please pm me

i am looking forward to this story eagerly

good work ankita too

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cool_sri

@cool_sri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

awesome prologue..loved it...👏

continue soon...😊

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: arshisfan
👏

Hats off girls the introduction and the prologue both are wonderfully written

I loved rishbala's emotions, it's amazing how you came to depict them just the way they are. Actually I like love stories which end this way, not because I'm a sadist but because they are impactful and they always leave an etched mark, most famous love stories had a tragic ending but as you said death is just the beginning...

Najat. Thank you so much for your comment. And no, I won't call you a sadist, I know what you mean. 😳😆

Originally posted by: Hiddlestoned
Res, I'm excited!
Okay, the first paragraph just pulled me in. That was amazing. Omg what's happening...I'm liking this!
Aw his smirk. 😳
OMG their dialogues are totally them! Especially RK!!
No...no...is one of them going to die? Both of them?!
"It was a promise, made by two hearts as they faced the end of their life together."
Omg...that just gave me goosebumps. A shiver went down my spine. I'm not even kidding. It's rare for writing to have such an effect on me. The only other person's writing that has done that to me on the forum is Jassu (DonnaHarvey).
"Their names were foerever etched on the pages of Bollywood as a most cherished couple who remained entwined in death, just as they had been in life."
Omg...this is fantastic.
"Time has moved on since then and so have the people. Yet...if one visits the charred remains of what was once a celebrated movie studio, one can still feel the tingles of a loving promise hanging in the air.

Death is after all, just the beginning..."

Ah! More goosebumps! Tears in my eyes almost.

I think it has to do with rebirth! Especially after reading the Japanese myth. Loved the reference there.
This...is such an impacting prologue. Definitely pulled me in. I want to read more. Like now. I wish it were a book so I could just flip the page and keep reading.
You know, the writing is amazing. I mean, your way of describing things makes it easy to visualize! I'm so glad you started this. This makes me want to stop writing because my writing is NOTHING compared to this masterpiece!
Amazing job Maria and Anki! <3
This is now, officially, my favourite FF on the forum and I've only read the prologue. Please PM me in the future when you update!

Okay, that's a huge compliment because I am a fan of your FFs. Thank you so much Pritt.

And sorry, but no spoilers. 😆

Sure, I will keep you updated. 😳

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: river123
Awesome start - can't wait for the rest!

Thank Meenu. I am so glad that you're reading this FF since I love your reviews in EDT. 😳

Originally posted by: RSP04
Awesome Maria..👏👏 Cant wait for your next FF...Thnaksss

Thank you, Reena. 😳

Will keep you posted.

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

i was only thinking of om shanti om plot 😆

i got the hint 😎

tu mujhe badnaam kyu kar rahi hai ? 🤔 🤣

Lol. The prologue is somewhat like that. I won't lie the idea rooted from the OSO plot.. but there is a lot more.. and it is definitely nothing like OSO.

And no badnaaam nahin kar rahi.. I know you're just as twisted as me so you will definitely be interested in my brainchild. 😆

Plus, I know you have got my back. 😳

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: dvs_smiRK
A sublime piece of creative writing, the whole death concept supported by the mythology of lovers bound to one another, your use of emotive diction, the intricate ways you composed their last moments; creating intense imagery of the setting and their actions, yet slow motion surreal feel of their last encounter. So many questions in my head and I'm so looking forward to the answers you provide through this novel. Splendid beginning 👏

Thank you so much for your beautiful comment.

I hope you will enjoy reading the FF just as much Anki and I are enjoying obsessing over it.

Originally posted by: MarathiMulgi
One short sleepe past, wee wake eternally,
And Death shall be no more, death thou shalt die

-John Donne

A promising beginning to what I am sure is gonna be a beautiful heart-wrenching creative writing. Can't wait. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you so much MM. Your comment made me feel elated. 😳