RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 3

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

what a brilliant beginning anki n maria 👏 👏 👏 👏
Thanks Hiyu 😳

and yes i did want RM to die in the fire that day...last week 😲 now dont call me sadistic..i'll call u the same 😈 😆

I wanted the same 😈

i love the way you described rishab and madhu's postures and feelings...

waiting to read more...

i'm a little clueless if the story will be a flashback of your own rishbala scenes imageries or will it be a re-incarnation story of the two
Nope...no spoilers for you...sorry 😛

keep it coming 👏

i'm loving it 😊

all the best! cheers 😳

Originally posted by: arshisfan

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Hats off grils the introduction and the prologue both are wonderfully written

I loved rishbala's emotions, it's amazing how you came to depict them just the way they are. Actually I like love stories which end this way, not because I'm a sadist but because they are impactful and they always leave an etched mark, most famous love stories had a tragic ending but as you said death is just the beginning...

Originally posted by: Hiddlestoned

Res, I'm excited!

Okay, the first paragraph just pulled me in. That was amazing. Omg what's happening...I'm liking this!

Aw his smirk. 😳

OMG their dialogues are totally them! Especially RK!!

No...no...is one of them going to die? Both of them?!

"It was a promise, made by two hearts as they faced the end of their life together."

Omg...that just gave me goosebumps. A shiver went down my spine. I'm not even kidding. It's rare for writing to have such an effect on me. The only other person's writing that has done that to me on the forum is Jassu (DonnaHarvey).

"Their names were foerever etched on the pages of Bollywood as a most cherished couple who remained entwined in death, just as they had been in life."

Omg...this is fantastic.

"Time has moved on since then and so have the people. Yet...if one visits the charred remains of what was once a celebrated movie studio, one can still feel the tingles of a loving promise hanging in the air.

Death is after all, just the beginning..."

Ah! More goosebumps! Tears in my eyes almost.

I think it has to do with rebirth! Especially after reading the Japanese myth. Loved the reference there.

This...is such an impacting prologue. Definitely pulled me in. I want to read more. Like now. I wish it were a book so I could just flip the page and keep reading.

You know, the writing is amazing. I mean, your way of describing things makes it easy to visualize! I'm so glad you started this. This makes me want to stop writing because my writing is NOTHING compared to this masterpiece!

Amazing job Maria and Anki! <3

This is now, officially, my favourite FF on the forum and I've only read the prologue. Please PM me in the future when you update!

Originally posted by: tulipstar

What shd I say 🤔...it's awsm 😆 N m loving it...😳

Manki (Maria n Anki) rocks ⭐️ 🤣

Keep up the good work 👏

Originally posted by: -Evil-Defiance-

Thanks Tru 😳
Manki? 😲...🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: tulipstar

Yes Manki 🤣 🤣