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luvera

@luvera

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Syed695
Loved it Luvera..Very EMotional..I was tears while reading...These issues were we shut out but it exists..though they r wrong yet they arn't...Loved it!!! Speechless !

Hatred... Hurt... Needs an outlet... If held in for too long it breaks out in the worst ways..

Thumbs up for therapy!!

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-Nuts-

@-Nuts-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Omg! What was that? Mindboggling update! So Rishab and Madhu on the kill literally.😲 Poor kid. Felt bad for her though. Dude! You have turned into one thriller woman. Bring it on. I'm loving it 👏

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

TOO MUCH BLOOD AND GORE

ONE NEEDS A STRONG CONSTITUTION TO READ THIS

AND MADHU AND RISHAB DOING IT MAKES ME CRY

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Luvu...Am speeclesss!!!!!!!!...
I felt am reading sum thriller... killer...suspense...novel...
one part were detectives..r trying to join dotss..of d real motive of tripple murder.
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nd here Madhu nd Rishabh. ..are...d one..whose killn.

Felt bad for girl..nd more for dat Rishbala..s behind dis crime...
splendid nd Marvelous. .job...
HATS OF TO U...
CONT SOONN...
P.S. I WAS SO HAPPY AT D MENTION OF ADAM... 🤣

cont soon luvu...
a complete roller coaster updt...

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didlr

@didlr

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

sry fr being late as usual...

k when i started with chap 4 i almost cracked up after reading adam= detective...but as the story went on, i was in complete shock...very well written and by far tgis was the best i've read frm u:) the way u wrote the entire thing with so much of precision...I'm in love with this story...waiting fr the nxt part

But i just hope we dnt have a sad ending(with rishabala being involved)

thanks fr pm:)

Edited by didlr - 11 years ago

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didlr

@didlr

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

ps- now i understand the importance of the title: LIBERATION...

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luvera

@luvera

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: -Nuts-
Omg! What was that? Mindboggling update! So Rishab and Madhu on the kill literally.😲 Poor kid. Felt bad for her though. Dude! You have turned into one thriller woman. Bring it on. I'm loving it 👏

Thankyou!!! (me says taking a bow)

Well I got a taste for suspense thrillers when I dabbled a little in the Promise and wanted to go the extra mile and dedicate a story to that genre... I have come across different genres on IF but don't think I have ever read a suspense thriller sort of thing... add a little blood and gore and you have your regular horror story..

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luvera

@luvera

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: punam2712
TOO MUCH BLOOD AND GORE
ONE NEEDS A STRONG CONSTITUTION TO READ THIS
AND MADHU AND RISHAB DOING IT MAKES ME CRY

Yes... you need a strong constitution to read and an even stronger constitution to write..

Because my process of writing is visualising it and putting myself in the same room and then describing it in the form of a story..

These two updates took me a week and a half to write..

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luvera

@luvera

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Desire6
Luvu...Am speeclesss!!!!!!!!...
I felt am reading sum thriller... killer...suspense...novel...
one part were detectives..r trying to join dotss..of d real motive of tripple murder.
.
nd here Madhu nd Rishabh. ..are...d one..whose killn.

I am glad it is exciting your reading buds!!! If I was just testing waters when it came to the Promise... Here I am full on submerged into the thriller/horror/ suspense...

Felt bad for girl..nd more for dat Rishbala..s behind dis crime...
splendid nd Marvelous. .job...
HATS OF TO U...

Thankyou!!!! Usually I just go with the flow and the story kinda just writes itself... but these updates took me a week and a half to write because it has blood and gore which would leave me affected and I had to leave the story and do something else and come back to it the next day..

CONT SOONN...
P.S. I WAS SO HAPPY AT D MENTION OF ADAM... 🤣

Adam has different characteristics here though... I needed to introduce new names for the characters and didn't really wanna think of new names so just decided to pool them from the existing list of names...

cont soon luvu...
a complete roller coaster updt...