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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: madz13
Awesome

Thanks a lot dear!!! 😃😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Chaapa93
Aww such a heart touching OS

Thank you so much dear !!! 😳😳

I am glad that it touched your heart..!!! 😃😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Prarthna.B
very emotional OS :)

Thanks a lot dear !!! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: susan7
awesome

Thank you susan..!!! 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: .Shree.
Lovely OS ❤️
It was beautifully written 😳

I am so happy that you loved it dear...!! Thanks for your appreciation !!! 😳😳🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri
this is a very pleasant surprise😃 off to read now

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri
kavya... that was just awesome.
the way you started the os with the cute momy-daughter convo and ended on an emotional note. its just beautiful.👏👏

when i read i hate tears ... all i could remember was the verry famous dialogue ..." i hate tears pushpa"😆

loved it. and do write more.

Thank you so much Tanuja... 🤗🤗

I am glad that you liked it a lot...😳😳

Yeah... mere dimag mein bhi yahi dialogue aa raha tha... 😆😆

Thanks dear..!! 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: mimibm
Love you Kavya...this comment is before reading the OS...I will write another one after reading it...in 5 min...great going dear...

Originally posted by: mimibm
This was a very emotional OS Kavya...You write very well...you captured the pain and hollowness in Madhu's life perfectly...please write more...but no more sad-sad story...happy- sad or happy-happy chahiye...

First of all... Love you MIMI... more than you... 🤗🤗🤗

I may write well but not as you dear... You are blessed with this skill... 👏👏

Thank you so much mimi for liking it... I had been writing since my school times and that too emotional... Bachpan ki aadat hai...😆😆

Yes, the next one will be a happy one... for sure..!!! 😃😃

Thanks once again...😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: rk.madhu
U know wht dear u makes me cry.. My eyes get wet when I read the Os..
Its simply outstanding..
Wen I read the part I knew it something happened with Rk ..
Nd when u start flashback moment tears rolled out frm my eyes..
The way Madhu feels Rk simply mindblowing.. 😊
Simple bt really heart touching OS..
Well done..
Thanx for this PM..

Thank you so much dear !!! 🤗

Aww. it made you cry... then I feel I am successful in portraying what I have decided... 😃😃

YOu know what, when I was writing it, even I got emotional too..😊😊

And the last part, when Madhu feels RK near her, is my favourite one...

Thanks for the appreciation dear... 🤗🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: uma88
Hey kaviya, welcome to the world of writing, am happy for you.. It was you first os and it may seem simple but writing an os this much clear is very tedious for beggines, i bet no one would gave any doubt reg any happenings in the story, it was as clear as crystal.. And about the story loved the dream where you have beautifully portrayed it.. Loved all parts, our little maya was also so understanding it seems.. But the best was the dream for me

Heeyyy Uma... Thank you so much dear !!! 🤗

Well ,its not the first time I am writing. I have been in this world since my school days but stopped it when I was in college... 😊

Yeah... it was quite long to write but you know what, I loved while writing it...

I am glad that you found it perfect..!!! 😳😳

I have mentioned two dreams here in the OS, which one you are talking about??

I love the last one... that of Madhu... even I got very emotional while writing it... 😳

I am glad that you loved it... Thank you so much dear!! Love you !!! 🤗🤗