RiMa OS- MY HEART WILL GO ON...

Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Hey kaviya, welcome to the world of writing, am happy for you.. It was you first os and it may seem simple but writing an os this much clear is very tedious for beggines, i bet no one would gave any doubt reg any happenings in the story, it was as clear as crystal.. And about the story loved the dream where you have beautifully portrayed it.. Loved all parts, our little maya was also so understanding it seems.. But the best was the dream for me

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rekha

@rekha.366

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

ovely os kavya ,👍🏼very emotional ,rula dhiya 😭,but tumne meri rk maardhiya , murderer😆 ,like rishbaa moments ,nice writing dear ,keep writing.

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kia karoge jaan kar

@JsparrowJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

di...

i thought its end of 1st part

but when i read it again

is that is

THE END

NO..

continue it na

pls...

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

It's beautiful..I was expecting RK from the beginning never realised that he is no more until I reached the flashback.. It was lil sad but very nice. Great for first attempt !!

You should keep writing 😃

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kg15

@kg15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

THANKS TO ALL THOSE WHO APPRECIATED MY OS...

I'M GETTING LATE SO I'LL REPLY TO ALL THE COMMENTS INDIVIDUALLY LATER...

THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN...

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kg15

@kg15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: meenji22
very nice os

Thanks dear !!! 😳

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kg15

@kg15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: nandinidavid96
Lovely OS

Thank you dear !!! 😃😳

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DVDfann

@DVDfann

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

very touching OS 😭 I like it

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kg15

@kg15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: rima4ever
ita a very good touching heart wrenching os
but sad as rk has died i feel so bad

Thank you so much Rima... 😳😳

I had planned to kill RK...😉😉

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kg15

@kg15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: JsparrowJ
areey
waaah didu you started writing too
i m excited to read that

start for begining
wonderfull the way u explained dream
next
wonderfull way you introduced madhu
another
wow
introduction of bittuji
but mai soch ri r.k. would be somewhere far
but he dead
arrey ye kya hua

anyways waiting for next

ahh i forgotten
loved RM moments

Originally posted by: JsparrowJ
di...
i thought its end of 1st part
but when i read it again
is that is
THE END
NO..
continue it na
pls...