Rishbala FF- A Twist Of Fate -Chp.15/Pg127-[05/10]

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#351

MUKUND LOVES MADHU AND COULDNT BEAR TO SEE HER IN ANOTHER MAN'S ARMS

AND HIS BOSS PRESENTED HIM A GOLDEN OPPURTUNITY TO VISIT INDIA

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#352

Nice update though no rishabala in it.

Hope Mukund's feelings n reaction play as catalyst for rishbala story.

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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#353

So mukund gonna be villain, and more jealous tracks on the way.

loved itblubs, thanks for the pm.

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kg15

@kg15

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#354

Part 12- Firstly, a big wala Sorry from my side that I am replying so so late to your updates!!! Loads of PM in my bucket and I, poor soul, have to check each and every one and comment!! Hushhh!! So tiring!!!

But well...well... What was that yaar??? Such a romantic update!! Goshhh!!! Lubu, I am again repeating, I have become a huugggeee fan of your writing and this story is my favorite!!! You write so lively Sissy!!! Each and every frame of this part is my favorite now!!! I could easily imagine Rishbala enacting it... The long drive, RK's smirks, their casual talks and wooaaa... That kiss!!! That was so romantic!! Now I am even more excited to read further!!!

Well, I have completely lost my pace so I don't think I would get my place again any sooner!!! I want you to maintain this fast forward speed in updating but do take care of yourself first Sis!!!

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kg15

@kg15

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#355

Part 13- Eid Mubarak Lubu!!!

Hmmm... So you sent Rishbala on a holiday in this update.. Hunn!! Not a single trace of them except those news feed pictures which I couldn't see but just imagine...😆 But it's OK... Else I must have become diabetic with so much mushy mushy Rishbala romance!!! And for a change, I LOVED Mukku ji!!! Negative shade suits him!!! 😆 "Madhu sirf Meri hai... Sirf Meri!!! Agar wo Meri nahi hui to Kisi Ki nahi hogi... Uss RK Ki bhi nahi!!!" Lubu please give him such kind of Tadakte Bhadakte Psycho Dialogues!!! I like psycho villains a lot!! 😆

Hmmm... So, full Mukku gang is coming to India and Mr Kundra already has some not- so- good feelings for him and Madhu Ma'am considers both as her besties!!! So all in all, some roller coaster Jealousy Ride is going to start... I am all in to join it Sissy!!! Bring it on!!!