Rishbala SS: Lemons & Lemonade Part 5 & Epilogue on Page 26 (0 - Page 9

Originally posted by: saakhi01

Awesome update lazy thank you so much hun bt MU scared me a bit bt then our rk wont give up easily what belongs to him 😆
So watch it madhu, our rk is coming 😆 yeah he is going to fight for her and Madhu is not going to stand a chance😉

Originally posted by: Rkmadhuawsome

Amazing update update

thanx hun😊

Originally posted by: mansiahmed

6 years ago I didn't respect your love and that is why I am going to give you 6 days to stop being silly, and forgive me and come back to me." Hearing his arrogance she turns around angrily at him, "Or what will you do?""On the 7^th day, I will be coming for you, Madhubala."

I superlike this dialogue thank you so much hun😊,they have become one n rishabh surely realised love n really in love with her yes... he loves her like crazy and gonna get her😉.Mukku why did u open ur big mouth 😡 they had to clear that up before they settled down😳.rishabh really did bad by mocking her love in past but madhu pls forgive him he is such naughty hotty.loved it. hahahaha yeah he is a naughty hotie.. and she shud just move on😃

Originally posted by: uma88

Nyce update, waiting for the next update!!!

thanx hun... will try to update it soon😊

Originally posted by: PristineSoul

I love this update. Cute n Romantic so glad u love the update hun... But a lil sad with what happened between them yes it was sad and bad, but now she has to move on and realize tht he is not the same guy😃... I loved His Challenge i hope you will continue to like the remaining story too😃.. waiting eagerly for the next will try to update it soon😊.

Originally posted by: smdosi

Lovely update thanx hun😊...I want Rk to suffer just like Madhu suffered when Madhu suffers, RK suffers the most hun.,, i have never explained his feelings like i did with Madhu.. his feelings are gonna come across in the next two parts😊...maybe madhu can get a friend over there who would help her...or maybe she agrees for her marriage with a guy sorry hun there is not going to be a love triangle... RK's biggest hurdle is Madhu herself..

Originally posted by: pantil

Romantic and emotial update...yr pls jaldi update krna wait nhi hota pls and thanx for pm

thank you so much hun... will try to update it soon and no probs😊😊

Originally posted by: flowing_river

I want madhu to be strong... Madhu is going to be strong and thick headed😉
madhu has waited enough. ..now its rk's turn..thoda to tadapana chahie... he already waited for her 6 years, though he himself didn't realize it😉😆😆😆
now it's his turn to impress madhu... 😉 she is already impressed by him... he just have to remind her tht😉😆😆😆😆

Originally posted by: karamjeet

Awesome update...Can't wait 4 next part...plzzz post soon...

thank you so much hun... will try to update it soon😊

Originally posted by: mimibm

Lovely Lazy...this was way beyond my expectation and imagination awww thank you so much hun😳😃😃😃...the fervent rounds of love making, Madhu's little doubts about the situation and getting them clarified by RK and finally the uncalled for revelation of the humiliating past which jolts Madhu out of this romantic trance...you are a genius Lazy omg! tht is so sweet of you... thank you so much😊...plz plz pleeez do not make us wait longer for the next update... will try to update it soon hun😊

Originally posted by: christobelle

nice updatethank you so much hun😊

waiting for the next will try to update it soon😊

pm me when u update will sure do hun

hope rishbala patch up soon they will hun.. it's just two more parts to this story😃

Originally posted by: SimranDsena01

This was just mindblowing!!
I don't have words to express how m feeling after reading it!
update it soon sweety..m dying to read more!

thank you so so much hun... it is so sweet of you to say such kind words... will try to update it soon😊😊😊😊

Originally posted by: revti21

Superb update...m sure she is nt goin to come bck aftr 6 days...nd rk has to win her...

thanx hun... yes he has to win her back😃

Originally posted by: jatre

awesome update.plz continue soon.

thank you hun.. will try to update it soon😊😊

Originally posted by: anjali0111

wow superb update thank you so much hun😊

it was very cruel of rk n his friends to make fun of her like that...but as rk said they were also young n stupid that time. ah! it happens you know...if we see around we can find lots of example like that. i still remember there was one girl in school she was little bit different from others and everyone used to make fun of her...i always felt bad for her...sometimes people can be so oblivious about others' feeling that they end up hurting them just for fun...its really cruel.
you are absolutely right... i have seen this umpteen number of times... this is how people in school and the early college students do... they make fun of the people that loves them, it's all a joke to them at that age

here rk atleast realised his mistakes...i think madhu is hurt so it will take some time for her to understand the situation...i hope rk will manage to win her heart this time too. he regrets his past actions, and Madhu will have to accept him with his past mistakes... 😃

Originally posted by: priya_shukla145

yoyo!!! amazin...

thank you so much hun😃

this is lovely story...waiting fr next part

Originally posted by: Dia_12

gosh i just love it, keep writing more

thank you so much hun... 😃😃😃😃

Originally posted by: punam2712

THE PAST ALWAYS COMES BACK

RK AND HIS FRIENDS MADE FUN OF MADHU AND HER LOVE FOR RK

BUT MUKUNDS WORDS HAVE COME BACK TO HAUNT HIM
yes and they had to deal with it someday... better earlier than later

RK KNOWS THAT HE WAS WRONG TO RIDICULE HER LOVE AND WANTS ANOTHER CHANCE

BUT SHE IS TOO HEART BROKEN yes... he will have to convince her tht he has changed from an insensitive teenager to a mature man

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

oh lazy it was so amazing..really. thank you so much hun😊😊

the turmoil of madhu of having been rejected once by rk has not left her heart. all through the while she was contemplating on their relationship status. she is going to be a little insecure till she truly realizes tht he loves her😛

the whole update was like a tumultuous waves of emotions which came crashing on to my heart one after the other...the fervent love making, the contemplating mind, the heart broken state, the wistful lover.

i felt my heart go with the flow of the words...

it was fabulous 👏 thank you so so much hun... so glad u cud relate to them... hope you will like the next part too😊

please and pretty please dont make me wait long for your next update. will try to update it soon😊

Originally posted by: AliciaZA

Excellent story so far. Am really enjoying it:-).thank you so much hun... so glad u r enjoying it😊 RK at the end was so decisive. Im glad he told her, he'd have chosen her if he could do it again. yes... he has been regretting his decision for 6 years, and it is time she realizes that, Cant wait to read mukunds expression when he meets the beautiful madhu ahaan:-).LOL i don't know whether they wud be meeting😳😆 And really cant wait to read what RKs going to do in 7 days lol hope you will like what i have planned😊

Originally posted by: janu_2006

gr8 parts..

cont,soon

thanks for pm dear..

thanx janu... will try to update it soon... no probs hun😃

Originally posted by: bria

it was awesome...

thank you so much hun😊😊

Originally posted by: nshahtalati

Wow wow I am big fan of your writing. thank you so much hun😃😃😃Really really good concept. Egarly waiting for your next update about what rk will do and madhu's reaction after that. will give you a clue, RK is going to be insistent and she is going to be pissed😉 Sorry for not able to comment on first part, no probs hun... glad u commented now😃 I just read both part together and just loved it thank you so so much hun... and thanx for commenting😃😃.

Originally posted by: 4ever4love

Amazing. Fantastic. Wonderful.

You are a very creative and gifted writer! I had to say that first. THANK YOU SO SO MUCH HUN🤗

I was so looking forward to the second chapter and you did NOT disappoint at all! IN fact I got MORE than i expected. omg! tht is so sweet of you... i hope i won't disappoint you with my next update😛

You took the time to explain Madhu's feelings and her confusion and why she was feeling this way. You had RK express his feelings in a perfectly timed manner, a little there and then a little here. RK's feelings are going to be more explored in the next two parts, but Madhu being stung once, is going to have a hard time accepting it😛

Everything was going so well and then - the phone call. hehehe

I want to be mad at RK but I can't. We all do stupid things when we are young and guys tend to be clueless about such emotional things. But he knows now, in fact he has known even before Madhu came back. RK said that he would think of Madhu through the years. yes... many missed tht... he has been more affected by her than she has ever been affected by him... he regrets his insensitivity towards her and wantss to have a good future with her.. but she is going to be stubborn now.

RK realized his mistakes a long time ago so I cannot hate him. yes he did... ever since his marriage broke and he started realizing Madhu's love for him, he has been regretting his past actions

But I cannot be mad at Madhu either. Being a girl, I completely understand her feelings. She feels humiliated. The boy she loved made fun of her? That hurts really bad!!! yes... she is hurt bad and is not thinking straight and ignoring the fact that he has changed and he cared for her now.

Whew, I wrote a lot but then your story deserves long comments!!! i love reading long comments specially yours😳😳

by the way, I LOVED RK's last line!!!! ❤️ hope you will like him in the next part 😃

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

awesome update...I just loved it...plz continue soon & don't make me wait dear...😊

thank you so much hun.. will try to update it soon😃

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Feel sad for Madhu. I can understand her feelings. But that was past naa? RK changed for gud but still he deserves some pain 😈

yes what happened to her was sad... but she is not realizing tht he has changed for the better and his suffers the most when she suffers😳

Originally posted by: DVDfann

Awesomee update.. i loved this shot.. so romantic ☺️

thank you so much hun.. so glad u found it romantic😃

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

awesome update! thank you so much hun😃thanks for pm no probs hun😃!please update the next part very soon & pm me! will sure do😃n ya where is the update of something wonderful?hun?yaar please update it soon & pm me!i'm dying to read it!i should get the update by tomorrow n i hope i made it clear!hun! LOL i will have it up tomorrow... got side tracked with lemons update hun😳😳😳😳😳

Originally posted by: Marie_789

Wow excellent update.

PL can you PM me when you update.

thank you so much hun... will sure pm you😃

Originally posted by: pantil

Yr pls update kro waiting

will update soon😛

Originally posted by: flora212

this is lovely story...waiting fr next part

thanks hun.. will update soon😊

Originally posted by: punam2712

WAITING

done😊

Wow what a awesome update.Loved it.RK was full is mano Madhu mood by hook or crook.

Thanx for PM
PM me when you update.

Omg, RK was HILARIOUS!! I was giggling non stop reading his crazy antics and the battle of wills going on. Im not mad at him at all. I admire his persistence in not giving up, his determination and his ingenuity:-). The part where he tells her hes happy he didnt accept her love 6 years ago because he appreciates it more now, was just beautiful. I died laughing at the end. Telling her father she might be pregnant was brilliant. If Mallik doesnt kill him first, he'll definitely get them married hehe. Loved the update

Love D Update Dear!!