Rishbala SS: Lemons & Lemonade Part 5 & Epilogue on Page 26 (0

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alinaza

@alinaza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Excellent story so far. Am really enjoying it:-). RK at the end was so decisive. Im glad he told her, he'd have chosen her if he could do it again. Cant wait to read mukunds expression when he meets the beautiful madhu ahaan:-). And really cant wait to read what RKs going to do in 7 days lol

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janvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

gr8 parts..

cont,soon

thanks for pm dear..

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Nshahtalati

@nshahtalati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Wow wow I am big fan of your writing. Really really good concept. Egarly waiting for your next update about what rk will do and madhu's reaction after that. Sorry for not able to comment on first part, I just read both part together and just loved it.

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Julie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Amazing. Fantastic. Wonderful.

You are a very creative and gifted writer! I had to say that first.

I was so looking forward to the second chapter and you did NOT disappoint at all! IN fact I got MORE than i expected.

You took the time to explain Madhu's feelings and her confusion and why she was feeling this way. You had RK express his feelings in a perfectly timed manner, a little there and then a little here.

Everything was going so well and then - the phone call.

I want to be mad at RK but I can't. We all do stupid things when we are young and guys tend to be clueless about such emotional things. But he knows now, in fact he has known even before Madhu came back. RK said that he would think of Madhu through the years.

RK realized his mistakes a long time ago so I cannot hate him.

But I cannot be mad at Madhu either. Being a girl, I completely understand her feelings. She feels humiliated. The boy she loved made fun of her? That hurts really bad!!!

Whew, I wrote a lot but then your story deserves long comments!!!

by the way, I LOVED RK's last line!!!! ❤️

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

awesome update...I just loved it...plz continue soon & don't make me wait dear...😊

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aan-rish

@aan-rish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Feel sad for Madhu. I can understand her feelings. But that was past naa? RK changed for gud but still he deserves some pain 😈

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DVDfann

@DVDfann

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Awesomee update.. i loved this shot.. so romantic ☺️

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

awesome update!thanks for pm!please update the next part very soon & pm me!n ya where is the update of something wonderful?hun?yaar please update it soon & pm me!i'm dying to read it!i should get the update by tomorrow n i hope i made it clear!hun!

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Marie_789

@Marie_789

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Wow excellent update.

PL can you PM me when you update.

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139271

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Clara20
awesome update lazy... thank you so much hun😊😊
too hot to handle.😳😳.hehehehehe..feeling bad for madhu and hated Rk that he made fun of her...bt that was past😆.. LMAO!!! yes, that was the past and he is hot... she shud just forgive him🤣
nw am waiting for 6 days to over and 7th day to come...i want 7th day to come coz it wl b beautiful to see hw RK get madhus trust back😊 i don't know whether you will enjoy it, let's just say desperate times calls for desperate measures😉😆😆😆

Originally posted by: mmradhu
Awesome update... loved it so much... thank you so much hun😊😊😊
Madhu loves rk so much... it was very perfectly written madhu's insecure and how she is yearning for rk's love yes... she has loved him for the longest time only to be rejected by him.. it will be a while for her to accept tht he "could" love her...loved the way rks naughtiness and mischievous talk... the way rks teasing and blushing madhu... the way rks possessiveness RK is going to be a little crazy in the next part😉😆😆... i hate mukund don't worry he won't be coming again... he made the mess and disappeared😆😆😆... madhu is so hurt... rk guilty for what he did in past... he manofying madhu but she snapping out... i hope any misunderstanding will not be arise between rishbala... hope rk will succeed in manofying madhu... i think one time he get her trust he never allow her to leave him yes... he is going to fight for her... and all he needs is just one chance with her... curiously waiting for 7th day... continue soon hoping you won't be disappointed😳😳
Thanks for pm no probs😊
Take care u too hun😃

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie
nice.. thank you😊
now i'm waiting for 7th day... hopefully you will like what i have planned😊

Originally posted by: sriramlaxman366
lovely update lazy 👏, iam blushing ,and iam smiling like hell aawww so sweet hun.. thank you😊, , like rishbala talks ,lazy iam warning nahi re requesting ,please next part jaldhi up date karo dear LOL will try to update soon😃 , lots of hugs to you for the update🤗 thank you hun 🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: madhu21.k
UNRES...
Awesome update Lazy...👏 thank you so much hun
It was so romantic...Loved it so glad u loved it and found it romanticc😃...and i like ur twist y u send him 2 wash d car 😆...so all dat follows ...😉 HAHAHAHA had to have the phone on speaker, so he HAD to wash the car😆😆😆...so nw RK will understand his Love 4 Madhu...😛 maybe he already does😉
Now waiting for d 7th day...😉 hoping that you will enjoy it😊
waiting 4 nxt update...dis time update soon ...😃 will try to update it soon😊