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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luvera

Awww missed you as well... muaaahhh...
Before I forget I edited the update a bit... added more heat!! Don't know if you caught it in time...
Suggest you re-read it šŸ˜‰
It was Madhu's fantasy!!! Why should boys have all the fun??
Well I wanted to explore the fantasies of a woman... it is not only the men who have 'urges'...


Oh god Luvera !! Love you šŸ¤—!! You know what even I edited the comment as I re read the update and I felt even I missed it at the first read lol !!
Loved it Luvera...I loved her fantasy 😳... Of course girls have the urges too šŸ˜‰! And trust me I loved it even more when I re read it šŸ˜› !!

This is my edited part :-
Uff .. More so I loved the heat between Rishabh and Madhu. Though there were a yard away, yet they were able to heat up the room. Oh god !! What was that, it was as though they were doing IT but in some other dimension , but not on earth 😳.
Edited by aDarkAngel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update ...šŸ‘
Loved d convo betwn Madhu and Abby...dey r always der 4 each other...😊
Madhu's fantasies r so Hot...😳 wat will happen at Rishab's farmhouse which he was saying at summit...😳
waiting 4 nxt ...update soon...😊
Edited by manju21.k - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
missed u badly n good to c the update:)
kya update tha...blushing
It was hot hot hot!!!!
Loved the guy tlk:)
Thanks fr pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: manju21.k

Awesome update ...šŸ‘
Loved d convo betwn Madhu and Abby...dey r always der 4 each other...😊
Madhu's fantasies r so Hot...😳 wat will happen at Rishab's farmhouse which he was saying at summit...😳
waiting 4 nxt ...update soon...😊

At the farmhouse you dreams will come true...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: didlr

missed u badly n good to c the update:)

kya update tha...blushing
It was hot hot hot!!!!
Loved the guy tlk:)
Thanks fr pm :)

Hahahah... Hopefully this update and its hotness will tie you down for a while.. šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
THE LOOK IN THEIR EYES ONLY TURNED THE ROOM HOT - WHAT PASSION
RISHAB CAN BARELY KEEP HIS HANDS OF HER - HO W EILL HE LET HER GO
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

OMG i could literally feel the room scortching... You really make me go into another dimension with your lucid writing. I feel as though am watching a 3D movie...
I might have mentioned this a million times already and will probably say it another million times.

I visualise my story in full HD colour right from the characters clothing to mannerisms to the background wallpaper and even the little curios present on the showcase in the background... What I write is how I visualise it.. It is just an attempt to describe what I see..
Really many writers explore the fantasies of a man but never a woman...even here on IF i noticed it...so you took the mantle to show case a different scenario...and i loved it.
If you haven't noticed it already I like to go against the norm. I am an open-minded person and do not like to judge people for their differences... I can be a feminist at times too.. What goes for a man, goes for a woman too..
My ideas are mine alone and I do not enforce them on others but yes I will definitely not hesitate to put it out there.. Take it accept it or leave it is upto you..
Its good to see madhu getting back to normalcy after sicky's fiasco...and the rishab's nervousness is very natural...owing to the protective instincts he has. Bt he was taken aback with his GF's sweet seductress avatar...now i dnt think he can hold it any longer šŸ˜‰
Maybe he doesn't.. not for very long...
p.s: wait...i forgot something... Yay me first🄳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

THE LOOK IN THEIR EYES ONLY TURNED THE ROOM HOT - WHAT PASSION

RISHAB CAN BARELY KEEP HIS HANDS OF HER - HO W EILL HE LET HER GO

I say this with love...
You spend quality time with your husband/bf almost everyday and that is good for the relationship, but it is important to spend time with your friends too... It enables you to grow as a person... One should not loose their identity while in a relationship... Time for oneself is as important as giving time to your spouse/partner..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luvera

I say this with love...
You spend quality time with your husband/bf almost everyday and that is good for the relationship, but it is important to spend time with your friends too... It enables you to grow as a person... One should not loose their identity while in a relationship... Time for oneself is as important as giving time to your spouse/partner..

i agree
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Posted: 12 years ago
Luvu u updtd... šŸ¤—
U made me wait for such a long time
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Bt must say wait wS really worth
Bt after reading dis updt...me too agree with Madhu dat... THIS WAIT!!!!ITS REALY GONNA KILL ME TOO...HEHEHE🤣

comming to updt

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Der again u go girl...phir kuch hatkr...Whow!!!!whow!!!!Madhu fantasizing...dat was hot hot!!!!me Blushing!!!!!!! ..blushing!!!!

The look was enough to turn d room hot...

Ahh!!!poor guy how is he gonna let het go...🤣

me waitg...luvu...pls updt next part soon.


oh by d way i missed Adam... 🤣

bye
Divya

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