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Posted: 12 years ago
rk is scary, but i hope things get sorted soon
loved the update
Thanks fr pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
WHY IS RK BEHAVING LIKE THIS
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Posted: 12 years ago
really want to know why he is torchuring her...and what he is going to do wid her
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey fab update, was waiting for this one. I had commented last time when i read, not very sure if u added me for ur PMs, if not , pls do add me
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love this ff very much. Very intriguing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 8

She sat silently in the car, unfortunately her hands tied with a rope with a blind over her eyes blocking her sight. The only thing running in her mind was where was he taking her? Fear built with each passing minute, she was unknown to the amount of time she was in this car, all she could hear was the engine of the car with the breezy wind hitting her as he drove.

RK looked at her from the corner of his eyes, time to time he'd stolen glances of her, a part of him wanted to stop the car and turn back, forget everything but he couldn't and he wouldn't even if he wanted to. He closed his eyes for a moment and slowly opened them, the little softness, the pain that'd depicted from his eyes washed away covered with cold hatred.

He changed the gear increasing the speed, his fingers clenched tightly on the steering wheel as he drove faster, over taking the few cars before him, the memories came rushing in as fast as the wind hit his face.

Madhu panicked as she felt the increase of his speed, her lips trembled, she wanted to scream out however the fear he'd etched within her stopped her from doing so, she bit down on her lip, pressing her eyes tightly despite of the blindfold, she wanted to clutch onto something unfortunately her hands were bound.

Unable to take anymore, she screamed. "Please stop"

RK stopped abruptly hearing her, his jaws clenched, his eyes burning with fury, he turned his head to see her, he looked at her trembling form and looked away hurriedly weakening despite his best efforts. He hadn't spoken but continued to drive towards the destination just this time a driving normally and with a rational mind.

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She looked at her surroundings as he pulled off the blindfold; she was somewhere discreet that was for sure because she'd hardly seen any buildings, just a lifeless road and with a mansion before her but the questions in her mind was Where is she & Why has he brought her here?

She looked down at her hand where RK clasped her wrist and pulled her along as he walked inside, her eyes brushed the insides of the mansion, gold and cream was a common factor, with white curtains hung around, small cushions settled on the floor in a circular motion, there was a big empty space in the middle, the setting seemed all too familiar to her.

He turned to face her. "Does anything come to you yet?" he asked.

She swallowed the lump in her throat as she joined the dots together. "Y.. you're.. you're going to.." she couldn't speak or voice out what came to her mind.

He smiled. "Finally you're getting it"

"Why?" she whispered.

He turned and looked around the entire hall. "That's for you to find out"

She couldn't take it, she can't go on without knowing anything, she gripped onto his elbow and turned him to face her.

"You can rape me, hit me and even kill me, I don't care anymore but why? Why are you doing this to me? What have I done?" she yelled angrily, tears of frustration and anger cascaded down her cheeks.

"You Let Your Brother Kill My Baby Sister" he gripped onto her arms shaking and shouting out.

She stilled in his grip as the words hit her ears and rung over and over.

"Why don't you speak now? Cat got your tongue or something?" he asked pushing her away roughly.

He turned looking around the hall for a moment before turning his attention back to her. "Look at the hall" he gripped her arm waving his hand out to the hall. "This.. In such a place like this, my baby sister was exploited" he spat out angrily as tears welled in his eyes but nothing came from her, not one word and not even a flicker of emotion.

He grabbed her other arm standing before and gripped tightly digging his fingers onto her arm. "You watched! You watched as she danced for men. They lusted and your brother made money then used her night after night after night" he grit out however his heart wished she denied knowing, seeing her expressionless face with her body in shock he knew. He knew that she knew about it yet she didn't do anything and Madhu knew that herself RK now knew.

His grip on her loosened and his arms fell to his side. "Why? Why didn't you do anything?"

She looked away not able to meet his pain stricken eyes and answer him. What can she possibly say? She won't be able to justify her silence and neither will she because she knew she was wrong but did she deserve this?

"She was only 17yrs old. 17yrs Madhu" he softly cried. "My baby sister died because of both of you, your brother's actions and your silence" he rubbed his face wiping off even a tiny pearl of his tear, he wasn't going to weaken or forgive or even forget. He was going to make sure she'd paid.

"Now you will taste what my sister once tasted!" he promised however his very own heart shattered with the promise. This was going to be the beginning of their end!

She sadly smiled as a lone tear managed to escape from the corner of her eye. "I wouldn't have hurt as much if you had killed me because breaking my trust hurt even more" she whispered.

Precap - First Dance! First Night!

I will warn you now this RK is ruthless however there is another side to him which you've seen to him in small glimpses already. In the next side you'll see both sides a lot more.

Right from RK's side the truth is out. From Madhu's side there's a lot to be revealed along with their Pasts.

Please do leave me feedback on this update.

I will be brutally honest with you I may be discontinuing this here as the response is decreasing with each update which obviously tells me its not sitting well with readers.

If you'd like pms please let me know via comment I'll add you myself as I've got two sets of readers hence don't wanna be confused.

Edited by ...Tanya-K... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update...RK's past is out..his sister with her Brother...really really dark n painful...but I feel there is something more to it..hope RK realizes soon what's he doing and somehow should realise Madhu's innocence in all of this.
Please don't discontinue this FF..this one is lovely,different and dark and hence it stands out.

Yippee ..me first🥳
Edited by sweetdear - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hmmm so rk is not so bad, he's just suffering due to a bad past n that to related to madhu:-(
But I'm sure there is more to come frm madhu's side:)
Great update tanya. I just love ur ff:)
Great job grl!!!!
I'm sure many would respond this tym:) lets hope fr the best
Thanks fr pm:)
Ps- I'm glad ur writing again:)
Edited by didlr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Umm awesome now it come out why rk is doing so..waiting for madhu's past..nd pls dont think about discontinu this ff..i loved it as its quiet different..want rk to be bad..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetdear

Lovely update...RK's past is out..his sister with her Brother...really really dark n painful...but I feel there is something more to it..hope RK realizes soon what's he doing and somehow should realise Madhu's innocence in all of this.

Please don't discontinue this FF..this one is lovely,different and dark and hence it stands out.

Yippee ..me first🥳

i agree. Its a different concept n ur writing is amazing n mature:)

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