Dark SS The Forbidden Fruit|| On Hold - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
da suspense is killin me...wad exactly Rk wants from madhu...wad revenge he is talkin abt????
poor gal...y is he removin his shirt😲
she is forbidden n he is askin her to get ready...da women r feelin pity on her...fingers crossed...i hope he doesnt do sumthing foolish which he cant repent...
thnks for da pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wat he is uptoo ?
cant wait to read more..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 7

"Fine! There's always other ways to make you change" he responded, fire burned within his darkened eyes. He unbuttoned his shirt slowly as he stood right before her.

Her hands heated with fear, her lips trembled with her eyes growing wide each passing second, her heart beating rapidly. What is he going to do? A question that was running in her mind countless times, the answers which came up only responded in the negative and the darkest fear of any girl.

She gasped as he pressed his body atops hers, his hands clasping hers tightly and pressing the back of her hand against the wall.

"Are you going to do it?" he whispered into her ear.

She closed her eyes, tears streamed down her cheek. "Please"

"Please what?" he pressed her hand down tighter hurting her.

She struggled to free her hand from his own. "Let me go please"

"You think I brought you here to let you go? Are you going to get ready or not?"

"I'm not going to come with you" she countered back angrily fighting him, she wriggled her hands, pressing down her nails into the back of his hand.

"You asked for this" he muttered locking both of her hands in one hand, reaching behind he pulled out something from his back pocket of his jeans, her eyes grew wide as he pulled the pocket knife out.

"Y...y..yeh" she mumbled as he brought the 6inch sharp knife closer, all the fury and fight died within her.

He didn't answer but decided to show her what he'd meant, Madhu closed her eyes tightly, she didn't want to accept defeat, she wanted to save herself, she'd been living in hell with Vikram to be saved from the lustful eyes of predators, despite dancing she hadn't been exposed to any man, she'd never been ruthlessly touched at all, she was saved despite being in that hell.

But right now, right here there was no one, no one to look out for her, no one could save her from RK's wrath, some wrath whose cause was her, something she hadn't a clue about. What had she done that he'd wanted revenge from her? Such a revenge that'd meant to destroy her.

She felt the tip of the knife poking at her shoulder, she closed her fingers waiting for the stab to come but it hadn't come, instead she could feel the material being cut, the sound of her dress being ripped covered the room with her heavy breaths, her tears continued to cascade down.

"Please... please stop" she cried pleading to him feeling the cold breeze hit her bare left shoulder, she couldn't open her eyes even if she wanted to, she couldn't face the man whom she trusted so much but he'd only turned out to be a betrayer.

H eyed her exposed shoulder, trailing his gaze to her collar bone, gliding its way up her slender neck then jawline, passing her trembling lips, her nose then to her closed eyes which were pressed together so tight with droplets of tears streaming down continuously.

He inched close, her sobs hitched in her throat as his warm heavy breath fanned her face, she bit down onto her lip trying her best to muffle out her sob.

"Never Ever Underestimate Me!" he whispered, loosening his hand off hers, her hands fell limply to her side, she leaned her head back onto the wall letting herself cry, she was defeated, she couldn't find him even if she wanted. "If I wanted I could rape you right here and no one would save you" he explained. "Now get ready!" he turned around and headed towards the door leaving her to cry over her destiny. She sank to the floor crying hard, she trusted him so much and he'd mercilessly trampled all over her trust. He was meant to be her friend right? Is that why he'd come back? To free her from vikram's cage so he could lock her in his own. However Vikram's cage wasn't like RK's, RK had fire surrounding the cage to make sure there was no way she could escape. She looked at his back as he opened the door to leave, she wanted an answer but she wondered would it be wise of her to ask. As he was just about to walk out she called out to him.

"RK" her voice was a whisper but he'd heard it and stopped at his place however he hadn't turned.

"What?" his voice rough and frustrated.

"Aisa kya gunah kar diya maine ke tum mere saat aise kar rahe ho?" she voiced mumbling afraid of his seething anger which she was now aware of.

He clenched his fingers tightly into a fist and looked over his shoulder. "You think long and hard, it might just come back to you" he stated then exited without a single glance.

Precap - ???

Please do leave me feedback on the update

Right I will give this SS another 3 more updates to decide whether I continue in this forum or not as according to the feedback received I do feel its not faring well with MB readers.

Rishbala SS - Escort has been Updated so do check Chapter 1 : Helplessness

For Pms please let me know via comment and I'll add you myself as I've got two sets of readers and I don't wanna give wrong links by getting confused.
Edited by ...Tanya-K... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay!! Me first🥳..loved it...please don't stop it😳..please..really love the storyline very curios n intrigued...still wish for the longer updates😉..hope u finish the SS 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
wats the problem of dis devil rk to tourture poor soul... wish madhu find her own way in life...
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting...

eagerly waiting to know the reason why rk is doing this with madhu...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb..~!! This is nice..WHts goin on in RK's mind...Waiting for the next..~!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice Update. Plz do me pm whenever you update next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update dear...eager to knw d reason y rk is so rude wid her...
dont stop it dear plzzz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update, please continue soon! You're a talented writer, i could never right like this.

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