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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Destinyhope0305
😆 n i adore ur writing.

why thank you

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

U finished!! And its great! 👏

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
U finished!! And its great! 👏

lets-be-honest if I didnt feel the ending, I am pretty sure it was not that good...yeah, I finished it for the sake of it. Not all ideas can be well executed. I shall only get up after writing a full chapter...lesson learned for next time.

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kendra

@kendra

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

finished !! and it's great

but i am greedy for some more😆😃

Edited by kendra - 12 years ago

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Saumya

@Saumya19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

phenomenal ...very nice...the ending tho was awesome but some how I kept looking for more...this at times is what makes a great writeup...In Hindi literature there was period when writers wrote stories and poetries ending on a positive note or having a positive message but still left a lot uncovered ..this was termed as a whole new movement called Chayavaad...or in other words compelling the reader to reflect. This was the best era in hindi literature...few of your writings like this one reflect those qualities..loved it

and yes you always come up with best Ideas and most beautiful scenes..

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ironwitch

@ironwitch

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

I hate you for writing something so perfectly hilarious and wonderful that it brought out my long suppressed hated girly aspect. This is what I am going through right now

"Oooh Jassy I absolutely freaking unbelievably amazingly utterly adored this masterpiece-squeals like a girl"( Ok fine I am one)🤗

Seriously I loved it. And much to my mortification I don't have any criticism to make