OS: Anger Management (completed) - Page 3

Originally posted by: zara.92

That's a great one ! 😃

Originally posted by: mytinypaintings

phenomenal ...very nice...the ending tho was awesome but some how I kept looking for more...this at times is what makes a great writeup...In Hindi literature there was period when writers wrote stories and poetries ending on a positive note or having a positive message but still left a lot uncovered ..this was termed as a whole new movement called Chayavaad...or in other words compelling the reader to reflect. This was the best era in hindi literature...few of your writings like this one reflect those qualities..loved it

and yes you always come up with best Ideas and most beautiful scenes..

Originally posted by: kendra

finished !! and it's great

but i am greedy for some more😆😃

Originally posted by: ranitha

I hate you for writing something so perfectly hilarious and wonderful that it brought out my long suppressed hated girly aspect.

Am I going to be the one to tell you this? Fine, you are girl and you ought to be girly. Ain't nothing wrong with wearing pink, dressing up, etc. as long as you do not spend an hour trying to post those pictures on facebook *nightmares & newsfeed filled with the duck face*

This is what I am going through right now

"Oooh Jassy I absolutely freaking unbelievably amazingly utterly adored this masterpiece-squeals like a girl"( Ok fine I am one)🤗

Thank you. Glad you came forward, I was starting to doubt your barbaric ways *the irony*

Seriously I loved it. And much to my mortification I don't have any criticism to make

I never thought this day would come. Koyi laddoo bantwao

Originally posted by: Desire6

Dat was great Dona ... U r simply n amazing writer... Likd dis piece very much nd lukin forward 4 more frm u

Originally posted by: vaani21

Waiting for the next update.

Thanks, for the OS Dona!!😃

Originally posted by: --Udhay--

Nice OS! 😊

Originally posted by: -Stephanie-

Reminded me of 'The Karate Kid' for some reason.. :)

Originally posted by: iiDona

Saumya di, there now you have an official title. Mind you, you are the only on this gigantic virtual planet awarded the honour by me so,

I am on cloud 9...Thankyou so much for this Honor Jasleen

I hope you keep that in mind at all times😆

Always in my mind

I quickly looked up chhayavaad and boy did I learn something new. I was going for the West meets East person centered writing and there in first few lines of wikepedia, I see it described in synonymous terms. I mean...mind= blown. I learned something new and quite impressive. Thank you. I admire the humanist school of thought for its positivity.

Originally posted by: mytinypaintings

I am on cloud 9...Thankyou so much for this Honor Jasleen

Always in my mind

I am glad you went ahead and looked up the term few would do that. I love this form of writing of all IN hindi literature. it is beautiful from every which angle we read it. You are going gr8 with your writings. I am not giving Bewafaa a try because I dislike infidility as much as I can and then some...but I guess eventually I will...