FF: Fire and Desire note on pg. 24

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Ameera.

@Ameera.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

awesome update

madhu tum sirf mere ho

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Tum meri thi, hoon, aur rohogi

.Mein tumhare saath joh bhi karu aur na karo, hak hain mera

HOW POSSESSIVE

RK CANT LIVE WITH HER AND CANT LIVE WITHOUT HER EITHER

HE CANT SEE ANY OTHER MAN NEAR HER

POOR MADHU SHE WOULD LOVE TO BE HIS FOR EVER BUT NOT AS PART OF HIS HATE OR FOR EGO

AND YOUR STORY IS AWESOME, DONT WORRY ABOUT THE LIKES, JUST KEEP WRITING

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Lovely update...great to see a jealous and possessive RK

Ps reg no of likes...u are right...pplz were more interested in the pregnancy track... including me😳...but am awaiting it ...hope it ll be soon on card😉

Thxs for the pm

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anamika143..

@anamika143..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

fabulous part!!!!👏
wishing fr more such rishbala encounters

😉
update soon

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

i am enjoying reading story and the systematic way it move toward actual track, as jump over track without proper detail make story childish... but is proper way to give detail and i like this...

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Sparkling-eyes5

@Sparkling-eyes5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Lovely update.RK dialogues were very cute .

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

superb updt

luv it

thanks for pm

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alinaza

@alinaza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Dear Nisha

Thank you for the shout out! I always think if the MEIEJ FF writers are kind enough to write amazing stories and share them with us, the least I can do is read and review properly:).

I LUVD this chapter!! Seriously who doesnt love a dark, jealous, sexy and possessive RK:) *swoon*. You managed to portray him as possessive but at the same time confused and kinda sweet. RK falling asleep in Madhu's lap and her stroking his hair was my favourite scene!

So proud of your Madhu! She's hurt but not showing it and determined not to be broken.

Lets hear three cheers for Bittuji:), master conspirator lol. I never understand why people don't love Bittuji more, he's so sweet, cute and funny.

I'm a little worried about how RK is going to take the baby news. I dont think he's feel this is an unwanted baby? but with his daddy issues and dislike of family relationships, you can never tell.

As always, a great chapter with excellent writing:). Looking forward to the next one...

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Ms. Fernandes

@PrincessD

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

hey awesome update, but ya in my opinion i wanna c the pregnancy track sooner, dont drag the story too much 😊 (pls: just my opinion, u can progress how u decided). Waiting for more.

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Titli

@afterlife.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Awesome update...plz PM me next time..

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