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I just discovered your story and read all 4 parts at once. I LOVE your story!!! It captured me from the very first chapter. This is the very first FF I'm reading with pregnant Madhu. So in that sense, its completely new and original to me. I love the concept of a baby as a catalyst in this story - especially with all of RK's daddy and childhood issues.
I love your Madhu. She's so strong and brave. It would be great for her to decide to make RK fall in love with her (not that he isn't all ready lol), admit it publically and apologize to her publically (just like he did when he humiliated her).
Are there words to describe how much I love your RK? I adore dark, possessive, sexy, sarcastic and witty RK! My favourite scene is when he gets jealous seeing Madhu with another man:):).
You write incredibly well, as your writing style and plot grabs the reader from the prologue itself. I'm looking forward to many more chapters for what is promising to be a very good story:).
One question and one shikayat though lol. Question: does this story have a happy ending? Please say it does:):). Aur bus ek shikayat lol: my hindi is not good at all. I struggled with your dialogues in the acting scene:(. Do you think you could add some translations when you do hindi dialogues?
Thank you for sharing your story:) and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter with a jealous, possessive RK! Hehe
Kumkum Bhagya
