Revenge:SS part 2 updated pg 10(22/2) - Page 8

A remorseful rk...but i guess he had that coming..superb as usual...will deftly miss yr writings..only hope its nt too long a hiatus!!!

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awesome

Originally posted by: ritzy09

awesome bindu...u r right. I cringe when I read maybe he did it for her...in my eyes, let it be revenge ebcause nothing can justify it. Yes, maybe ending of relatiosnhip was required but there were gentler ways of doing it...he just chose to hurt her the way he did...

waiitng eagerly for next part

thank you
exactly Ritzy, what justification can be given for treating her so ruthlessly... what good does come to her if she decides to end her life..and he was aware that cud have happened 😡

Originally posted by: sviren

oh my god!! it shook me completely !! please continue !!

Sorry 😆

Originally posted by: adeeba21

u started it with one of my fav song, i like it a lot.

that was so beautifully written. each words were echoing madhu's pain.

every line, every word was like someone is stabbing my heart.

ur words truely made me feel the pain of madhu.

each line reflecting madhu's bleeding heart, her agony, her failure in love and in trust.

i promise i will never forget this OS.

if u want to continue it, u should sure, but pls don't be affected by others words demanding happy ending, just write what u planned as each story cannot have happy ending.

there are many affecting lines but the best lines were--

As you are my love I am your obsession

Then take this as the sequel to the same... to your game of Ishq and junoon.

Goodbye RK... see you in Hell

others were also fab but i can't write each and every line.

it is surely one of the best OS, actually the best OS i have ever read on Rishbala.

really liked it a lot.

thank you😊

lag jaa gale is one of my all time favs too...

the way DD portrayed the impact of his cruetly... so numb like her spirit was broken inside stayed in my mind...

afterall karma is a bitch...what u do boomerang backs to u...but u just nailed down the nuances and thanxx for this powerpacked OS👏

Do i be called heartless sadist if I say I want more of this SS? Till now he had not consciously realized at least to himself what his actions had done to someone. And until that realization comes in there comes no redemption. True he might be affected with the scene she presented. But anyone might be disturbed watching someone ablaze. That is not the true punishment he deserved. He had to realize that it is him, because of whom she set herself ablaze. Until and unless that realization comes to him, I don't think I will feel he got his punishment. And no matter what he does, he fell in my eyes and remains to be so...
Thanks for writing this Bindu

amazing part...m really satisfied with the guilt of RK for what he did to madhu...