Revenge:SS part 2 updated pg 10(22/2)

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mb_bi

@mb_bi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: leverne
lovely part di...I loved the way this was shaping up...i could see the guilt in him...

SR coming up...yippieee...

SR or FL?

Edited by mb_bi - 12 years ago

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

good one Bindu...completely loved it

You painted his mental agony very well...

actually more than strong Madhu, I also wanted to see an avatar of Madhu which would have forced RK to guilt...but it did not happen that way so we are back to challenges in the serial

I am very excited to know that u are picking up Geet FFs again...waiting waiting...frankly speaking though i like MB but somehow FFs on Geet are more indepth and beautiful...haven't really caught up in Madhubala as a fantasy world...maybe your long FF on MB forum will change that and even I may get the inspiration😊

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shravanikrishna

@vaani21

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Nice SS!

Well written,especially the one what RK was going through.👍🏼

Thanks for the PM, Bindu😃!!

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Udhay only

@Udhay

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Fantastic part chechi!
I could see everything, wonderful description!

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

i love it and u knw wat i am not feeling bad 4 anyone neither 4 madhu nor 4 rk... as this is wat rk deserve, madhu take her perfect revenge... and free from every pain which she have to bear in form of her lost love memory and also teach lesson to dat jerk and rk suffering in his own game of revenge... if i was at madhu place dis was wat i did... perfect...

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apolloartemis

@apolloartemis

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Wonderful. Whenever I feel bad for RK reading this, I just have to go to the show and see how he is behaving. Though Madhu did not deserve her fate, RK most assuredly deserves his.

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SANJH

@Snowy_Secret

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Nice update.bt I want a happy ending.I dnt knw bt I feel bittuji was lieing abt madhu.cnt soon.I m waiting...

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

What do you feel about this part? Many of you expect the story to be tragedy ..Ummm so shall I leave it here?

Let me know if you ar feeling bad for RK or Madhu...

I am considering taking an off from this forum for sometime... need to finish my MG FFs and the tension here is doing no good ... once that is done i shall start something here , a long one ...

i know you are not going to miss me as you are going to get Maaneet 😆

LEAVE IT HERE

RK HAS GOT HIS PUNISHMENT AND I DONT WANT TO READ MORE

WANT SR AND FL BOTH, ITS BEEN AGES SINCE I READ THEM

COME BACK HERE WITH A NICE LONG STORY

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priyachand

@priyachand

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

OMG bindu!!! i didn't know abt this SS. how come ur sending pm for d second part n nt d first part. it was awesome. i din't know u cd write such a dark story. may be madhu n RK'sstory demands such dark setting. but it was do tragic but touching too. did ur RK too do it for revenge only!!! r u going to end with that? feel bad for both of them.

btw are u going to finally complete your maaneet ffs (hurray!!!!) pls include me in ur pms. i am your fan waiting for ur updates.

btw did u write anyother RK madhu stories? pls give me d links