SS: The Fault in Our Stars THE END - Page 60

Originally posted by: tes_v1

Okay, so I finally caught up with this one.I love the way yout have with words. The feelings were beautifully expressed throughout this work and I have no issues with the way it ended. Considering that the whole thing had a very real feel, a happy end would've not sat well, not with me at least.
😳 You flatter me too much😳 Holy crap!! there is a wedding party outside my house. I have not seen a baraat in Canada for so long, I almost forgot what it looked like. Shiny clothes.

Back to your comment: I agree with the ending. The tone should be in sync with the rest of the story.
Not that I don't love happy endings. The romantic in us always wants every thing to end on a good note, but is that really true in life? There's pain around and it's only fair that it be portrayed as well.
Great job with this one, Jazz!
Cheers,
KwaliT

thanks :) yes, I am a hopeless romantic, no change of a cure. if I find the Rishabh that resides in my head, I would name our babies before I say hi.

Okay, back to judging the groom.

Originally posted by: todayzstar

Awesome SS ..Loved it

Originally posted by: mytinypaintings

so I finished reading the whole thing in one go...It was sooo beautifully written...not an easy thing unless one is a spontaneous writer...your choice of words...the scene settings ( football match, etc) scenes itself( hair coloring, bear drinking etc) ...the subjects on which you wrote ( right from euthanasia to cancer were all so well researched...and the topping of all was such a beautiful ending...no where did it appear not written by a professional writer...YOU NEED TO CONSIDER WRITING PROFESSIONALLY ...loved it to bits and peices... to the last letter👏

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Originally posted by: iiDona

I am humbled, so very much. I am at loss of words. On the verge of crying. Those were some of the nicest things someone has every wrote to me. I am truly grateful. Thank you🤗

I think I have the Dr. Suess complex where I would not live up to the image if you meet me in person. I think I sound better in ink. I am a nervous, clumsy bone. I cannot make the distinction between a hobby and a passion but my degree will not pigeon hole me to a discipline. I will always look to places that offer growth choices. Professional writing is seems like too high a mountain to climb as an undergraduate. I will certainly keep your words in mind. Thank you very much for taking the time our to give TFIOS a read. If you get a chance, read the book with the same title.

Originally posted by: mytinypaintings

I am planning on reading TFIOS as soon as my local library can get hold of it for me...other wise amazon is my rescue...so far not living up to the image is concerned ...I can very safely say that I have crossed the age of building image lens and then viewing any one from it. you could not have sounded better in ink had you not been a better person...nervous but about what??? clumsy you bet I bear the crown of clumsiness...professional writing may appear a farfetched goal as of now ( a degree hardly matter here) but the intensity in your expressions grabs one at times...the speed at which you have improved...I have read your first fiction too...is wonderfull...i am certain if you give it a try you will definitely make your mark in it...🤗

Originally posted by: iiDona

age reference? only if you feel comfortable.

36 years to be precise

😳 you are very much encouraging. I would very much like to hear your story. Mind if I send a couple of questions your way?

go ahead by all means

Madhubala Diaries? You read that😳 Well, it is the internet and the story is on display to show the reasons why Jasleen is a fail😉

I did read Madhubala diaries and you have come a long way since then...love personal property and also like exotic...

I will not pass up an opportunity, the issue is me being lazy and not actively seeking them. That shall change *fingers cross & suppressing the urge to procrastinate*

It will surely change Fingers crossed for you